Linney Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Parame and Sin_Aura, wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 amazing stuff everyone <33 alrighty, this is my first time posting here so please be nice This isn't you verse- Who was the one who dug themselves a hole? deeper and deeper. Now it's caving in on you. No room to breathe and now you've gone from people's minds today will be the last of you chorus- so contain your hostility you will not tower over me anymore. Not now, not ever. You are invisible to me go now and pick up your debris you will not change in my eyes so go and bother someone else. verse- I'm not quite sure where you went those many years ago did you get lost on the way? because this thing I'm looking at isn't you. the mask is permanent now because you refuse to tear it off. chorus- so contain your hostility you will not tower over me anymore. Not now, not ever. You are invisible to me go now and pick up your debris you will not change in my eyes so go and bother someone else. go and pick up the real you, then you can come back. Because this isn't you.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 ^I like it =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Parame and Sin_Aura, wow. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Dark Skies Ahead That look on your face says it all Words won't stop you this time Watching the room spin around Watching you hit the ground Just another regular occurence in this life... *chorus* All I see are dark skies ahead No more clear skies in mind Just another dismal outlook Another to add to the tally... (repeat) Another set of bruises to face the day Another fresh excuse for the rest Another way to show our mutual discontent Couldn't hide it forever I suppose But this isn't what we wanted... *chorus* I've seen this world die While I've slept at night I've seen the oceans Bubbling away... *short guitar break* I've seen this world die But I know it wasn't our world It was our own existence Destined to break apart! *solo* *chorus* I've seen our world die Don't let it happen For our sake... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Actually love that, James. One thing though, sorry... S'just: "I've seen this world die While I've slept at night I've seen the oceans Bubbling away..." Bubbling ? It's like, rawr dark imagery and then... bubbling. Hah, it doesn't really fit in so well (in my opinion). Otherwise ignore me. Lovely stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Dark Skies Ahead I've seen this world die But I know it wasn't our world It was our own existence Destined to break apart! i reeeally like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 what stops me needing the distance i've burned between my thoughts and your lies what stops me bleeding the lick of your poison to seal in those tries you can't break me can't find what you're looking for i'm holding the razors inside my veins while i scream in my head and slowly our love drains what stops you reaching the shards of ice bouncing off your last words what stops me dreaming my personal nightmare circles in my head unheard you can't break me can't find what you're looking for i'm holding the razors inside my veins while i scream in my head and slowly our love drains not this time. not my mind. you'll never know. that gaping hole will never show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Edward/Bella inspired... ? Love it. I love it. You'd better start posting in here more, you, you have been missed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 fnar. time is the liquid that ran through my veins. throw your heart out, you don't need it anymore and you'll see what you can keep and discover when we'll all grow up, i'm afraid we'll all grow up and lose too much on the way. love will fray and i'm afraid. i said i'd write and i swear i did i just didn't send them to your address, well the search party is as lost as the rest of us. hope is hopeless and we're falling behind. what you did hurt, my love is frayed and i'm afraid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Edward/Bella inspired... ? Love it. I love it. You'd better start posting in here more, you, you have been missed. haha yes. it is inescapable in my mind at the moment. and i will! writing calms me down, so i think i'm going to be here everyday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 "i said i'd write and i swear i did i just didn't send them to your address, well the search party is as lost as the rest of us." that's beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 i stirred, feeling polished ebony curls slip over my shoulder and rest inches from the lips at the hollow of my shoulder blade. i didn't want to turn, to disturb the moment; and very disturbing it was. hands twice the size of mine gripped my shoulders, pinning me to the black lace of my dress as it snaked over my unwilling body. I lay perfectly still, wishing i could revert to the empty slumber where I lay motionless and propped up against a stone; carved explicitly and fiery hot. i inhaled and felt the alternate breaths thump like one heart. we are not one heart. i very deliberately inched my hand over my hip before knotting it into the other in front of me and cupping my neck, bracing myself and my soul for anything it would endure. my entity lay passive and waiting, but in truth i threw myself away. hands pushing away the burning skin and tangled blond hair, the perfect white teeth and serious glittering pools, i kicked my way to freedom; landing somewhere between my better knowledge and the comfort of another scent. extract from a longer story i'm writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Stricken (Part 1) I saw you right before me Everyday hoping and dreaming Some days were you were not there, but that was not your fault Though I am stricken by never-love Obsession over all Killing my blessing Thinking about you Time’s year passed and no love in my eyes The year re-awoke and now I love once again Still stricken by never-love Too late for anything I guess I’m too different He is the one you bless You don’t love me, neither do I Yet again I’m still stricken by never-love You can’t blame what has broken To love you is to take a nothing into existence Next time please tell me what I did wrong Never love life; love is all a lie Seeing you is still wonderful, yet the person next to you is not This person must have a better life A better one than I do My life to you is nothing You have made me stricken by never-love You have never loved me, nor do I think you ever will love you But too late, I have been ripped to shreds You hate me, but I don’t You give me meaning But I can define you to every known meaning of love and hate together Life may come strange, but to you it’s not He is still by your side Remember that time when I put a false meaning to your security It has made me stricken by never-love You don’t care how I feel I guess I don’t care about you either We both know where this will go I want to stay beside you But seems I wont and I’ll stay further and further away Seems that I will never be near you Further away every time This will never happen and I am happy that it never will I don’t care even if I am still stricken by never-love Stricken (Part 2) I’ve loved you since the moment I saw you You were across from me I gazed at you from across the room Seeing you everyday was a blessing We had never talked The truth is, I never loved you I told you how I felt You took my feelings like I was nothing But that will never stop me From then on I still saw you Later you left and went on for a while One year, one year of not seeing the one thing beautiful In my mind we were; we were never On my mind ever single day One year of it all I have now seen you again Except it has changed My whole life has changed At first when is saw you, did my eyes deceive me? I think not I see you two joining hands I was never with you or close I know it will never be Yet, I will keep you in my soul forever Not like you care ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 I'd love for you to give me one of those you write, So I could make em into a song....Looks like it might be epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 ^ If you want to, feel free... (These poems weare about my last obsession... Kristen...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 Actually love that, James. One thing though, sorry... S'just: "I've seen this world die While I've slept at night I've seen the oceans Bubbling away..." Bubbling ? It's like, rawr dark imagery and then... bubbling. Hah, it doesn't really fit in so well (in my opinion). Otherwise ignore me. Lovely stuff Well I wanted something different from the word 'boiling'...guess I mucked that up eh? But thankies anyway. More hopefully coming in the future. i reeeally like that. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 Wow, amazing stuff, you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 dream maker, heart breaker another name for the unexplained, be amazed. the angels flew in and sang, they sing "these wings ain't strong enough to carry all your sins" and they'll hang up their halos whilst you hang your head "there's no glory" they said, "there's no glory left in death" your eyes followed but your heart stayed behind, it's fine in my mind, but you've lost yours let's search, i'll search, behind closed doors "there's no glory" they said "glory does not live in the living, there's no glory left anywhere, anymore, but you're forgiven". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Wow Jorgi! Another great one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 thankyou (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shir Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 it's a song i wrote. you'll have to forgive me because im not that good in english. and don't laugh at me, because i'm not THE BEST song writer ever. A new life are starting now But not in the place where I was born, in a small little town The sky aren't blue and the ground isn't brown This is just me, here alone So missing the place And my feelings lately gone So I'm gonna continue my life, and I will learn who I am I know those are simple words, and you won't really understand And I feel my heart is burning And I can't hide this feeling anymore I feel my soul is dieing from being silent for so long I'm seizing by the past Walking slow but thinking fast 'cause all what I have to say is- now I'm hopeless but it's ok But I can't find the way to get out, to exit I've done something wrong and I can't do "delete" my place-my soul I hope its not the end my place-my soul Wanna see my own world once again So hard to read the words from my old wall I'm missing it so, and I'm starting to fall My heart is screaming for help, it's true And I can write the saddest song, to say, home, I miss you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ^ That's very good, you are in fact a good writer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shir Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ^ That's very good, you are in fact a good writer! THANK YOU SO MUCH .... actually, i fixed it because accidentally I put some lines over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 ^ Your welcome, the song was fantastic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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