The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Shir]

^ Your welcome, the song was fantastic!

 

 

again-----> THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH =]

[Wildman]

Keep writing, you can make it far!

[RenegadeRoss]

Not as good as my last song, but its the first draft of this new song,

 

Fire in my Heart

 

When i first saw you

i was stuck on you like glue

You said hello to me

I said hello to you

 

It started out like this

when i just wanted to kiss

i felt your warm embrace

just from your lovely face

 

(WOAH!)i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

(WOAH!)It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

(WOAH!) I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

(WOAH!) Im desperate to know cause im crazy for you

 

Why do we hurt ourselves?

When others do it for us

Why do we go through pain?

when it aint worth the fuss

 

i realise it now, your never going to be mine

i see it in your eyes now, i see it all the time

my heart is twisting, my time im wasting

this love im feeling, is paying such a crime

 

(WOAH!) i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

(WOAH!) It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

(WOAH!) I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

(WOAH!) Im desperate to know, cause im crazy for you

 

my heart

belongs

belongs to you..,

 

my heart

belongs

belongs to you...

 

i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

Im desperate to know......

 

desperate to know....

 

cause i love you so!

[emily !]

^ woah, Ross. that was great :]

 

-edit, just had a look through old computer files and found this-

 

Feeling like I’m sinkin’

In a ocean full of lies

Everybody’s groovin’

The rest are left behind.

 

Reaching for the future,

Sell your liver for what it’s worth.

Stealing inspiration

And living with the hurt.

 

Turning over tables,

expressing helpless souls

Granting you permission to steal the world away.

Spinning round in circles,

Making note of what is real.

Living, breathing, hurting.

Praising something real.

 

Reaching for the future,

Sell your liver for what it’s worth.

Stealing inspiration

And living with the hurt.

 

A dry ringing of crescendos

Screaming in decibels of sound.

Wanting more than you can give,

And waiting to be found.

 

Feeling like I’m sinkin’

In a ocean full of lies

Everybody’s groovin’

The rest are left behind.

 

Reaching for the future,

Sell your liver for what it’s worth.

Stealing inspiration

And living with the hurt.

 

can't remember writing that, but i think it's about how amazing music can be. =D

[FrankiePoo]

Ross and Emily...WOW!

Those were both great!

[Guest JadeIsRad]

Not as good as my last song, but its the first draft of this new song,

 

Fire in my Heart

 

When i first saw you

i was stuck on you like glue

You said hello to me

I said hello to you

 

It started out like this

when i just wanted to kiss

i felt your warm embrace

just from your lovely face

 

(WOAH!)i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

(WOAH!)It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

(WOAH!) I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

(WOAH!) Im desperate to know cause im crazy for you

 

Why do we hurt ourselves?

When others do it for us

Why do we go through pain?

when it aint worth the fuss

 

i realise it now, your never going to be mine

i see it in your eyes now, i see it all the time

my heart is twisting, my time im wasting

this love im feeling, is paying such a crime

 

(WOAH!) i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

(WOAH!) It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

(WOAH!) I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

(WOAH!) Im desperate to know, cause im crazy for you

 

my heart

belongs

belongs to you..,

 

my heart

belongs

belongs to you...

 

i wish that you could see the fire in my heart

It burns for you and the flames light up the dark,

I' m so in love with you, do you love me too?

Im desperate to know......

 

desperate to know....

 

cause i love you so!

 

Wowwwww that's really good! Seriously good :]

[RenegadeRoss]

omg really?

 

wow.. thankyou so much, i genuinely didnt think it was that good, thankyou

[Jorgi]

understand this

unbelievable.

what made you look at me that way ?

they led me, away

to hide beneath the staircase

where you screamed my name.

 

i heard a different tale,

the knights were brave, they say

and the moon was bright and

the day was saved

or so they say.

 

but they all fell down in disgrace

and i saved my face but not yours,

we're ugly to the world, but we're safe

we're safe.

 

so scream,

i'll follow you down

but we're heroes in the end

even if no one knows our names.

 

you'll drag me down,

but you're my hero.

[Jorgi]

understand this

unbelievable.

what made you look at me that way ?

they led me, away

to hide beneath the staircase

where you screamed my name.

 

i heard a different tale,

the knights were brave, they say

and the moon was bright and

the day was saved

or so they say.

 

but they all fell down in disgrace

and i saved my face but not yours,

we're ugly to the world, but we're safe

we're safe.

 

so scream,

i'll follow you down

but we're heroes in the end

even if no one knows our names.

 

you'll drag me down,

but you're my hero.

[RenegadeRoss]

i love that Jorgi! thats excellent, much Kudos!

[Vicki]

Shir, Ross, Emily and Jorgi , you guys are amazing, loved everything .. there was just to much to quote so i'll just say your name

[Jorgi]

cheers you two

 

have another one because i am pure bored. trying to do more with rhythm but i think i gave up.

 

but nevermind

you have a lot of explaining to do;

the psotcard you posted and

the love you promised and

the way you spoke but

you never arrived.

 

and i'll sing, but you'll run

with the wind in your ears and

the light leaving your eyes as

it leaves the sky, so

don't say i didn't try.

 

the tree in the window sounded

just like your heartbeat but

your heart was nowhere to be found and

you are nowhere to be found but

i need you, i swear i do.

 

the claws that kept you close have

loosened long ago and

i should never let you go but

the leaves fall, and i fall and

we sang together and fly together

and i could've written but i didn't.

 

but that's not my fault, i

promise you're not my fault.

i could've loved you but

i didn't.

[UrLittleDecoy]

^ i love that. soo amazing. [:

 

 

i just wrote this..it took me about 5 mins so it obviously sucks but whatever

 

 

i just wanna shout

scream my heart out

don't regret the sound

scream so sooo loud

scream out all the pain you feel inside

don't be afraid,there's nothing you should hide

this world is unfair,they call you a whore

and you just can't take it anymore

scream so loud,just fall in the night

you know that everything will be alright.

[Wildman]

Here is one I've been really favouring lately, I'm working on some chords to play this to.

 

The Repetition

Proving that I can survive

You, looking down at me

Remember what you broke

This knife on my arm

This pain you inflicted

Torments me inside

You didn't pick this (neither did I)

Full mistake, can no longer break

 

Chorus

Just fade me

Feel my anger, feel my hate

These fucking ghosts... (fuck this)

Just spead the cancer, the pain

Shed the depths of the abyss that is my heart

 

I'll breathe if you want me to

But under your shame... No

In case I forget to apoligise

I hope nothing stands in the way

There is only one medicine, and it is that of you

Fuck my only thought

Fuck my only sorrow, and all the pain that follows

 

Chorus

 

Enjoy this pain, won't last much longer

Being your menical self, ripped apart

Forgiven, forsaken, what we take in

Take on, your heart on your sleeve

All these things you say

One set, and the circle

[Linney]

^Amaazing

[Wildman]

Thank you very much! ^^

[Jammer]

The Missing Piece of Me

 

Gone so long without knowing

Why a part of me went away

Gone so long without asking myself

'When did I lose that piece of me?'

Gone so long without realising

That something was missing...

 

*chorus*

The missing piece of me

That's been gone so long

When did I ever lose myself?

I could never find my answer...

 

Went so long by myself

Without realising that I was incomplete

Went so long fighting this war

I never saw my own wounded soul

Went so long on my own

Witout help from anyone else...

 

*chorusx2*

 

You don't know what it's like

To walk this path I chose

The one of my own making...

You don't know how I feel

As an incomplete stat

Wandering for the missing piece of me...

 

*outro chorus*

The missing piece of me

The cause of all this emptiness

Is found once again

So now I can live my life again

As an incomplete now made whole...

[777]

cheers you two

 

have another one because i am pure bored. trying to do more with rhythm but i think i gave up.

 

but nevermind

you have a lot of explaining to do;

the psotcard you posted and

the love you promised and

the way you spoke but

you never arrived.

 

and i'll sing, but you'll run

with the wind in your ears and

the light leaving your eyes as

it leaves the sky, so

don't say i didn't try.

 

the tree in the window sounded

just like your heartbeat but

your heart was nowhere to be found and

you are nowhere to be found but

i need you, i swear i do.

 

the claws that kept you close have

loosened long ago and

i should never let you go but

the leaves fall, and i fall and

we sang together and fly together

and i could've written but i didn't.

 

but that's not my fault, i

promise you're not my fault.

i could've loved you but

i didn't.

 

This is actually one I always re-read when I come into the page every time.

 

Jorgi, Awesome job.

[emily !]

Here is one I've been really favouring lately, I'm working on some chords to play this to.

 

The Repetition

Proving that I can survive

You, looking down at me

Remember what you broke

This knife on my arm

This pain you inflicted

Torments me inside

You didn't pick this (neither did I)

Full mistake, can no longer break

 

Chorus

Just fade me

Feel my anger, feel my hate

These fucking ghosts... (fuck this)

Just spead the cancer, the pain

Shed the depths of the abyss that is my heart

 

I'll breathe if you want me to

But under your shame... No

In case I forget to apoligise

I hope nothing stands in the way

There is only one medicine, and it is that of you

Fuck my only thought

Fuck my only sorrow, and all the pain that follows

 

Chorus

 

Enjoy this pain, won't last much longer

Being your menical self, ripped apart

Forgiven, forsaken, what we take in

Take on, your heart on your sleeve

All these things you say

One set, and the circle

 

 

woaaaaaaah.

that was great.

[Linney]

How come everyone is like pro's and then I come on here... I feel left out.

[Wildman]

The Missing Piece of Me

 

Gone so long without knowing

Why a part of me went away

Gone so long without asking myself

'When did I lose that piece of me?'

Gone so long without realising

That something was missing...

 

*chorus*

The missing piece of me

That's been gone so long

When did I ever lose myself?

I could never find my answer...

 

Went so long by myself

Without realising that I was incomplete

Went so long fighting this war

I never saw my own wounded soul

Went so long on my own

Witout help from anyone else...

 

*chorusx2*

 

You don't know what it's like

To walk this path I chose

The one of my own making...

You don't know how I feel

As an incomplete stat

Wandering for the missing piece of me...

 

*outro chorus*

The missing piece of me

The cause of all this emptiness

Is found once again

So now I can live my life again

As an incomplete now made whole...

 

Wow, that was amazing! Great job on that! I really feel that, just absolutly amazing!

 

woaaaaaaah.

that was great.

 

Thank you very much!

[777]

How come everyone is like pro's and then I come on here... I feel left out.

 

Linney, You're about a big part of the reason why I come on here...If that makes sense... Meaning I like you're stuff and I always look forward to it. No need to feel left out, Quarter of the pie chart

[FrankiePoo]

kiss my froggy lips and turn me beautiful

Just a random poetic line from my noggin

[emily !]

kiss my froggy lips and turn me beautiful

Just a random poetic line from my noggin

 

 

that was cute. xD

you could turn that into an awesome song/poem if you wanted.

[emily !]

Sorry to double post, BUUUT.. i just wrote this:

 

I Don't Know.

 

Every message, out to get me,

And I’m shot straight through the heart.

I miss each smile before you’re gone

I don’t know,

I don’t know what I want this line to mean,

I don’t know if I’d leave it all for you.

 

Complications run my veins,

In this simple life we lead.

I don’t know how we got this way,

I know I’ll never leave.

 

Every line is aggravating,

Every song, a clue.

Decomposing thoughts and words,

Understanding lullabies.

Sing me to sleep,

And I’ll pray for no goodbye.

 

Complications run my veins,

In this simple life we lead.

I don’t know how we got this way,

I know I’ll never leave.

 

Let’s wish our lives away,

In this single game of chance.

Throw your card upon the table,

Smile, and sway me when we dance.

 

Let’s wish our lives away,

In this single game of chance.

I don’t know how we got this way,

I know I’ll never leave.