The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Jorgi]

 

 

OM fk hkldjgkjjh ksjklg how can you write thaaaat? that is absolutley amazinggggggggg Jorgi!

 

 

hah ! thank you (:

 

 

 

 

this back seat is making me sick

we're not done, oh yes we're far from done

just tell me that, you love me

and everything will be fine

hold me close until the impact has passed

 

(i said it right, i said it loud, i said it right this time)

 

i never quite understtond your guidance

it tends to bend and break in different shapes

i never quite understood the way my heart see

it tends to bend and break in different faces

 

it took all this time to arrive

i won't be leaving, just yet, i won't be leaving

i never focussed my attention on anyone but you

 

(i said it right, i said it loud, i said it right this time)

 

but tired trends become tired friends

and out goes romance and so does your welcome.

[Defiance]

...shit man

[Linney]

Jorgi.. Wow. I absolutely loove this part:

 

(i said it right, i said it loud, i said it right this time)

 

but tired trends become tired friends

and out goes romance and so does your welcome.

[Jorgi]

hah, thank yoou (:

[Parame]

I'm starting a band and I write most of our stuff.

We aren't the happiest band in the world, and the lyrics are pretty depressing usually, but this is a lighter piece

_____________________________

 

 

Born to be

 

 

 

I can't do it now, no sir

Everything is crumbling and falling

we are down on our knees crawling

only to end up yet again on the floor

 

Who said I had to be strong

No, they had to be wrong now

 

It's close to the end

holding to the edge by my nails

Standing on a breaking thread

so if I came to fail

It was'nt because I'd given up

 

What were we really born to be

What were we really born to be

 

I'm diving deeper into the

bottomless hole, dragging you too

But I can't do a thing at all

can't save myself as usual

 

Who said I had to smile

when death is knocking on my door

in just a little while

I know I won't be here anymore...

 

 

 

What were we really born to be

What were we really born to be

 

It's not the end now

I can feel it flowing through my veins

Still can't see the surface, but

It's not the end now, no

Was I born to live just holding on

no

I'll try not to let go.

[emily !]

woaaaaaah. i love everything i've read! it's great.

 

here's one of my songs:

 

My heavy heart is sinking below the rings of Jupiter,

The sun was swept away

A lack of meaning, no feeling.

Lifeless blood is bleeding, wishing and breeding.

 

French fingernails spell delight on earth.

Fake destroys the real,

Real becomes insane.

A fight to heal our lives, a fight to hide the pain.

Swallow me beneath the stars from above the earth,

Again, let us give the world some worth.

 

Backing away from trouble,

Screaming out loud.

Fishing for gold in a barren, run down town.

Picking up the pieces, and turning lives around

(oh, let’s turn our lives around).

 

Below the bullet of anger,

The running of the dust.

Tear stained hearts and broken eyes,

Take us back, take it back.

Days of shameless life and lust.

 

French fingernails spell delight on earth.

Fake makes it real,

Real becomes insane.

A lack of meaning, no feeling.

Lifeless blood is bleeding, wishing and breeding.

 

Reconfirming our disease, turning life back into free.

Spinning webs like spiders and taking back deceit.

Running from emotions, struggling for your piece.

Each disaster coming closer to who we used to be.

 

 

Backing away from trouble,

Screaming out loud.

Fishing for gold in a barren, run down town.

Picking up the pieces, and turn our lives around.

 

Wandering away from present,

Making past the way of life

All we need is what we were,

Laughter love and life.

 

 

Backing away from trouble,

Screaming out loud.

Fishing for gold in a barren, run down town.

Picking up the pieces, and turn our lives around.

 

abstruse feelings, living in a world of lies.

Smiling faces playing on invites of disguise.

Fishing for gold in a barren, run down town.

Picking up the pieces, and turn our lives around.

 

let me know what you think?

[Jorgi]

 

A small light in a big darkness

Feeling hopelessly empty

The sparkle vanquished

By an outsider fight

And now we've lost the moment

 

 

Backing away from trouble,

Screaming out loud.

Fishing for gold in a barren, run down town.

Picking up the pieces, and turning lives around

(oh, let’s turn our lives around).

 

Below the bullet of anger,

The running of the dust.

Tear stained hearts and broken eyes,

Take us back, take it back.

Days of shameless life and lust.

 

French fingernails spell delight on earth.

Fake makes it real,

Real becomes insane.

A lack of meaning, no feeling.

 

 

 

that's the spirit. lovely.

[zHairA]

oops! not in real life!...[juz a poem]

 

Iv'e seen him first,

he was innocent and naive

i was stuuned by d way he looks

and his smile dat was so bright

he came to my party

but he never said anything

I was shocked by the rumors

and i was thinkin' that it is not real

i kip tellin my mind not to believe

but, if its true,

well then, fine!

im not expectin' somethin'

im juz xur, dat he makes me luv him

and he makes my heart melt..

[Jorgi]

i see you walking on water-

stop me if you've heard this all before-

i'll walk behind

and fall through the ice

well that's one less thing on my list

of things to break

(i'll follow with your heart

and then your jaw)

who said we'd ever make sense anymore ?

i gave up wrong when you asked me to,

let's keep this right now between me and you

 

i asked as desperately as my pride would allow

i was turned away as desperately as i was found

this sunrise isn't glorious enough for the both of us

so go back to sleep, go back to sleep

i'll wake you when i'm mourning

 

let's try our lives away

to make the last mistake,

i'll leave you behind and find,

oh i'll find something worth anything

(and i'll miss this more

than anything)

but my aim is failing

and it's time to go

it's harder than you know

 

luck is on your side

when i'm on my knees

and i can't see you walking away.

[heartshapedtaty]

Hi so im new here.. and i assume this is where we can post poems? I have a question though..can we start our own 'topic' and post our poems in there? Ah anyway my name is Taty! Here is a poem i picked at random to put on here.. lol.

 

 

The Man With No Name

 

 

Here i am, a man

and in your eyes i am

nothing, no life.

You judge me by my looks

you spit on me because i've

lost hope, lost faith..

Is there anything left

for you to think?

You know no past,

you know no future

cause to you i am

just another home less figure

and if there is one thing

i'd have to say......

 

"im lost, when will i be saved..?"

 

 

Here i am, a lady

and in my eyes, i've seen

life and who would've thought

at such a young age, i'd understand

this man and his pain

just by staring him in the eyes

with no words but just a sigh.

I hope they all get better

 

.....in time.

[Linney]

^It was good

 

---

 

I don't know if I've already posted these, and I am too lazy to check, so here you go..

 

It is a struggle for me to hold back the tears

To keep the pain inside me without it showing

But I've taught myself to live a lie

hiding the truth deep within

 

I know it's wrong but I've been doing it for years

Making the words transparent without you knowing

Been willing to say goodbye

But that would be a sin

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

 

Don't be surprised if I fake a smile

I've done that before

In a life where nothing made it worth living

Singing made me pull through

 

I have not talked about this in a while

It is not something I adore

A time where I always kept on giving

And taking was known to you

 

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

 

I don't want to sacrifice the life I'm living now

Even thought that sorrow is eating me up inside out sometimes

 

I think I should have made a vow

Not to give you anything not even a dime

 

 

Oh, I, Oh, I

can not be sorry for who I am

No, I, No, I

am not sorry, can you understand

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

 

---

 

Angry clouds are looming in the sky. Grey and large they are letting raindrops fall down with loud noises. The uneven asphalt leaves the water to linger in many pools of water. A girl screams terrified, and I turn around. A taxi cab just splashed dirty rainwater from the street on the girls seemingly expensive dress. The taxi driver doesn't notice the mess he has made so he continues driving down the streets of New York. I pull my denim jacket tighter around me and continue walking in my own slow pace. Thoughts are thumbling into my head and leaving as quickly as if they've never entered. The words that came from that boys mouth is filling up the space of thoughts for a whole minute until I even remember the petrified look on his young face. The look in his brown eyes showed that he was scared. My forehead is hurting from a lot of thinking, at least that is what I tell myself. "It isn't hurting from the round steelbar that was thrown on you, it is the thinking that causes the pain" I rapidly reasure myself. But I am not that stupid that I fall for my own lies. I know the truth because I've seen it. And the image of the truth contains three men and the darkness. The two things I have come to fear the most in this life.

[Wildman]

My Silent Lullaby

By Ernie W

 

I am sitting here all alone

My darkness is reigning over me

Thoughts of her seem to cross my mind

My wrists are bleeding

But it's for you

Only you

I am not blessed by God

He hates me and it's your fault

What did I do for this?

I am dying here

And what a joyous feeling

Now I don't have to think of you anymore

O what a lifeless lie

I hate you

Everything I said to you was a lie

I don't love you

I hate you

But I have to think...

I'm about to die and your the last thing on my life....

Spare me the pity

I bless over you

And I forgive you

This is my end, and you let go

I love you

[777]

Forever (For my former sister in law)

 

I can never get to the end of forever

At least not today

All the pain I endured

Could never be

Without you

But how else am I supposed to grow

What else could I do

 

So you'll take the blame

And inside my mind

I'm convinced you hold no shame

You had a role, The love you stole

Can never ever be the same

 

Theres more to this

And you could never see

Anything else behind all their lies

Your demise, And our despise

Could never break our ties

 

Because in the end, We'll be friends

And time will heal all of our souls

And I hope that one day

You can say

That you went through time and forever

You hurt yourself knowing that I

Could never hurt you back

So see you again

Theres no more to say

You won't start no more pain

At least not today

 

 

 

 

Malakai (For my former little brother)

 

Theres nothing for me to prove

To show that I love you

I know what I did to you

The pain fills me too

I wish no one hated

So you could be here

But that can't seem to happen

There is nothing that's clear

I'll give all I have

For the greatest thing I lost

 

What would I trade just to get you back

What would I do just to see your face

I can't answer any of these

Because I don't have the right

Because deep inside, I have been killed

I'll let everything be

So enjoy life, Just for me

 

And one day, If this is the last day

I'll bend my path to collide with you

You were my son, My friend, My brother

And our old mother you loved her

You were our family

And I have taught you

That we're all not perfect

[Wildman]

Christopher, those were probably some of the best poems I've ever read, they are truly fantastic.

[Linney]

I agree with Sin_Aura. Wow, Chris, that was amazing.

[x-Decoy]

I agree, those are really amazing.

[777]

hahahah, I'm happy!

[Jorgi]

Chris, i'm so stoked on your writing now, especially when you look back to when you first started posting here... Progression is in, my friend, and you're leading the way.

[Jorgi]

Gonna go ahead and leave this here:

 

 

it's not this town,

but the people init

go ahead; drag me down with it

i was right about you then,

and you haven't changed now

so excuse me whilst i give up my ghost

to save this night again.

 

unobtainable, me ?

you'd like to think so,

but this park bench is company

with my head on his knee,

so sleep restless, tonight

the leaves are whispering tonight

about rumours of summer and

the lies of winter

and the death of you and me.

 

i pardoned, i excused, i remembered

dance, moonlight; make me proud

i'll watch and laugh silently

i'll watch and love

i'll watch silently.

[Jorgi]

Gonna go ahead and leave this here:

 

 

it's not this town,

but the people in it

go ahead; drag me down with it

i was right about you then,

and you haven't changed now

so excuse me whilst i give up my ghost

to save this night again.

 

unobtainable, me ?

you'd like to think so,

but this park bench is company

with my head on his knee,

so sleep restless, tonight

the leaves are whispering tonight

about rumours of summer and

the lies of winter and

the death of you and me.

 

i pardoned, i excused, i remembered

dance, moonlight; make me proud

i'll watch and laugh silently

i'll watch and love

i'll watch silently.

[emily !]

Gonna go ahead and leave this here:

 

 

it's not this town,

but the people in it

go ahead; drag me down with it

i was right about you then,

and you haven't changed now

so excuse me whilst i give up my ghost

to save this night again.

 

unobtainable, me ?

you'd like to think so,

but this park bench is company

with my head on his knee,

so sleep restless, tonight

the leaves are whispering tonight

about rumours of summer and

the lies of winter and

the death of you and me.

 

i pardoned, i excused, i remembered

dance, moonlight; make me proud

i'll watch and laugh silently

i'll watch and love

i'll watch silently.

 

 

 

woaaaaaaaah. i love it. =D

esspecially the first bit.

*repped*

[Linney]

Gonna go ahead and leave this here:

 

 

it's not this town,

but the people in it

go ahead; drag me down with it

i was right about you then,

and you haven't changed now

so excuse me whilst i give up my ghost

to save this night again.

 

unobtainable, me ?

you'd like to think so,

but this park bench is company

with my head on his knee,

so sleep restless, tonight

the leaves are whispering tonight

about rumours of summer and

the lies of winter and

the death of you and me.

 

i pardoned, i excused, i remembered

dance, moonlight; make me proud

i'll watch and laugh silently

i'll watch and love

i'll watch silently.

 

Amazing

 

-----

 

I wrote a song, just now, it's called:

 

I'm not that silent

 

Learning to smile without you

Teaching my heart to love again

Avoiding the pain

That you created in me

 

I thought I was careful

But I guess I was reckless

This stupid pain

Just won't go away

And I blame you

For the hurt you caused

 

Building up the wall again

Setting up a limit

Reasuring no one can hurt me

Like you did

 

I thought I was careful

But I guess I was reckless

This stupid pain

Just won't go away

And I blame you

For the hurt you caused

 

What does it take, to be safe again

My heart left confused and in pain

These lips have never told you

But in my eyes it have been lingering

Look at me and you'll see I'm not

That silent anymore

 

I thought I was careful

But I guess I was reckless

This stupid pain

Just won't go away

And I blame you

For the hurt you caused

 

And I'm not keeping my mouth shut this time

I got to speak

I got to tell them

That when you're gone

They will be shattered on the floor

[Wildman]

Here is a poem I recently wrote for a poetry slam

 

Waiting For The Night Of Denial

 

I thought I was careful

And I thought you were alone

I was wrong, oh so wrong

He was there, like he always is

I am fading from you

And I will not let this happen

You've got me all fucked up inside

 

But when I thought you were alone

He was there, like he always is

I tried to come in, but he was there

We never had anything

But I thought we could make it

I truly pity on you

You made me alone

 

Just like as I thought you were alone

He was there, just as always

Still bringing me down

I was there

Just to put an end to this

You hate me, don't like

Admit it, you fucking hate me

 

When you were alone

And for some reason, he wasn't there

I took his place

I shared my hatred with you

But... When I had the chance

I was in even more love than ever

You hated my love, my obsession

Your stare branded me with a "fuck you" on my face

 

You were alone

He was not there

You hated me

You took everything back

And I was left with nothing

It is my end, and all I can say is good-bye

[Parame]

A new song I wrote. Today I was heavily depressed and so was my friend, who is also in the same band.

We did'nt talk much, I guess because... there was'nt much to say.

It's really all about sadness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

-----Black Stain----

 

 

 

 

Searching for light is futile

In a sky colored gray

Tomorrow will always be brighter

But just how dark will it be today?

 

Eyes searching for an exit

Have learned to finally accept

What is fabricated and what’s really there

 

Meet the black stain, like a plague

Marking the end

Spreading wet like rain

 

 

Lips no longer delay the awful news

That the papers couldn’t say

Their faces portray such dismay

Some stare, but never console

Walking away, left alone

 

Except for you, you’re always there

 

 

Meet the black stain, like a plague

Marking the end

Spreading intense pain

 

And there’s just barren desert in the flower field

All the petals melted away

They’re sad, they say

Now lying in a grave

Like we will someday

[Wildman]

I wrote this song while listening to Hollywood by Cute Is What We Aim For, so I stole a few lines... It's also the name of a video game...

 

"Tales of Innocence"

 

This is where my heat breaks

And where I stop breathing

Mind on nothing else

Remember that sweet little time

Is no longer a part of me

There is no tale of innocence

For at least what I know

Where is this value

Don't worry, I wont be there when you wake

 

Chorus:

Pain is what I feel

It will never heal

Is this anger what I have left inside of me?

I wonder if I could, go back to the way we were

Never

 

There is no tale of innocence

No tall tales that can make me feel

Feel the way I do

Those simple little days

Are no longer here

Just a memory

Drop the bomb on me again

In my tale on innocence

 

Chorus

 

Let me go back again

Feel this tonight

There was that one night of nothing

Just an endless bit of bliss

In my tale of innocence

Make me feel the same way again

Again

 

Chorus

 

Never feel the same

This will never change