{Alice Cullen} Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 i haven't been on here on awhile but i wrote this a few days ago: The Shadows Walk among the shadows They're talking about you Shh, be quiet Listen. Don't move, observe Do you feel them watching? They want what you have Life, body form Quick. Run. No time. They're coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anakale Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 This is a story of a girl in pain She was just standing in the rain Whenever she got a chance to hide herself It was a plesure that she'd never tell Would she? Has she? Did she? Will you ever know... Listen to the story She got an oppurtunity to wake up Her dream was just to be the top But then again, she couldn't stop Now shes just a girl or what? I to lazy to write more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Morphine and Nicotine you set me freeDad do I disappoint you? Round the back allies that's where I call home, I'm not coming back tonight. Don't tell me that I can't 'cause I'll prove you wrong, Fuck you and believe in me. I know I'm not perfect but I'm trying to be better. Believe in me. superduper rad, there. live thread, liiiiiiive. stand tall; i defy you to define me i am your queen- more than i have ever been no one told me about the rain on your face reign me in let us begin. her laugh was loudest but i am your last- hiding behind marvellous masks they warned me about the cracks on the floor relax we are fact. your lights don't lie and i am home- i am perfection set in stone no one thought to leave me on that wall let it be you need me. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 a short story, thingy.. don't know what it is. but here it is: My mouth moves to the unbelievable words. My lips form the breathtaking, backstabbing letters. Spelling them out perfect and clear. I still don’t understand them. And you’re long gone from the empty space inside of me. The hollow used to contain you, but now it is being replaced by something strained and itchy. I cannot for the love of God understand what is there now. But I don’t like it. I repeat the strange and confusing words you left on the porch of my heart. “I don’t love you anymore.” And so the time passes. I spy on the stupid clock, thinking if I stare at it long enough, It’s going to stop, right? Right..? My feet are dressed in green converse, as I hurry on the surface of the lake. I run as fast as the ice can carry me. You’re standing by a huge hole in the thick ice, and I try to scream at you to stay still and wait for me, but you’re not listening. And then you jump down into the freezing deadly water. Maybe the nightmares mean I miss you. When you slip through the ice and die, maybe it’s my own brain forcing itself to think you’ve died, instead of just left me? Maybe. Either way, it still hurts. I guess our relationship was always built on top of a deck of cards-house. And I assume our romance was always that fake, like an illusion. But now when it all has left with the summer, everything is cold and uncomfortable. I wonder what made me believe you ever loved me at all? Could it have been the “I don’t love you anymore” as you left, that made me think this over. Because when we were together, you never uttered the words “I love you”. But I guess you did after all. I won't say it sucks. Not going to say it is too bad. Because it is truthfully as if something's died within me. My body is only an empty shell where my everything once were. And it is pure and raw torture without you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramaniac Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 This is a story of a girl in painShe was just standing in the rain Whenever she got a chance to hide herself It was a plesure that she'd never tell Would she? Has she? Did she? Will you ever know... Listen to the story She got an oppurtunity to wake up Her dream was just to be the top But then again, she couldn't stop Now shes just a girl or what? I to lazy to write more... that's really good Ana! <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 You step into that special place in my heart I tell you to stay still, don’t mess anything up And you stay perfectly still for some time When I’ve settled in and the paint has dried You rip me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down You put on your plastic smiles Promise forever and ever but the inc never dried So the time passes by, your promise was never sworn It cuts to the bone because I am all alone You ripped me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down Abandonment, my worst enemy Crawls closer and sets Its aim on me And if you’re playing the charade Why can’t I play a part too But make-up cannot hide the tears I cry because of you You ripped me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 a short story, thingy.. don't know what it is. but here it is: My mouth moves to the unbelievable words. My lips form the breathtaking, backstabbing letters. Spelling them out perfect and clear. I still don’t understand them. And you’re long gone from the empty space inside of me. The hollow used to contain you, but now it is being replaced by something strained and itchy. I cannot for the love of God understand what is there now. But I don’t like it. I repeat the strange and confusing words you left on the porch of my heart. “I don’t love you anymore.” And so the time passes. I spy on the stupid clock, thinking if I stare at it long enough, It’s going to stop, right? Right..? My feet are dressed in green converse, as I hurry on the surface of the lake. I run as fast as the ice can carry me. You’re standing by a huge hole in the thick ice, and I try to scream at you to stay still and wait for me, but you’re not listening. And then you jump down into the freezing deadly water. Maybe the nightmares mean I miss you. When you slip through the ice and die, maybe it’s my own brain forcing itself to think you’ve died, instead of just left me? Maybe. Either way, it still hurts. I guess our relationship was always built on top of a deck of cards-house. And I assume our romance was always that fake, like an illusion. But now when it all has left with the summer, everything is cold and uncomfortable. I wonder what made me believe you ever loved me at all? Could it have been the “I don’t love you anymore” as you left, that made me think this over. Because when we were together, you never uttered the words “I love you”. But I guess you did after all. I won't say it sucks. Not going to say it is too bad. Because it is truthfully as if something's died within me. My body is only an empty shell where my everything once were. And it is pure and raw torture without you. I don't know exactly what is good or bad about stories or anything, But I know whether or not I enjoyed reading them. Obviously I liked this, And the bold part damn near gave me chills. It was real great. You step into that special place in my heartI tell you to stay still, don’t mess anything up And you stay perfectly still for some time When I’ve settled in and the paint has dried You rip me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down You put on your plastic smiles Promise forever and ever but the inc never dried So the time passes by, your promise was never sworn It cuts to the bone because I am all alone You ripped me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down Abandonment, my worst enemy Crawls closer and sets Its aim on me And if you’re playing the charade Why can’t I play a part too But make-up cannot hide the tears I cry because of you You ripped me so hard apart The sign where I wrote “me and you” is gone And I see what everyone says hurts the most Faith cannot heal my heart when a friend breaks me down I don't know what's good or bad about poems either, But I think I can sense that you've improved! Everything is alive! Like a human, Like a person, Your emotions are breathing and that is pretty epic actually. (I'm jealous) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 I don't know exactly what is good or bad about stories or anything, But I know whether or not I enjoyed reading them. Obviously I liked this, And the bold part damn near gave me chills. It was real great. I don't know what's good or bad about poems either, But I think I can sense that you've improved! Everything is alive! Like a human, Like a person, Your emotions are breathing and that is pretty epic actually. (I'm jealous) Edit: oOo, Found an old song I did a long time ago. you can tell it was during my teen years because its so depressing. it's almost embarrassing. epitome of self pity hah, well I'm still a teen but...i'm not in that "phase" anymore hah, the sun shines bright now a days. master of breath and death a moon holds a bad shadow Resting it's light on top of the clouds that are neither drifting or flying it's a night like this that has safeties dying i submit to this over rated world i realize the rotten with the way of reason hurled aside to dominate the righteous and the forgotten i grew tired my inspiration, mired in the hopelessness i overwhelm with aggravation reserved for this revenge of a realm thank you soooo much! it's been so long since i've posted here, I've missed seeing everyone's talent on here! and that's really good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 I seriously want this thread to have much more posts! and this is not a song or anything. just maybe like a spoken word thing Tabaca I draw the ghost from the instrument Because the ghost itself calms my soul Is it a part of an architect I'll never ever really ever know I want to pull from the stars The knowledges of good and evil I want to eat the fruits From the tree I was told not to consume They think I'm crazy Because I dance hazy But it's them that cannot hear the tune I want to find where The betterment of evils begin It's said we must to bad to do good And I'm drenched in the waters of sin I have a blood that was long before me But I'm now in someone elses circle What can I do, I know it's too late Because now I'm in another circle 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 I seriously want this thread to have much more posts! and this is not a song or anything. just maybe like a spoken word thing Tabaca I draw the ghost from the instrument Because the ghost itself calms my soul Is it a part of an architect I'll never ever really ever know I want to pull from the stars The knowledges of good and evil I want to eat the fruits From the tree I was told not to consume They think I'm crazy Because I dance hazy But it's them that cannot hear the tune I want to find where The betterment of evils begin It's said we must to bad to do good And I'm drenched in the waters of sin I have a blood that was long before me But I'm now in someone elses circle What can I do, I know it's too late Because now I'm in another circle this thread definitely needs more posts, like, definitely. bold is fave, chris, love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SalsaC Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 I would sure like to post something here, but I have never written lyrics or poems, and so I've just settled for reading stuff you guys post here. But, I have to say that I really like your work Christopher. Like, pretty much everything I remember you posting in this thread. Keep at it, and one day I will rip you off for my own music. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickkk Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 Idk, but I've been having serious writers block, so at least this is something. My hot topic guitar pic was the inspiration o.o Rock The Arts The type of music we live by is taken for granted But all of the rest we just don't understand it I'm gonna open your heart Open your eyes Look you will all look at the music as if your spies You have to rock the arts Keep on hearing music forever When you open your eyes Open them wide Find the beat, look inside You have to get lost in the music Find the rhythm the vibe the power just use it You have to rock the arts Keep on hearing music forever If you blame me Oh no.... If you blame me Oh no... You have to rock the arts Keep on hearing music forever You have to just let go Find the joy the power the love yeah the music 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramaniac Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 I've just done a couple of lines for each one because I haven't finished them yet (they're all seperare songs) so I just gotta think of more and mix them together haha. 1. My unspoken words fill this empty space, They whisper in my ears their delicate words, My breath is shaking, These strings are breaking. 2. Your eyes were once my light, But they lead me into the darkness of your soul, I was blinded, Hidden by your shadow. I thought it was you I knew beneath those lies, I thought the truth was somewhere buried behind those eyes. 3. Take my hand, fingers tight, I will promise you tonight, That we'll sing until the winter sunshine dawns. xD 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anakale Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Thats really good sis^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramaniac Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Thats really good sis^ Thanks hun ♥ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Ignore the chords: C->F->G->Dsus2 My heart skips a beat, as those glorious feet pirouette onto the dance floor I don't mean to stare, but i'm in love with those moves i just can't let go of this moment i catch your eye, i remember that i cannot, take another step towards you I remind myself, that I'm deeply in love It doesn't matter how far away she is Am D (C Shape) -> Bm -> Em i can't ruin this again i won't ruin this again I wish you liked me, I swear you said you did Make your fucking mind up. I’ve got to let go, but I lean in to kiss Your sweet scented lips We’re tight in embrace, I’m spiralling down Into an empty abyss Of nobody to love, but just bodies to hold This isn’t what I want i can't ruin this again i won't ruin this again Fuck it, I’ll always be alone There’s no helping me now I’ve pushed away all my past lovers And the futures looking worse. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 My heart skips a beat, as those glorious feet pirouette onto the dance floor I don't mean to stare, but i'm in love with those moves i just can't let go of this moment i catch your eye, i remember that i cannot, take another step towards you love that, dude. i haven't written anything in so long, but i kind of miss it, so i'm trying to get back into it. slowly. painfully. and craply. the morning laughed right in my face the veins of these drains broke my dreams and my taste for all things sweet and all things complete and you broke my bones but still won't leave i believed in those gods and you believed in me and i fell to the floor and knelt on my knees where the answers once were but i felt the change and we felt the days pass us right by keep your eyes to the sky as the sun keeps them dry and the blood in the clouds bid us all goodnight and i bid you goodbye and i wish you good life but i wished once before when you let me survive and it got me nowhere and we are both nowhere and i don't know where this leaves us tonight; you burned brighter than the brightest of streetlights and you hit harder than the hardest of delights. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 love that, dude. Cheers! That's my favourite bit All of yours is pretty awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickkk Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 VERSE 1: If you think Everything's fine (x4) If you believe We keep tryin' (x4) Well... CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) VERSE 2: If you think Your still a friend (x4) If you think All is gonna mend (x4) Well... CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) BRIDGE: If you still live in the past Nothing in your life will last Everything you think you do Isn't true, but I'm gonna go on CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) ^Repetitive, but fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 VERSE 1:If you think Everything's fine (x4) If you believe We keep tryin' (x4) Well... CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) VERSE 2: If you think Your still a friend (x4) If you think All is gonna mend (x4) Well... CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) BRIDGE: If you still live in the past Nothing in your life will last Everything you think you do Isn't true, but I'm gonna go on CHORUS: I'm gonna go on Gonna go on (x5) ^Repetitive, but fun Dude that could some type of pop hit. Just need some killer melodies right thur. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickkk Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Dude that could some type of pop hit. Just need some killer melodies right thur. Lol, I have the chords written down since like the lyrics, are repetitive. ---- I'm putting a new song i wrote here so i wont double post. (Btw, this have little notes and three vocalists since i wrote it for my band) SEE IT IN YOUR EYES VERSE 1: N: That twinkle in your eyes The spark that connects to mine Things were better then L: And Worse now N and L: And I try i try i try i try CHORUS: N, L, and me: But I cant see it in your eyes (x2) N: But I cant see why (L: i still believe) N: But I cant see why (L: the only thing on my mind) Both: Is you you you you you you VERSE 2: N: That look on your face No happiness to trace I know im just crushing on you But somewhere I know Both: I'm not im not im not CHORUS: All 3: But I cant see it in your eyes (x2) N: But I cant see why (L: i still believe) N: But I cant see why (L: the only thing on my mind) Both: Is you you you you you you BRIDGE: L: I know I miss you (x2) Both: I know I miss you CHORUS: All 3: But I cant see it in your eyes (x6) N: But I cant see why (L: i still believe) N: But I cant see why (L: the only thing on my mind) Both: Is you you you you you you All Three: And I still cant see it in your eyes (eyes like how hayley sings "you" in "all i wanted") Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 This is currently untitled. I decided to tackle the subject of war a little. I wrote it in a structure that TDWP uses in their most recent album. I plan on playing this song for the new genre I invented (or I think I did) called AcoustiCore, lol. Say hello to the existence These are weapons hidden by anger That hide what is truly there Repay those that were once suffering All I ask is to feed the crimson sky The blood from all of the red-soaked rivers Keeping in mind, all that is in protest Keeping in mind, what this world has become And all that we have given up on, now Only the good eidolon is possible now In this time only you can trust This pain in the back of my throat Engulfs the separation of both mind and thought Is this the reason why we push forward? Let them die, and get ready to continue All I ask is to feed the crimson sky The blood from all of the red-soaked rivers Mannerism becomes equal to denial For what has truly become of us Beauty is now what war hides In face, the beauty can only be seen when horror erupts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickkk Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 chorus of a random song im working on: i'm addicted to my own worst enemy in love with the hater in front of me i cant believe the pain you are i cant believe the shame you are all the tactics you've used on me all the lies i finally see shows im in love with an enemy. --- its about being in love with someone you consider not a friend, but an enemy, or in my case, someone who i'm too scared to be with and because of that, never will. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 New solo song I'll record sometime soon prolly, thinking of calling it 'iron sight'. Peer down this sight and squeeze the kill Tracked down to satisfy a fill Wounded and bruised the bird began to sing "Trade me this pot for a cage and I'll make you my king" Encased in a cage made of gold Giving the fabled illusion that I’ve sold Something on my own If merit brings meaning then I can't help feeling locked up Peer out watch night turn into day These jeweled bars ensure where I'll stay "Dear Bird your songs have fallen ill" "My boiling offer is standing still" oh how i long to feel the wind fulfill these wings from tail to chin old songs of joy won't ride this breath Give this bird flight or give me death You can hear the already recorded stuff here if you're interested. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 That sounds a little brutal, but I like that one a lot! It's got some serious depth to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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