MeLoN Posted March 29, 2006 Report Share Posted March 29, 2006 Someone was brave enough to break my heart.. The message Ive had it with this song You gave beauty a meaning and I tried to hold on By holding your hand but you still went away All of these moments, they cant be replaced. Set me free cause Im stuck in reverse After all of my lies Im now unheard Cant speak up, its the same old story Same mistake: a wrong picture of reality *Sometimes I wish my visions were clear Not blinded and raped by this fear Thats kept me from living a careless life That made me lose it for a while Ive said it before but the message hasnt changed Look at me: Im back again They told me to never let go of the one thing I loved But somethings been telling me they were wrong I gave you my heart but not the whole piece So if we would fail, I wouldnt be empty You stole my soul for an hour or two Youve ruined our memories for good Love can be bitter, but fear made this mess I cant guide you home, but please know I gave you my best * All of these words will be lost in time But I know theyll somehow change my life Ive always dreamt of someone like you Proud I had it but I wasnt meant to Sorry to say I knew it all along So here I am, going back to the start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matty_poo Posted March 29, 2006 Report Share Posted March 29, 2006 i like it mel (gee, thats not generixcc at all) it's really sad, which believe it or not normally isn't my type of song i listen to, but you did a great job and i really like this part "Set me free cause Im stuck in reverse After all of my lies Im now unheard" amd there is a definate purpose of this song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matty_poo Posted March 29, 2006 Report Share Posted March 29, 2006 lame song i JUST wrote about my sister's fake emo-ness it's lame haha "Cindy was a poser kid, she always was tryin to be cool, had pictures of gothic bands in her locker at school! though she had such cool friends she pretends she is sad, and it always gets me so friggin mad! She thinks hawthorne heights are the best, but she's never heard of R.E.M. or any of the rest, I ask her about Ozzy and she, tells me he's just some old dude she saw on MTV! The emo kids they cry! and i don't , i don't know why! The emo kids cry, even though they lead a great life! The emo kids they cry! and i don't , i don't know why! The emo kids cry, So i go away for the night! Then theres her friend name i can't recall, cindy talks to her everyday day in the hall, they look up stupid quoters all day online, I tried to teach her about the 80's but she doesn't have the time, she whines about no one loves her and she wishes she was in a dream, says she wants her true love now even though she's 13! The emo kids they cry! and i don't , i don't know why! The emo kids cry, even though they lead a great life! The emo kids they cry! and i don't , i don't know why! The emo kids cry, So i go away for the night! Now this song it really doesn't have a point, I can't come up with a ryhming word except joint, my sister is so lame, her tastes so tame, her sadness is about as real spidey's mary jane!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 i like it mel (gee' date=' thats not generixcc at all) it's really sad, which believe it or not normally isn't my type of song i listen to, but you did a great job and i really like this part "Set me free cause Im stuck in reverseAfter all of my lies Im now unheard" amd there is a definate purpose of this song[/quote'] Thanks Matt! Like your song as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 Mel yours is great like always. And matt yours made me laugh Both are GREAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moony Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 mel i love ur stuff so great, haha matt thats a good one, made me laugh also. BUT hawthorne heights are a veryyy good band. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 Awww thanks moony! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 He shifted on his bed, wishing his pupils would dilate faster and adjust to seeing in the dark. It wasn’t that he was afraid of the dark—why should he be? The dark wasn’t a thing, it couldn’t hurt him. He just didn’t like it. He didn’t like to glance around a room that at once felt too small and too large, and not see the familiar objects he knew were there. Thought were there. Hoped were there. For all he knew, they weren’t. Maybe they went away, ceased to exist, when there was no light for them to reflect. Maybe the same thing happened to him. His existence was put on hold the moment he flipped the light switch and only resumed when his pupils were large enough to gather enough light that he could make out the shape of his hands, held shakily, always shakily, in front of him. He was unsure of why they shook. He wasn’t afraid, after all. Perhaps it was their attempt to prove to him that he did in fact still exist, but he never believed it until they became visible again. He rarely felt this way in his dorm. He was usually the first to turn in for the night, with someone still studying in the room. He carped about the annoyance of trying to sleep with a desk lamp on, but really, he was grateful for it. Going from dull light into deep sleep without having to go through that transition through darkness usually allowed him to wake mornings much more rested than after nights when the last light was turned off by him, and not because of any difference in the amount of sleep received. On the nights when his roommates went out and he could find no excuse to stay up until they returned, he sat in bed, the light above his roommate’s closet turned on, putting off reaching over and turning it off for as long as possible. He was glad, really, when he just beat his roommates, so that he clicked off the light and settled in bed just before another click, that of the electronic lock accepting the key, told him that they were back. Desk lights would be turned on, and then he could sit up in bed and complain about how they always woke him when they came in. Yes, complaining was good. Complaining about light left no room for anyone to suspect how he felt about the dark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 1, 2006 Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 Its scary to bleed The pen in my hand is writing down these lines So the ink can do its job and I can tell my story Cause I know some stories and have a few words to say Daddy lay your head down and listen to my tale I made life hard when I was younger I tried to run and you tried to ignore the story your eyes told you I said things were only getting better So you put your mind back to whatever you were about to do I was a liar, the kind that got away Mummy lay your head down and listen to my tale *I was a danger to a lot of things, a danger to this world Standing on the edge of color, the border of this girl I used to talk to my reflection, sit and watch myself be me Pushing my lies ahead, with my back against the wall, its scary to bleed. When the tears went right down my face and I screamed for help You assumed that things were ok because my words said I was doing well When my arms were bleeding and the scars were there You didnt even know what was wrong but you held my hand all along All the way Brother lay your head down and listen to my tale The chains kept me tied to my head And I let them make me crazy Cause everytime I had a chance to go I thought that this was meant to be So I never went and got in too deep My heart knows ive caused all of my own pain So everyone lay your head down and listen to my tale * I wish you wouldve listened Hear me now cause this is why I spent my life in all the wrong dreams And why I held my head up high This got me through everything the good and the bad You were there in your own way by my side to help So I dare anyone to hurt me, tear me down id say This is how ill live, this is my tale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 1, 2006 Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 Nobody knows Nobody knows why you push me away sometimes Why your eyes go from sparkles to nothing And for nothing you hide Its dark inside when youre out running How do you dream when the days are so slow Can you look in the mirror and honestly see Your life flash by so carelessly Say all those words for me cause nobody knows *Who knew it was going to be you in the end The one whod fall down and pretend Youve caused confusion and Im trying to figure out Why you just said youre not allowed To fall then crawl and get back up, be weak for once They say nobody knows but I know everyone knew all along Whats the secret youve been hiding Whats the thought behind those empty words Why are you so scared of crying I thought it was ok cause you said it was normal Put your mistakes behind you Think of all the words I used to say Now I wish I could remember & put our failure behind me for a change * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 I finished a new story, but I don't suppose anyone is interested in reading it since no one read the story that it's a sequel to. I suppose I'll post a clip anyway. Welcome To Reality Benjamin wasn’t surprised when he came home and found Ryan asleep on the couch; he was always tired. With a nicer apartment and a fuller fridge, Ryan Hatch and Ben Griffith were living more comfortably than they had been, but Ryan was working hard for it. Studio every morning and afternoon, and gym every evening. Ben was working, too, of course. He was doing security for the same company as before, and he had managed to change his shift so that he could be home at night and spend time with his new boyfriend, but his contribution was minimal compared to Ryan’s. Now Ben faced a dilemma: let Ryan sleep on the couch and risk him waking up with a stiff neck, or wake him now so he could get to bed and risk him not being able to fall back asleep right away. Since he was tired enough to have fallen asleep on the couch in the first place, Ben figured Ryan was tired enough to not have trouble getting back to sleep. He took hold of Ryan’s shoulder and gently shook him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matty_poo Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 haha thanks everyone who liked the song, even though the rhyme, and i know it's more genericness but mel, claudia, great work as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 Dear sister Do you ever wonder what Im like How I feel & if I ever think of you Do you ever wish we could go back for a while & just be me and you, I do, I do Do you ever wish for a really bad day for a new excuse to say hello Do you ever think of the words I used to say What it is that made me go, I dont, I dont know *Dont you know we were all the wrong words Everything no one wanted to be around & dont you know we were those girls We used to joke and laugh about I know you want to hug me and forgive But without you is the only way to live Do you ever check if your hearts still beating Cause life ignores you and it seems dead Do you fix it all by running & falling right back, I cant, I cant Do you ever feel the need to show me What you've become, have you changed at all? I know you know we both know why you see & we both know we cant, cause we'll fall, we'll fall * Without you i'll live.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 Mel. I like it. Quite sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 Mel. I like it. Quite sad Life can be sad, haha. Life is fun =]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 Since no one here is interested in readin ghte stories i'll just post the songs that I wrote for them. Put It In Reverse You made your decisions You left things behind Jumped in your vehicle Went for a ride But it’s a one way trip with no destination No pit stops, no rest stops, and no hesitation You made some wrong turns but you keep on going No way to stop, no signs of slowing It’s the way you’re heading For better or worse Life’s always in drive Can’t put it in reverse You made all your choices Left people you knew You’re driving alone Just like you wanted to Now your passenger seat is longing just to hold The next lonely hitchhiker you save from the cold You made some wrong turns but you keep on going No way to stop, no signs of slowing It’s the way you’re heading For better or worse Life’s always in drive Can’t put it in reverse The parallel lines converge at the end As you drive over enemies, lovers, and friends You’re driving away, always driving away No matter how badly you wish you could stay You made some wrong turns but you keep on going No way to stop, no signs of slowing It’s the way you’re heading For better or worse Life’s always in drive Can’t put it in reverse Not park, not neutral, never reverse Life’s always in drive, can’t put it in reverse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 ^I really like that. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 4, 2006 Report Share Posted April 4, 2006 Thanks. I liked your, too. You know I'm a sucker for well-placed repetition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 7, 2006 Report Share Posted April 7, 2006 Unspoken There’s a subtle aching in his smile That I’m just now starting to see I’m sure it’s been there for a while But he kept it hidden from me I know he wants something I can give him He wants something he knows I have He wants something I’m willing to give him But he won’t get it ‘cause he won’t ask Why do we love our hearts when they’re broken? Why do we prefer our souls when they bleed? Why are the words we mean the ones unspoken? Why is this misery one of our needs? The color of his hair like his heart Contrasts just so sharply with mine But if I knew the way I should start I’d blend the colors so there’d be no line I know he needs something I can give him He needs something he knows I have He needs something that I need to give him But neither one of us will ask Why do we love our hearts when they’re broken? Why do we prefer our souls when they bleed? Why are the words we mean the ones unspoken? Why is this misery one of our needs? He doesn’t say it, he doesn’t show it But in my heart, I still know it He’s after what I’m after, too Are you after me? 'Cause I’m after you! Let me fix your heart when it’s broken Let me patch your soul when it bleeds Let the words that we mean be spoken Let me fulfill all your needs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fueled By Oreos Posted April 9, 2006 Report Share Posted April 9, 2006 don't ask me why, just know that i do. don't ask me who, just know that i m. dont ask me when, just know that it's gonna happen. *i know, short, and dosen't really make any sense whatsoever, it was just one of those spontaneous, stupid, spur-of-the-moment ideas. =]* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robin Posted April 10, 2006 Report Share Posted April 10, 2006 Don't know why but I just kind of felt like posting. Oh and the arguments were so convincing Preparing to fight but not testing the limits Thinking chances to win are good And trying to believe that it’s true While not understanding the dangers of entering battle expecting to lose This is today. This is tomorrow. This is yesterday taking its toll This is now. This is before. This is uncertainty swallowing us whole. Oh and you fall right back to your beginning Craving the future but always regressing You’re one step forward but two more back Trying to forge a victory While not understanding the dangers of our second guessing This is the future. This is the past. This is reality bringing us back. This is discipline. This is losing control. This is knowing to never settle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 10, 2006 Report Share Posted April 10, 2006 ^I really like that! Good job =]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robin Posted April 10, 2006 Report Share Posted April 10, 2006 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myheartis_yours Posted April 11, 2006 Report Share Posted April 11, 2006 everyone in this thread is really talented. but i have a limerick that me and my friends made: There once was a boy named Pat, who wanted to marry his cat. It was against the law so he took out his saw and now his cat is a mat. sorry if the format isn't right. (no animals were harmed in the making of this poem) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 11, 2006 Report Share Posted April 11, 2006 Welcome To Reality An endless night, a useless fight With monsters I can never beat It’s dark and cold, nothing to hold I’m lying on the cracked concrete I need a way out, an escape This nightmare’s getting longer I need a prayer, need a hope My fear is getting stronger I need a hero, is it him? Has he come to rescue me? The darkness fades and then he says “Welcome to reality” Downpour of rain, a rush of pain It never seems to go away A faded ghost makes me his host He says his name is Yesterday An endless night, a useless fight With monsters known as Coming Days They pin me down onto the ground And paint my world in blacks and grays I need a way out, an escape This nightmare’s getting longer I need a prayer, need a hope My fear is getting stronger I need a hero, is it him? Has he come to rescue me? The darkness fades and then he says “Welcome to reality” I found a way out, an escape Before it got much longer I got a prayer, got a hope And both are getting stronger I found a hero, it was him He found me and rescued me The darkness faded when he said "Welcome to reality" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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