RenegadeRoss Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 I occasionally write songs, although im not in a band or such, but its always to do with personal experiences. This one is about that friend you had when you were young and have lost them along the way. "I Remember When" We were just young kids, In a small social town, We would always misbehave, and Everyone would frown We would play in the park, We would play near the lake, But was this childhood we had, Just completely fake? I remember when you used to always call me, I remember when we used to play, I remember when we'd dream of flying, I remember when when we used to say, I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember when We would always laugh, We would sometimes cry, But we never thought we'd ever, Say Goodbye, And that time it came, We never realised, How important it was, And our friendship had died. I remember when you used to always call me, I remember when we used to play, I remember when we'd dream of flying, I remember when when we used to say, I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember when But now we've grown old, We've gone our separate ways, But sometimes i think, Back to those careless days, I wonder how your doing, How your coping with school, I've gone and i've lost you, I was such a fool. I remember when you used to always call me, ( I remember) I remember when we used to play, (I remember) I remember when we'd dream of flying, (I remember) I remember when when we used to say, I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember (I remember) I remember... I Remember you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 Whoa, Hannah, that song is amazing! Susan and Ross--great songs, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted October 19, 2007 Report Share Posted October 19, 2007 thankss haha its a poem, not a song though. i rarley write songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 19, 2007 Report Share Posted October 19, 2007 Poem. Sorry >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 oh its okay haha i dont mind what you call it, i just want you to like it hah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arrrrr x matey Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 i'm a really bad writer, but when i was going through this really hard time i would write poems to try to get my emotions out...this is the only one i remember. i think its bad...but here it is... as i lay dieing i think about my past, my mistakes what went wrong? could it have been fixed? if this blade, my vein had not kissed? would there be tearshed? would there be pain? are these my last thoughts as my blood drips away? as the memory of my past just fades away? as i lay dieing, i just have to say i'm sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 thanks for all the compliments on my last song this is about jumping too quickly into a relationship too young, because he's the only one who makes you feel safe even though you know he's not good for you. scared to lose every beat and every step it's murder on the sidewalk simplified but we play it so innocently you can't dance and you never should and we will, pay upfront so that we, will never have to witness this determined collapse and i run waiting to be swept by caution that he'll never, ever throw out hypocrisy and dedication you offer me nothing in return so explain the lies you breathe my heart you'll never break you can't, you never could and we will, pay upfront so that we, won't ever have to break this determined gaze i'll cling to your safety i will believe your conspiracy you know i will stand, stand. i'm not blinded my pretty eyes can see it's so hard to get out, when there's no way in i will take you back to where you've been and we will, pay upfront so that we, will never have to witness this determined collapse plant a bomb, with those eyes, with your lies i'd expect nothing else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 by any means, continue writing and posting them ! talent ahoy. read it through again, definite parallels with paramore songs- but i honestly don't care, i still love it. just out of interest, could you point out the parallels? i started writing this a long time ago, and just finished it off recently (when i'd been listening to riot! constantly ). have i subconciously written down paramore lyrics anywhere? ha i didn't even realize! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 thanks for all the compliments on my last song this is about jumping too quickly into a relationship too young, because he's the only one who makes you feel safe even though you know he's not good for you. scared to lose every beat and every step it's murder on the sidewalk simplified but we play it so innocently you can't dance and you never should and we will, pay upfront so that we, will never have to witness this determined collapse and i run waiting to be swept by caution that he'll never, ever throw out hypocrisy and dedication you offer me nothing in return so explain the lies you breathe my heart you'll never break you can't, you never could and we will, pay upfront so that we, won't ever have to break this determined gaze i'll cling to your safety i will believe your conspiracy you know i will stand, stand. i'm not blinded my pretty eyes can see it's so hard to get out, when there's no way in i will take you back to where you've been and we will, pay upfront so that we, will never have to witness this determined collapse plant a bomb, with those eyes, with your lies i'd expect nothing else. *jaw drops again* God, you're such a good writer. *luffs it* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 wooo! new member (me) and new song....more to come...bahaha... alright... here it is...just so you all know, there is music, Im recording next month for it, and if you can't tell, it was for two people to sing. Usually I go solo, but I actually was listeneing to the songs "My Heart" and "Frankliin" when I wrote it and I knew that my friend scotty would feel bad if he didn't get a song wiff me, so here it is... “Can You?” - Mariah Wester [verse] What happened to us now? (We lost it somehow) And What did we do wrong? (We lied all along) When the day comes to a close (What will we do) When the wanted become unknown WE’LL HELP THEM THROUGH [chorus] We can’t go back now… There’s no way… {pause} To make it through (well) When we know we’re not like that… We’ll make it through ‘Cuz we refuse to walk away (walk away) [verse] I know what I did (With that heart that you hid) From the world YOU kept it (And now you refuse to bid) ON THE LIFE WE ONCE KNEW (And refused to go show) We never quite fell through THAT WHOLE IN THE FLOOR [chorus] [bridge] - gang vocals - x2 “ALL OF US HERE ALONE WANTING A PLACE TO CALL OUR OWN BRING US BACK TO WHERE WE WERE NEVER WILL IT QUITE BE OVER!” [chorus] - guitars are muted {pause} {loud and fast again} [chorus] Walk away Walk away Walk away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 ^ Ooooo writing talent! When you record it, can you post it on the boards so we can hear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 yups..haha...I have another one...well actually I have around 40 or so, but Ill record a video tomorrow if I can, so that you guys can hear..or I might just record me and bob (drummer) playing it at the studio next tuesday. I dont know yet..I might do both...haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 thanks for all the compliments on my last song this is about jumping too quickly into a relationship too young, because he's the only one who makes you feel safe even though you know he's not good for you. scared to lose every beat and every step it's murder on the sidewalk simplified but we play it so innocently you can't dance and you never should etc. Quite alot of the time i say i like something to be polite. But i honestly, genuinely and whole-heartedly adore what you write. As for the parallel thing, i'll see if i can remember what i was thinking! I in no way mean to criticise any sense or originality in your writing, by the way, it's just something i picked up- perhaps i was thinking way too far into it as looking back, i can't remember half of what i was talking about! a million girls would bend in two for you to say their name - this bit reminds me of "Misery Business", perhaps? now you've taped my lips,- crushcrushcrush ? not so much as i refuse, i refuse, - Misery Business ? Three lines can hardly back up what i said, perhaps it was just the general impression i got at that particular time from listening to too much paramore, aha ! so, basically, ignore me and write more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Quite alot of the time i say i like something to be polite. But i honestly, genuinely and whole-heartedly adore what you write. As for the parallel thing, i'll see if i can remember what i was thinking! I in no way mean to criticise any sense or originality in your writing, by the way, it's just something i picked up- perhaps i was thinking way too far into it as looking back, i can't remember half of what i was talking about! a million girls would bend in two for you to say their name - this bit reminds me of "Misery Business", perhaps? now you've taped my lips,- crushcrushcrush ? not so much as i refuse, i refuse, - Misery Business ? Three lines can hardly back up what i said, perhaps it was just the general impression i got at that particular time from listening to too much paramore, aha ! so, basically, ignore me and write more aw thank you! and haha i see what you mean actually but don't worry i wasn't offended at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 wooo! new member (me) and new song....more to come...bahaha... alright... here it is...just so you all know, there is music, Im recording next month for it, and if you can't tell, it was for two people to sing. Usually I go solo, but I actually was listeneing to the songs "My Heart" and "Frankliin" when I wrote it and I knew that my friend scotty would feel bad if he didn't get a song wiff me, so here it is... “Can You?” - Mariah Wester [verse] What happened to us now? (We lost it somehow) And What did we do wrong? (We lied all along) When the day comes to a close (What will we do) When the wanted become unknown WE’LL HELP THEM THROUGH [chorus] We can’t go back now… There’s no way… {pause} To make it through (well) When we know we’re not like that… We’ll make it through ‘Cuz we refuse to walk away (walk away) [verse] I know what I did (With that heart that you hid) From the world YOU kept it (And now you refuse to bid) ON THE LIFE WE ONCE KNEW (And refused to go show) We never quite fell through THAT WHOLE IN THE FLOOR [chorus] [bridge] - gang vocals - x2 “ALL OF US HERE ALONE WANTING A PLACE TO CALL OUR OWN BRING US BACK TO WHERE WE WERE NEVER WILL IT QUITE BE OVER!” [chorus] - guitars are muted {pause} {loud and fast again} [chorus] Walk away Walk away Walk away you're really, really good when the wanted become unknown we'll help them through those lines just stuck in my head! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 i'm a really bad writer, but when i was going through this really hard time i would write poems to try to get my emotions out...this is the only one i remember. i think its bad...but here it is... as i lay dieing i think about my past, my mistakes what went wrong? could it have been fixed? if this blade, my vein had not kissed? would there be tearshed? would there be pain? are these my last thoughts as my blood drips away? as the memory of my past just fades away? as i lay dieing, i just have to say i'm sorry i just re-read this.. and i love it it's pretty dark, which is why it's easy to look over at first glance, but reading it again i realised how beautifully you've portrayed everything. could it have been fixed? if this blade, my vein had not kissed amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 break, transcend, revenge somewhere in this cold uncertainty and harshest words unveiled you stopped my hand in time before i stopped myself no words can heal the damage done no prize can be won without the power of your beat but i'm doing fine i can't stop listening (bright lights and shattered walls) your stare inside my mind it's wearing thin is that the best you can do with your pride? the cunning looks that caused you, undignified, to break through and scream through the first of your nightmares while we sleep with the last of your time i will come out on top of every struggle fought it's getting easier now, without your useless control you suggest nothing at all that's worth a second look we can do it alone at least you knew we would i can't stop listening (bright lights and shadowed falls) your stare inside my mind it's wearing thin is that the best you can do with your pride? the cunning looks that caused you, undignified, to break through and scream through the first of your nightmares while we sleep with the last of your time is that the best you can do with your pride? your opinion means so much more to someone without their own dreams and scream through the first of your nightmares while we sleep with the last of your time we'll climb, oh it's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Well I think it's safe to say that Hannah is a pretty gifted song-writer. Man I really should post some more of my stuff on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Well I think it's safe to say that Hannah is a pretty gifted song-writer. Man I really should post some more of my stuff on here. and i think it's safe to say that james is an unrealistically nice person pleaaase do i'd love to read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^Ha, if you can be bothered to flick back through this thread you can see my old stuff, if you can be bothered to trawl through it all. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^Ha, if you can be bothered to flick back through this thread you can see my old stuff, if you can be bothered to trawl through it all. xD Come with me to the top of the world Where all our troubles melt away into the sky Embrace the feeling, my dear, cause there's No time for us to stay here much longer Just cut your losses, let's fly away together Let's show the world what they're missing out on... veery nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^Well that song...everything else I'd put here was pretty downtrodden stuff, so I wanted something else that had a more optimistic feeling to it, cause let's face it, I wouldn't want to be accused of being an emo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Ahhh more amazing stuff from the talented Hannah! And oooo, Jimmy, post more of your stuff, kay? X) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 HEY! your stuff's sooper dooper rad...cant wait for more...and whoever they are pestering to post, post something. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 this is the last from me for today this was quite difficult for me to write because (like hayley with misery business ) it's very, very real to me. it's about a struggle i made with my faith and belief in God, in fact a struggle i am still working with today.. because i have very little trust left to give, and putting my heart into something which may not even be real terrifies me; yet i feel that God could provide the support i need. i have seen summers rest in peace earth swept beneath their feet but can you help their pain? if to your wishes, they refrain i once stared up unto the sky parted my lips and let it fly a thousand griefs it held from each that troubled dove could not reach in time, i'll spit my heart out for the cause no cause for concern no cause for concern oh this is not the end my spinning mind can't comprehend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder oh this is not the end your honour they defend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder kiss my eyes and let me sleep bathed in your soft sincereity a wound to the heart is more serious than this head rush says to chant your every waking word should be classed as absurd but when you've got nothing else purely the truth looks false hand me the key to your voice i remember the choice in time, i'll spit my heart out for the cause no cause for concern no cause for concern oh this is not the end my spinning mind can't comprehend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder oh this is not the end your honour they defend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder sometimes we have to know that he will never go not when he's blessed this mess and set the world so you confess oh this is not the end my spinning mind can't comprehend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder oh this is not the end your honour they defend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder oh this is not the end your honour they defend lay down, lay your head on my shoulder i will be older but you won't get colder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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