kerrie Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 Thats AMAAAAAAAZING O___O or AWEEEEEEESOME -Peter Griffin(sp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jchurch004 Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 weeeee yea i like it too.. definitely one of my favorites ive done.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kerrie Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 it like goes in a story haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 Say Goodbye I thought I only had to ignore in order to forget Replace old by new to stop missing what I once had New sounds exciting but old is still alive So it's all messed up in an ordinary form of a fight I thought I was strong enough to handle What I'd gone through before But it was about a minute ago that I found out I was wrong Looking in the mirror, my vision's blurred with confusion Trying to recall my definition of perfection X Maybe it's time to say goodbye I can see my heart collapse in the middle of this life So it's time for the past to heal In any shape or form, whatever it takes to feel Breaking into pieces as I say those final words Goodbye to every most important thing that makes me feel hurt. You thought I was worth your caring and put all your trust in me Only to find out I'm the greatest liar The kind that tells you stories, made to make you bleed Showing you that change never goes without a fire You thought my stories were honest, a bit pure maybe Until I told you the truth and walked away You'd never think you'd be looking for a place far from me Wishing you'd never have to meet me again X Maybe it's time to say goodbye I can see my heart collapse in the middle of this life So it's time for the past to heal In any shape or form, whatever it takes to feel Breaking into pieces as I say those final words Goodbye to every most important thing that makes me feel hurt. I guess our thoughts were hopeless Based on the essence of what we wanted It's hard watching where it got us Knowing we're not going to change back So it's time to say goodbye.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jchurch004 Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 it like goes in a story haha yea i liked that too haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 ^Thank you. Lying was the only thing we both knew how to do I don't want to be your world' date=' only the words inside your head That keep you from failing the things you said And the things you do, make one whole story About that one papercut, that cut way too deep And now you don't know how to heal again Unless it's all a play and you're the greatest actress I guess you're the greatest actress cause every time I tried To fix you, you cried, don't you know you were supposed to smile? And every time you said you loved me it seemed real Pretty lies you told, but at least they were meant for me I remember looking at you, but I saw nothing at all Even your shadow ran away from your wall Do you recall that one time, when you promised you'd take care of me? Instead you ran away as hard as you could and let me bleed I heard a weak "sorry", said I'd believe it if you'd believe it too But I lied and walked away from a person I never really knew.[/quote'] wow, I really liked that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted July 5, 2006 Report Share Posted July 5, 2006 ^Thanks :]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nonxperfect Posted July 9, 2006 Report Share Posted July 9, 2006 Lying To You Is Easier Than Telling You The Truth About: well this friend i liked, well we talk everyday, but the way we talk to eachother is so different now because we made a xanga for news and stuff and we're gonna write articles and stuff. so now we only talk about that site and our articles, and i hate it. i want to talk the way we used to. me making fun of him because he thinks Stacey Farber is cute and laughing.... I hate the way we are now. We don’t act like we used to. I miss that way. More laughs, and good times. All we do now is talking seriously. Why? Why did this change come in us? Why did it come so fast? Why did it come at all? Will we ever be the same? I wish we could take things back. And never change. Stay the same. Laugh some more. Anything but this. I used to long to talk to you, now I long for our conversations to end. Am I just being emotional? Or is this real? I don’t want to think about it, but the change in us is all that is occupying my mind. Will I ever get used to this? Will my heart ever get used to this? This change, Is it for the better or for the worse? In the end will we still be friends? I hate the way this is changing us. Changing the way we act toward each other. Where did all the feelings I felt for you go? They were here last week, but the left without saying goodbye. Can we still talk like we used to, or are those days buried in the past? Too many questions that are unanswered, probably forever. I hate change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X~All.We.Know~X Posted July 9, 2006 Report Share Posted July 9, 2006 I write heaps, But there not very good >.< And its pretty long, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted July 9, 2006 Report Share Posted July 9, 2006 Post your stuff up if you want. Everyone does it, so why not be a total cunt and copy ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X~All.We.Know~X Posted July 9, 2006 Report Share Posted July 9, 2006 Woah, Your all so good! Sorry I don't know many of your names sorry >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted July 12, 2006 Report Share Posted July 12, 2006 Ok i wrote two new songs hope you guys like them Untitled: OK this song is about leaving home and someone could say how much they can't wait till they leave but once their gone they see being home is the only thing they want I'm standing in the crowd tonight wanting to go home - Cause where i stand doesn't seem so right - Being here isn't really what i want being home is what i need - Cause being here is to much for me - I've been here before so why do i wish to be home - I've said in the past before leaving home is what i need - But looking back now i see i was wrong cause now being gone - Makes me feel so wrong - I know what i've said before being gone was gonna feel so right - So tell me why i miss being home tonight - Standing here now doesn't make me feel so alive - Is it cause i left so much behind - Just A Game: Ok now this song is about an old friend and one night something went wrong between us, So yeah. I know i've put you through so much in the past - I wish i could just take it back - I never meant to hurt you that way - I guess i thought this was all just one fun game - Hurting you was a game i was never willing to play - I know i said you were never really there but - Looking back now i see all you did was try and care - So why did i decide to throw it all away - Was it cause i thought this could be just a game - I never thought i'd play - Letting you go isn't what i'm looking forward to - Cause leaving our memorise behind isn't something - I'm willing to do - It's gonna be sometime to let this go but know - This isn't what i've been waiting for this wasn't - A game i wanted to put you through - If i could take it all back just know i'd be there in a flash - Ok well i hope you guys like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X~All.We.Know~X Posted July 12, 2006 Report Share Posted July 12, 2006 Woah, Very Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted July 12, 2006 Report Share Posted July 12, 2006 Hey thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted July 19, 2006 Report Share Posted July 19, 2006 Heres a song i wrote a longgggg time ago. Me and a friend worked out exactly how it would sound so its all detailed lol. When i read it now it kinda sounds stupid to me. I love criticism! Tell me you hate it or love it...or just eh! Your tounge cutting through me like a blade I cant believe the words you say What happened to us The people we used to be All just a memory [scream] What happened to us [scream] [chorus] [scream all] Because all i see Is the hatred you have for me Why cant we go back Back to the way it used to be. What is that look in your eyes Is it love drifting from your fingertips [scream] The taste of your lips And all your lies [scream] [chorus] [scream all] Because all i see Is the hatred you have for me Why cant we go back Back to the way it used to be. You're killin me With the taint of your words You're killin me And its getting worse You're killin me And as our hearts break You're killin me I've had all i can take You're killin me [scream] With the taint of your words You're killin me [scream] And its getting worse You're killin me [scream] And as our hearts break You're killin me [scream] I've had all i can take [chorus] [scream all] Because all i see Is the hatred you have for me Why cant we go back Back to the way it used to be. [chorus] [slow / no scream] [drop to acoustic] Because all i see Is the hatred you have for me Why cant we go back Back to the way it used to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fueled By Oreos Posted July 19, 2006 Report Share Posted July 19, 2006 intense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted July 19, 2006 Report Share Posted July 19, 2006 Hahahahahah <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted July 21, 2006 Report Share Posted July 21, 2006 Okay. I do not like this. It is not complete. So if anyone has any ideas of how I can change it? Hmm I dislike it right now. *help needed* Empty Days Don’t they always say ‘a perfect story doesn’t know what perfect means’? I always thought I knew what fighting meant until I had to fight for real I though you understood the definition ‘being close’ You understood it far too well and hurt me most I could see, you thought too long and way too much I’d try to float along, setting my mind to deeper stuff Knowing exactly what I wanted wasn’t enough to make you try And you gave to me the opposite All I needed was a smile and so it broke my heart to see you fall the way you did. *Oh, you are my scar And I think of you when I say ‘Someone taught me when to walk away’ Searching for a sincere face, I walk away on empty days You expected me to be a cure I could never be But nonetheless I tried, hoping I could set you free I was disappointing and forgot how to care So I let you fall& showed you what it‘s like without me there. I can still hear you scream ‘please come back to me’ You tried to twist my mind by making me believe You needed me to keep you up without your wall Come on dear, we all knew you would fall * Walking off never meant I didn’t care, just not enough to fail myself Hate me if you want, we will finish this in hell Until that moment’s there, I will happily let go And learn how to decide which way I want to float Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X~All.We.Know~X Posted July 22, 2006 Report Share Posted July 22, 2006 ^ Oooohhh I do like it! I might as well post of mine. I'll only post a snippet of it because its very VERYYYYYY LONG. (Seriously its like 1700 words long) But its a poem. [Meh its not very good] You still leave me hopeless Yes, Its all for you Again. You are already sick of my helpless screaming Helpless Crying You left me slowly dying. This can’t be what I hoped for All this trouble Can’t possibly be true. We remember all the memories Keep them in our hearts Forever once more. Please sing to me Whatever it may be I will listen to your voice And listen to my heart break. Am just nothing now Do I still matter to you? No one seems to notice how much I cry for you You are the only beat in my heart. Lets go outside; Look upon the stars Wish to stay together Always~ My heart is beating fast We can’t seem to control it Every beat Every second Just for you. Leave my by myself To think about you in my sleep Leave me in the dark. Screaming out the poem Crying out my mistakes You still left of my heart How could you not see them? Sign your name across my heart; Leave me your entitles So I will always remember you~ If you for some strange reason want to hear the whole thing, PM Me and I will send it to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted July 23, 2006 Report Share Posted July 23, 2006 Sink or Swim Last time I closed my eyes you stood in front of me But when I opened them the room was empty I heard the sound of footsteps, I heard them disappear I felt a bit uncomfortable drowning in those tears The tears built a big swimming pool filled with punishment It forced me to survive the life that you had left Each step was more than I could take but I kept walking on Each step felt like a new mistake I could not afford *So tell me should I; Sink or swim Lose or win Can I take another day Living like today Is it time to say goodbye Goodbye and close my eyes Should I close my eyes for you? My legs grew old and tired, my mind needed a break But the waves in my swimming pool would not let me fade They kept pushing even though I was running out of air And when I thought I'd lose it I found the stairs I climbed and reached for the light I had not seen before Bright and so sincere, but it would only make things worse As I learned about life and this thing called happiness I was determined to show you, what you had missed * So I jumped back into my pool, my pool of punishment and grieve But the water would not allow me in, and said to me 'Her *life is such a nightmare*act is taking way too long' It kicked me out and screamed; Don't live your life for someone else's bleeding heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glorya Posted July 24, 2006 Report Share Posted July 24, 2006 Sink or Swim Last time I closed my eyes you stood in front of me But when I opened them the room was empty I heard the sound of footsteps' date=' I heard them disappear I felt a bit uncomfortable drowning in those tears The tears built a big swimming pool filled with punishment It forced me to survive the life that you had left Each step was more than I could take but I kept walking on Each step felt like a new mistake I could not afford *So tell me should I; Sink or swim Lose or win Can I take another day Living like today Is it time to say goodbye Goodbye and close my eyes Should I close my eyes for you? My legs grew old and tired, my mind needed a break But the waves in my swimming pool would not let me fade They kept pushing even though I was running out of air And when I thought I'd lose it I found the stairs I climbed and reached for the light I had not seen before Bright and so sincere, but it would only make things worse As I learned about life and this thing called happiness I was determined to show you, what you had missed * So I jumped back into my pool, my pool of punishment and grieve But the water would not allow me in, and said to me 'Her *life is such a nightmare*act is taking way too long' It kicked me out and screamed; Don't live your life for someone else's bleeding heart.[/quote'] wow this is so good i really esp like the chorus. you're an awesome writer mel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted July 24, 2006 Report Share Posted July 24, 2006 this is a really cheesy little tid bit I wrote about an older guy I recorded it too... http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=7A2CE35E2856A1B6 He probably figured out I just wanted to hold his hand He probably knew he'd be making too early of demands He probably thought it best- he ran, he ran But now he's giving in Again, again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Ok well i kinda relate to this but then again not really, anyways it's not that good but i tried 3 Little Words How can a year go by so fast How can our memorise just last Why is it now there's defect choices why can't we just go back Isn't it strange how people change in a years time isn't it weird when we had nothing to say now we have 3 little words that are begging to be said How can 3 little words be so hard to say i know how i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up the wrong way I keep telling myself it's not that hard I know how you make me feel so why is this beginning to be hard i know i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up in the wrong way those 3 little words can't slip out cause it always end in a way that hurts You make me feel so great so i need to say before it's to late How can 3 little words be so hard to say i know how i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up the wrong way I keep telling myself it's not that hard I know how you make me feel so why is this beginning to be hard i know i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up in the wrong way those 3 little words can't slip out cause it always end in a way that hurts Isn't it strange how people change in a years time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Ok well i kinda relate to this but then again not really, anyways it's not that good but i tried 3 Little Words How can a year go by so fast How can our memorise just last Why is it now there's defect choices why can't we just go back Isn't it strange how people change in a years time isn't it weird when we had nothing to say now we have 3 little words that are begging to be said How can 3 little words be so hard to say i know how i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up the wrong way I keep telling myself it's not that hard I know how you make me feel so why is this beginning to be hard i know i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up in the wrong way those 3 little words can't slip out cause it always end in a way that hurts You make me feel so great so i need to say before it's to late How can 3 little words be so hard to say i know how i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up the wrong way I keep telling myself it's not that hard I know how you make me feel so why is this beginning to be hard i know i feel and i know what i wanna say so tell me why it ends up in the wrong way those 3 little words can't slip out cause it always end in a way that hurts Isn't it strange how people change in a years time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 ^ I like it <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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