Emergency32 Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 Save Your Breath You get one last hit in this little game thinking i'll go down with nothing but my pain Now i'm looking in your eyes seeing this mistake you've made tonight Save your breath cause we're not through just yet this will be the day you'll soon regret I never would've thought you'd be the one up here tonight you use to be the one who could read between the lines well all that changed over just one night You never let me forget what went wrong in the past all you want to do is play this little game hoping i'll go down with nothing but my shame How long do you think you'll last with this little game that's called you plan? well let me be the frist to say your already through with this little game Save your breath cause we're not through just yet this will be the day you'll soon regret I never would've thought you'd be the one up here tonight you use to be the one who could read between the lines well all that changed over just one night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xLaiamore Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 Save Your Breath You get one last hit in this little game thinking i'll go down with nothing but my pain Now i'm looking in your eyes seeing this mistake you've made tonight Save your breath cause we're not through just yet this will be the day you'll soon regret I never would've thought you'd be the one up here tonight you use to be the one who could read between the lines well all that changed over just one night You never let me forget what went wrong in the past all you want to do is play this little game hoping i'll go down with nothing but my shame How long do you think you'll last with this little game that's called you plan? well let me be the frist to say your already through with this little game Save your breath cause we're not through just yet this will be the day you'll soon regret I never would've thought you'd be the one up here tonight you use to be the one who could read between the lines well all that changed over just one night That is what I call amazing and sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 Thanks!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 :]Sick of the blind eyes and deaf ears, won't hear what I see and the larvae we call people wriggling wreckless through society This is our home and we call it free so why the fuck are there chains on your hands and feet? Sick of the patterns and the lives on repeat and the premies who haven't opened their eyes yet to reality This is our home and we call it free so rip those self inflicted chains off your hands and feet. uhhhhm. i love you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 uhhhhm. i love you? hahaha <3333 thanks dood, love you, too. :] It was a manmade hole in a pair of sturdy jeans. It would take years to really look that way. I wanted it to look that way. I mess things up on purpose. But now it's a huge run in a pair of pantyhose. It's not even wearable anymore. Atleast it's not a coverup. You can see the tears in my skin through the tears in the hose. Reaching to put the tiny elastic threads back together. Something that can't be fixed. Only tangles and torture for fragile fingers who only wanted to help. My clumsy hands are only a weapon. And so are yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x3__kim Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 so i wrote this essay on "my heart" by paramore, and i would like it if you guys all read it, it'd mean a lot, its my thought into it, and know one has to agree with it, buts its just a thought you can read it here: http://www.xanga.com/Superpowersequals_superME/526724104/item.html or i'll post it on. Kim Mua 9/6/06 hour 2 Song Connection Ms. Nicholas My Heart by Paramore Of the many songs I’ve listened to, the term “Christian Music” you think of Holy songs and the words God, Lord, and Jesus. Some of you may agree some of you may not. I have recently realized that my one favorite song, its meaning, is actually about finding God again, and re-building your relationship with him. As you’re at your breaking point, and you realize you can’t do it alone, and you need the Lord in your life, and that you can’t do it without him, you remember he’s there for you. Though you may have shut him out in your life for a little bit, you know he’s still there, and he’s always willing to forgive, and reconnect you. You yearn for his love, and his comfort, and you realize he’s singing to you, and you’ll sing it back to him now, and your heart, and every breath you take, you’re doing it for him. You finally know how much you need him, and he’s the only one that will get you through, and pull you up, and he’s there for you. Why does this specific song relate to me? At first, I thought it was just a love song, to a boy of something, but then really thinking about it, it had nothing to do with a boy, and I was too blind to see through it. It relates to me, because sometimes it happens to me to, when you’re just so low, and you forget that you’re not alone, and that he’s there, by your side, and you need things to remind you of how you lucky you are to have him. For awhile, I too had shut him out of my life, and yearned for him. I had a feeling that he just wasn’t there, and no matter how much I needed him, I knew he wasn’t going to get me through what ever I was going through. But then I finally realized that, he is there, and he just wanted me to think of what I was doing, he was waiting for me to comeback to him. And I did, because he sang me the song, and now I’m singing it back to him. My heart does beat for him, and only him, and it’ll continue to, for a long time. Describing singing to God in a metaphor might be a little hard. To me, what it means is, Gods’ Word, if you read it, its like lyrics, he’s speaking to you in it, and he’s singing it to you. In order to have that relationship with him, you need to sing back, you need to do it like how he did. Read his words, talk to him, be confident about him, you’re his servant, and you sing to him, and his ears are always open, and he’s listening. And to him, your voice will always be beautiful. I have included the lyrics to this song, because I want to show you how much it means to me, and it doesn’t have the word “God”, “Lord”, and “Jesus” in it, but it talks about him, and now it’s obvious to me, and the meaning has really hit me. “I am finding out that maybe I was wrong that I've fallen down and I can't do this alone stay with me, this is what I need, please? Sing us a song and we'll sing it back to you we could sing our own but what would it be without you? I am nothing now and it's been so long since I've heard the sound, the sound of my only hope this time I will be listening. Sing us a song and we'll sing it back to you we could sing our own but what would it be without you? this heart, it beats, beats for only you this heart, it beats, beats for only you my heart is yours this heart, it beats, beats for only you my heart is yours (my heart, it beats for you) (please don't go now, please don't fade away)” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted September 10, 2006 Report Share Posted September 10, 2006 ^ i actually was on here a couple days ago and read that and i really like it. i thought it was very inspirational. got a little choked up, too. so yeah i was posting in the randomness thread and remembered that i wrote something for a project for my biology class last year and that i really liked it. so uhhm here goes.. Light and Cloud Explain to me where we went wrong Forgive me, for I know the truth We’re only singing a new song Excuse me, for I found the tune Must we scream? The pressure’s reading red Please turn off that machine Because it’s all in your head The heart of it speaks In parable and law We continue to preach He is real, you are flawed Must we speak again? It’s all getting old as the earth Now don’t get too vain You fell from the tree at birth Just hope we’re not the same Who knows where we go from this place? Fallen from tree or brush Lifted from leaves or the rust And they told us we would fall From the highest heights But our worst fear of all Was never to see the light Now feel the ground on your skin Stare up to the sun; were you right? Just hope we’re not the same Who knows where we go from this place? Fallen from tree or brush Lifted from leaves or the rust Were you rust or right? Did you see the light? Who knows where we go from this place? You will see the light They will see the light Just hope we’re not the same Who knows where we go from this place? Fallen from cloud or rock Lifted from the crowd or the flock And they told us we would fall From the highest heights But our worst fear of all Was the end of the fight Now feel the flames on your face Stare down at the sea; were you right? Just hope we’re not the same Who knows where we go from this place? Fallen from cloud or rock Lifted from the crowd or the flock Were you cloud or wrong? Did you see the shadow falling long? Who knows where we go from this place? You will see the light They will see the light *Note: the project itself was to make a magazine about Evolution and the poem was supposed to be based on like the creation/evolution debate. so yahhh. that's what it's about. i somehow figured out a way to make it seem lighter and vague, though. so yeahh. that is all. P.S.: sorry it's kinda long. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 ^ I love that it's really good. Sleep I've walked alone before It wont be different if you leave me here tonight All i have to do is follow Your lies to find my way back home and i'll do just fine without you here by my side I've been down this path in the past i don't need to ask why your leaving cause i already know all your lies I'll sleep just fine once your out of my life I'll survive if you walk away tonight cause i can't wait for the truth to come from you cause i know you can't live your life without your lies [scream] Say goodbye for good this time Sleep without a sound tonight knowing i'm gonna be fine I'll sleep just fine once your out of my life I'll survive if you walk away tonight cause i can't wait for the truth to come from you cause i know you can't live your life without your lies [scream] Don't waitfor my call tonight Just sleep tight with your regrets in your mind ^Backround: Sleep without a sound tonight knowing i'm gonna be fine [END] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 about a fight with my mom's boyfriend... When I fight, I know I'm right, and I always get the last word. I stand my ground until they're specechless and everyone knows I have more to say. Call me a little girl but as my body's tense I feel my transformation to a woman who knows better than you. With your elbow in my face like some kind of barrier. But you won't cry, I will. Does this make me that little girl? She looks back and away from me with sighs like "you're making something out of nothing" but you beckoned me. You'd "go in the room and have that conversation" with me. And I said I'd come in and have it with YOU. These words "I'm not scared" are self reassurance more than sticking up to you. But why should I fear this, I am a little girl and you're the one too weak to fight grown-up battles. With your elbow in my face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevor Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 Currently writing this song with a friend of mine, it's not done yet. Have you wondered what the trees would tell the sea, if the miles of sand didn’t lie in between, Have you suffered a pain at the base of your neck, From feeling time rush to your head, Have you watched the walls fall to the floor, And asked what’s fallen here before, Let’s say my words could wake their sleep, Would all these eyes still see skin deep chorus: The touch is gone It fell from my hands A tear beneath the dream that I had Stop there’s no cure, I’m a goner for sure Your chains held my heart to the ground The Silence in me The Silence in me Glass cutting swift at the seams Intricately…Silencing me Defending what rests underneath of what is verse2 as of now Be my guest, throw the first stone if you please I’ll stand still tied stiffly at the knees And when I blink, Ill whisper words of pain So my breath will spite all that remains This love will slowly then descend Crushed under time and small remnants Of what was once a love so full Turned by the tide of lies so cruel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted September 20, 2006 Report Share Posted September 20, 2006 I loved that... awesome job. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatsername104 Posted September 20, 2006 Report Share Posted September 20, 2006 thats' really good. here's something i wrote a while ago. it's about moving, and pretty much how i felt about, a month or two after it. it feels like you're getting somewhere but somewhere is really nowhere the same feeling of being obsolete gone, alone, forever away as if you were never tere floating away into nothingness becoming even more invisible in the world of the most visible people all around you seeing nothing looking right through you and you're standing there feeling so transparent wanting more but never getting it reaching, pushing out yet you hand never touches it making you feel worse in the world of the most visible where you aren't even visible you aren't even in sight of the person less than an inch away you aren't even seen by yourself only felt only smelt only heard but not even that loud not loud enough for you to be seen it's as if nothing wants to know you're there like you can't get out of the shell in the world of the most visible the world spinning around and you're not going with it you just standing there wondering why you are all alone wondering why you are all by yourself why you can't leave why you can't spin with the world the world doesn't care it doesn't care that you are by yourself just leave it just go in the world of the most visible there are always people who don't feel visible they want it most doing things to feel as visible as ever only to feel more invisible can't others see their pain see that they need the same clarity the rest of us have they want it need it feed off of it yet no one seems to notice in the world of the most visible 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
little_caro Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 ^^^^ cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
little_caro Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 Eummm. okay. my turn?? shorty : ''Flowers, candies and this girl in your dreams. Darkness, shadows and me in your nightmares.'' haha very bad =_=' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 ^ahh i like that. short but sweet. except dark at the same time. ahha. which is why i like it, the contrast between the two lines. i just remembered i still have something in my one profile on AIM, and it's from a while ago. i think at the time i wrote it i was thinking about my uncle, who, in short, is a jerk. except it's not necessarily ALL describing him.. it's more about like substance abuse, i guess? not that i even know that much about it, but what i do know about it is mostly from his example. In retrospect, in retrograde. Replay images of all past regrets, flipped, turned right side up on retinas receiving too much light. Search through last night's smoked cigarettes and hope for a trace of remembrance. The fingerprints were burned away with ammonia and nicotine, while you sipped away fears and one too many fight scenes. Obscure all lost "possessions" (if you know what i mean), make room for more of your worst bets. Focus on next year's headlines, where the walking dead will march in time with the beating of hearts, shattering glass, and all ticking of hours of the nights past. Get city hall on line one, here come the coughing fits. Now put on hold all inhibitions, the best is yet to arrive. Float in on all the poisons, the pills ingested that night when it had just begun. Fight through the recognition of what you have become. All eyes fixed on failure, the latest attempted suicide. But it didn't work quite right this time around the corner, the most sterilized of minds greets you with open doors, closed windows, and padded cells. Congratulations, self-destruction has finally paid off, because, oh, you lived through such hell. You're just destined for so much better (than what you rightfully deserve) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 HopeFull Dreamer Pack your bags and meet me out back we'll be gone Fast than you can catch your breath It's just me and you on this road tonight with the regrets we need to face and the mistakes we've made Lets not dream of what could be cause we'll never face the reality dreaming away wont help us with what we need to say Theres nowhere to run and nowhere to hide it's just me and you with this open sky We can't be hopefull dreamers for the rest of our lives so just take me hand and hold on tight cause it's time for us to face the regrets we made and the miastakes we try to hide Lets not dream of what could be cause we'll never face the reality dreaming away wont help us with what we need to say Theres nowhere to run and nowhere to hide it's just me and you with this open sky We can't be hopefull dreamers for the rest of our lives so just take me hand and hold on tight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ive seen love die_ Posted October 4, 2006 Report Share Posted October 4, 2006 about a fight with my mom's boyfriend... When I fight, I know I'm right, and I always get the last word. I stand my ground until they're specechless and everyone knows I have more to say. Call me a little girl but as my body's tense I feel my transformation to a woman who knows better than you. With your elbow in my face like some kind of barrier. But you won't cry, I will. Does this make me that little girl? She looks back and away from me with sighs like "you're making something out of nothing" but you beckoned me. You'd "go in the room and have that conversation" with me. And I said I'd come in and have it with YOU. These words "I'm not scared" are self reassurance more than sticking up to you. But why should I fear this, I am a little girl and you're the one too weak to fight grown-up battles. With your elbow in my face. I know I am late on this haha....but this is so awesome. :] EDIT: I am curious, is 'My Heart' reall about God? Like has Paramore come straight out and said it? It would make sense but I want concrete evidence before I specifically label it as that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
little_caro Posted October 5, 2006 Report Share Posted October 5, 2006 ^^ cool cool. I will do it one day... a long poem. haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted October 8, 2006 Report Share Posted October 8, 2006 Destiny's been wrong before In the depth's of my dreams I can't take anymore When life is nothing that it seems And you wish you could go back ----------------------------------- We can do this with open arms Or clenched fists With your stained red wrists And my devlish charm Wrote those in class friday lol. Rather short but oh well. *Edit: and here is one more.. I've seen stars in broad daylight And heaven in deepest of night But never eyes like yours I've heard the hero's plea And the babys' scream But never a voice like yours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted October 8, 2006 Report Share Posted October 8, 2006 "We can do this with open arms Or clenched fists" I liked that. And the last one is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted October 8, 2006 Report Share Posted October 8, 2006 and I guess I might as well post something I wrote last week This seemingly empty desk is not as it appears my eyes scour a blank surface scarred and scratched in bitterness in reality papers are scattered, scrapped and saved It's crowded with former and future stress failed dreams and disappointments offers and refusals notes and schedules neglected and ignored and if I looked at these contents I'd realise I'm on the same ambitionless road as you we'll laugh it out. 9 months to load a gun or pull the trigger on my life 9 months of fun or 9 months of strain months of lifelessness for future gain we'll laugh it out Fucking up is only easy for you to do So easy for you to judge me when I do You brought me down here now what do you want with me? Nothing? says so - the room's absence of you seeking revenge on false information jumping to conclusions and resorting to persuasion we'll laugh it out. 9 months following you down this road 9 months of you getting better and leaving me alone not knowing how to get back home we'll laugh it out you won't call me until tomorrow, with details of your night read through your eyes the smile in your mind upon hearing the lack of mine we'll laugh it out. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted October 8, 2006 Report Share Posted October 8, 2006 ^Your shit is too awesome megameg. >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GlitterElectric Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 ahh this won't go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GlitterElectric Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 eee poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genetick Posted October 11, 2006 Report Share Posted October 11, 2006 *joins the fun* Everything i've read here is amazing Gah ! What am i to do. Mmmkay, right, lets make it clear that what i'm about to write isn't supposed to be any good, i need some crit to help please ? If it's shit, i want to hear it, preferably with why it's shit and some tips on how to improve, but i need to hear it all the same. ...Of course, if it's any good, go mad and let me know 1. I hope you don't catch cold From that glance you shot me yesterday I hope you don't believe In what I thought you said I'm running away from what I'd left behind A memory that time can't fade away -Chorus- So let's gather round before our dreams And believe those lies we used to tell ourselves Shoot me down dead with your eyes, tonight Before we forget how to survive on our own All alone I hope those daggers fell short 'Cause that stare was laced with murder I hope you don't mean anything In that last love song I read I've fallen behind the last train home I'll never make it back afterall Shatter the skies Through your broken eyes Forget what it is to forgive And tell me it's gonna be fine Just tell me you're gonna be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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