The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Linney]

Your best yet, imho. Love it.

 

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alone?

all these years and we're still on our own

secrets and hiding never meant so much,

you hide and i'll seek.

i'll find you by that old rocking chair,

as it has been for always, still there

the creak of its bones speak louder than words;

the speech of young love is better misheard

 

yesterday ?

i've heard it's been abandoned after today

with the drama that rose up and flew off,

without permission or regard.

it found us and we fought half-heartedly

you gave in and it stopped and laughed at me;

"poor child" said the dream and crept away,

"can't convince nobody these days"

 

memories ?

if i recall they've best forgotten and tired

just like the people that own them,

so let's bury them at sunset.

but they'll jump when we least expect it;

they'll pounce when we most regret it

i'd rather be left in pieces in peace,

but choices mean nothing to fools.

 

I just have one word to say. AMAZING

[Jammer]

Alive

 

I learnt the hard way

Not to take life for granted

Saw it all crumble around me

Left at the bottom of the darkest pit

Evil intent crushed my dreams...

 

Selfishness and greed

Like a dagger to my spine

Left me broken on the ground

Felt as though it were futile

Temptation beckoned to me...

 

*chorus*

But here

I am alive

And I will continue to live

Now here

I am alive

And I will never give it up...

 

Wine and roses are a myth

This world is a cruel one

So much misery and pain surrounds us

Why should we carry on?

But listen to my words...

 

*chorus*

 

Brought back from the edge

Brought back from the brink

Brought back to this life

By the love of another

By the kindess of a stranger

By the joy of her smile

And so I give my eternal thanks

And pledge my love to her...

 

*outro chorus*

Here I am

I am alive

Thanks to your love

I am alive

Thanks to your kindness

Thanks to your care...

(repeat)

[777]

Like A Ghost

 

 

Another bad memory

Barges into today

When I thought it was buried deep down

Way deep down, I find it around

Theres nothing else to interfere here

I'm alone with my mind

Good, But more bad memories

Come back to follow me like a ghost

 

It's only been 4 hours

And I hear him cry

I can hear all of the hurt ones

Beating me up today

Another side comes to the rescue

Then I think I'm good

Then my own mind distorts my thought

And then my intentions are left misunderstood

 

And now I'm left talking to myself

And I realize I am bad

I can't find a way to make me better

And I can't have back the love I had

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ch-ch-ch-Chia!

[Jorgi]

don't make a sound for me

no one will hear and no one will notice

if we sit silently

remove all questions quickly,

because my hands and my cheeks are burning

and it's going to be too late

wait, th-th-th-this isn't alright

but i'm on fire tonight.

 

it was all simple words

that made the worst impression

'do not disturb'

get your things and leave her,

i'll wait here for a while at least, hoping

that this isn't too late

wait, th-th-th-that ain't right

but i'm on fire tonight.

[the1]

meh, I write lyrics for the band, so here we go!:

 

At least you let me down under clear skies,

You can't blame your tears on the rain

until the clouds come rolling in again

By then I'll be long gone

I'm taking my time on this (taking it on)

 

*I believe we have a score to settle

But talk is cheap, so I'm buying my time

Don't waste it on me*

 

I'm contemplating on borrowed dreams,

Stuck writing poetry,

Watching my hands fall apart at the seams

Now if I just hold it together for long enough,

I can make ends meet before I meet the end

 

So tear me up- there's enough to go round

I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd.

You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road

Drive on.

[777]

don't make a sound for me

no one will hear and no one will notice

if we sit silently

remove all questions quickly,

because my hands and my cheeks are burning

and it's going to be too late

wait, th-th-th-this isn't alright

but i'm on fire tonight.

 

it was all simple words

that made the worst impression

'do not disturb'

get your things and leave her,

i'll wait here for a while at least, hoping

that this isn't too late

wait, th-th-th-that ain't right

but i'm on fire tonight.

 

 

ahahah, This gets me excited! You're good!

 

meh, I write lyrics for the band, so here we go!:

 

At least you let me down under clear skies,

You can't blame your tears on the rain

until the clouds come rolling in again

By then I'll be long gone

I'm taking my time on this (taking it on)

 

*I believe we have a score to settle

But talk is cheap, so I'm buying my time

Don't waste it on me*

 

I'm contemplating on borrowed dreams,

Stuck writing poetry,

Watching my hands fall apart at the seams

Now if I just hold it together for long enough,

I can make ends meet before I meet the end

 

So tear me up- there's enough to go round

I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd.

You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road

Drive on.

 

I hope your singer does good with this, Because this is too good to ruin.

 

 

 

Edit:

 

A New Leaf

 

The winds of change

Have blown over a new leaf for myself

And I hope it stays that way

So I can say

I have changed and

I'm glad I'm still here today

It was a rough ride

It's very difficult not to end myself

I'm happy I'm not condemned

Or anything along the lines

 

I can feel confident in myself

Because I knew I rode it out

I sat and watched the storm pass by

I was scared, But I stayed out there

Sitting with the storm

As if it was my friend

Until the end

[Jorgi]

So tear me up- there's enough to go round

I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd.

You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road

Drive on.[/i]

 

The winds of change

Have blown over a new leaf for myself

And I hope it stays that way

So I can say

I have changed

 

Win win win, guys.

[Linney]

Wrote this today..

 

 

Beach for Liars

 

Dry those drops of love

And hope it won't

Be the latest news

Hide those heartbeats

That are so

Similar to mine

 

Forced to close my always open doors

Please forgive me

I can't take it anymore

 

These lies are killing me

Our words are always ready to tremble in

But God forbid, why, did I let you say it wasn't time

No way, I'm going to be stranded with you on this

Beach for liars

 

 

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A Tape Piece

 

Loud screams in the attic

Closed in a box

With a tape piece on

That says broken things

 

Forgotten pain

Left on it's own

Formed into lies that

Came from my lips

[777]

Niiice

 

 

You guys excite me.

[UrLittleDecoy]

you didn't treat me right

i don't know what i've done

you have born our fight

my feelings are all gone.

 

why does it have to hurt?

my heart is bleeding

you've broken my whole world

this is the worst feeling.

 

failure and deception

these are left for me

you have no reaction

please just set me free.

 

how did we come to this?

you were so well known

this isn't a honest kiss

now our love is all blown.

 

this is now the end

i waited for long

i used to be your friend

but i guess i was wrong.

 

 

...craap.

[777]

Nice poem!

 

 

 

Edit:

Fool

 

Something seems to bother you

Theres nothing I did to disturb you

What has made you so low

You used to be the one who'd know

Anything there is to be above everyone else

 

You stupid fool, You're such a tool

You're the person who loses in the end

You're the person who never knew

How to be a friend

Or what to do

When someone you love

Has been hurt again,

 

You stupid fool

 

Well maybe it's not your fault

Maybe it was someones else's

But I can never stop thinking for you

Or judging everything you do

I owe you words

Full of pain and hate

You'll never know it's you I despise

But it's my own opposite reaction

According to my lies

[Jorgi]

deceived or deluded ?

what a line to walk behind,

to walk along would be too daring;

in front would be far too alone.

 

did we build this city ?

with my hands that tremble

and terrible judgement that isn't fair,

we'll all crumble eventually

(i swear).

 

disapointment or delight ?

another fight you'll lose, once more

(with feeling)

i never considered such a disaster

your fists could give and take

(my mistake).

 

shall i tear us down ?

it's bound to happen sooner or later

and the suspense is killing us all;

we'll sing as we fall

(i'll sing for you)

 

(we'll scream as well fall

and pretend we're simply out of key,

you'll sing for us all)

[Jorgi]

deceived or deluded ?

what a line to walk behind,

to walk along would be too daring;

in front would be far too alone.

 

did we build this city ?

with my hands that tremble

and terrible judgement that isn't fair,

we'll all crumble eventually

(i swear).

 

disapointment or delight ?

another fight you'll lose, once more

(with feeling)

i never considered such a disaster

your fists could give and take

(my mistake).

 

shall i tear us down ?

it's bound to happen sooner or later

and the suspense is killing us all;

we'll sing as we fall

(i'll sing for you)

 

(we'll scream as we fall

and pretend we're simply out of key,

you'll sing for us all)

[Natasha]

did we build this city ?

with my hands that tremble

and terrible judgement that isn't fair,

we'll all crumble eventually

(i swear).

 

<3

[777]

Alright, So this one I don't feel safe at all posting.

But maybe I'm supposed to get over it.

 

 

 

 

 

The Opaque Thoughts

 

Well the simple passage here

Seems to be so real

The opaque thoughts and memories

Has never had no feel

It was all a ghost

Living inside my dream

It's what I really hoped for

But my answers aren't what they seem

 

There seems to be

Another catch

Just to please you

You don't hold my love

Nor my hate

I'm just looking at you

What do you think

What do you bring

That makes me scared

Is there another one

Another sun

Another friend

That ever cared

 

You deserve my careful thoughts

All the safe and dangerous

We're blinded by the sun

It's begun

It's time to give back

What was done for us

 

There seems to be

Another path

To get you what you deserve

It's impossible

Even for you

Or for anyone unlike me

Then I see, You don't deserve

 

Your semi looking autograph

Has stayed here for so long

Your presence and your essence

Has never felt so real

It was all a ghost

An epic hoax

The architect had no feel

[Jorgi]

<3

 

(:

 

Your semi looking autograph

Has stayed here for so long

Your presence and your essence

Has never felt so real

It was all a ghost

An epic hoax

The architect had no feel

 

I don't understand "your semi looking autograph", but that stanza is just. Like. I just love it. It's amazing.

[777]

It's...One of those things that no one else would understand, But yourself.

 

 

Savvy?

 

Edit:

 

 

Geez, Words and other things are pouring out my minds cup!

 

 

Friend

 

I'll argue with you

But I'll get tired someday

This isn't a warning

Or a threat

It's just that we haven't

Been through the worse yet

I know the day will come

And we won't have no more fun

And we'll hate each other

Even before our "relationship"

Is done

 

Lets not keep scores

Or be in debt to the other

Lets forget about our hateful words

And I'll tell everyone I love her

Lets see what happens

Even though we know whats to come

Maybe it will be fun again

Until we see the end

Lets have fun while we can

My evil friend

 

We're nothing special

We're nothing fun

We're nothing to other peoples eyes

[Linney]

Chris, that was just amazing

[777]

I'm guessing you don't check your CP often Linney, But we still need to trade the chicken for the laundry! Meaning the switcharoo!

[Linney]

^Haha Sry, I've been really busy with school.. But yeah, I know! I've been writing lots of stuff lately but nothing that good.. I'm trying =)

[777]

anything will do Linney.

 

As long as it's by you !

 

Edit:

 

The Music

 

Here comes the rush

Of empowerment

I can do anything

I can break cement

Is everyone going through this

Other than me

 

I hear a voice, I've heard it so long

Why do the older people say it's so wrong

They say music will do this to you

I won't let them take my thought

I won't give up all the things I've fought

I won't throw away my rewards

I won't refuse what life has brought

I'm walking on my own big journey

The priceless inspiration of music

Will do this to you

 

Here comes a great big tidal wave

It's going to destroy

My big city of doubts

With every single demon to wash away

All of the friendly sound

Invading my thought

With no one around

To say they've taught

All the things music

Will do to you

[Guest Arya]

Wow....Jorgi and Christopher, they're...beautiful...

[Jorgi]

^(:

 

 

 

pardon me, but the imprint you left

and the footprint stepped is not quite as

perfect as imagined.

traitors fell for your voice;

i'll fall for your eyes

and you'll fall at my feet.

 

i swallowed your pride when

your throat was too dry,

i took the blow and the black eye

when you asked,

who's weaker ? don't ask

who knows.

 

the buildings that fell from your gaze,

the lives you changed and helped and failed,

you're not enough.

i screamed so you'd hear;

passion is voiceless,

your voice is passionless

 

we're all hopeless till we leave

and the world will fall at my feet.

[777]

You're greatness, Jorgi.

[Jammer]

The Off Position

 

Listen to yourself

Love the sound of

Your own shrill voice

The one that drives me insane

Drives me to distraction...

 

*chorus*

Shame that we're only human

Shame that we don't have a power switch

Cause I'd leave you in the off position

For the whole of time...

 

The whole world knows

Yett you keep talking anyways

Wish I could shut you up

I'm sure I'm not the only one

Pop that head of yours...

 

*chorus*

 

Just accept the fact

No-one wants to hear

Your illusion of grandeur

At the least not me

You're not wanted around here

So just walk out that door

And don't dare look back...

 

*chorus*

 

Left you in the off position

Did a favour for everyone

You still don't see it our way

No more of your incessant drone

Freed forever from you...