Emergency32 Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 I just just wrote this, so i don't have a name yet. This wont last forever soon all you'll have are their lies would you really give up everything cause they said it was right is this where it ends and i have to say goodbye can't i open my eyes and everything could be fine or is this real and your already out of my life you think they'll stick around for so long but they'll turn cold and you wont know where to go soon you'll fade away and they wont have to hear what you say all you have are their lies you really gave up everything cause they said it was ok to them you were gone faster then a blink of an eye you gave yourself away now you don't now what to do but you're the only one to blame even if you can't explain you could never disappear from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haunted_dreams55 Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 ^ I love it Des!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 i love that Desiree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jtrosper Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 some people have their stories but here's mine in ryhmemy poem about my life and my way of telling people that don't understand how i feel...To Write Love On Her Arms... 13 reaseons to bleed- the yelling continues outside of her door as she lies in bed thinking "Why am i here for?" waiting as darkness creeps bye and so she silently begins to cry a friend calls her phone but she just wants to be all alone her friends continue to stab her back and at school she's the one to attack. for no one knows that she has feelings too but everyone knows what she plans to do. she takes the scissors and rips it across her arm, it bleeds... her life is lost... nothing to do except cry and she begins to wonder why of all the lives in this world hate picked her, this lonely girl she wonders why no one loves her anymore and asks herself "what am i here for?" 13 years old the cutting slows down but she has no smile only a frown... people at school pick on her only because they have no clue she suffers they see the scars and begin to taunt and the laughs grow louder because the memories haunt her each night in fact they go away but always comes back a pool of tears on the floor she asks herself "do they need me anymore?" no one knows her story they don't ever care so she asks herself "why is my life so unfair?" 13 scars remains here for everyone to see and she asks herself "why did hate pick me?" ----- hope you liked it cuz i know it probably sucked... o man this was really amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 Thanks Carla and Rebekah =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 New! Yay! haha =] Over Again Make believe was the only thing that made everything ok you never Botherd listening your lies were the only way we knew how to communicate This has gone awfully far but you keep on running anyway (You watch it all crumble down till you turn away) You carry on more then you can take till you fall flat on your face You know this should be better then what it is but your lies are the only thing you find comfort in You've had your chance to do it over again (but you take advantage of what you can) Make believe was the only thing that made everything ok you never Botherd listening your lies were the only way we knew how to communicate You carry on more then you can take till you fall flat on your face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 i really like this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haunted_dreams55 Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 Des I love all your songs!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 She thinks too hard about too many things Things that don't matter Or that shouldn't matter but do She thinks too long about too many things Things that steal away her sleep Or invade her dreams when she does drift off She thinks too often of too many things Things that should be forgotten quickly But that she dwells on for days, weeks, months She thinks so much about so many things Because her thoughts are all she has And when she stops thinking she'll have nothing left 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 ^ i love that =] aw, thanks Rebekah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted January 29, 2007 Report Share Posted January 29, 2007 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted January 31, 2007 Report Share Posted January 31, 2007 Say goodbye And time goes by when you start to make everything right it's hard to let go of the things you knew you hold back your tears when you say goodbye you don't let them see you're scared inside the stars look down on you tonight to let you know you'll be alright you close your eyes to take a look back on the place you'd never let your memorise fade at you hold back your tears when you say goodbye you don't let them see you're scared inside the stars look down on you tonight to let you know you'll be alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haunted_dreams55 Posted January 31, 2007 Report Share Posted January 31, 2007 ^ aw I love that Des!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted February 1, 2007 Report Share Posted February 1, 2007 ^ thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted February 1, 2007 Report Share Posted February 1, 2007 go desiree i like that one. lol i was hyper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted February 1, 2007 Report Share Posted February 1, 2007 Say goodbye And time goes by when you start to make everything right it's hard to let go of the things you knew you hold back your tears when you say goodbye you don't let them see you're scared inside the stars look down on you tonight to let you know you'll be alright you close your eyes to take a look back on the place you'd never let your memorise fade at you hold back your tears when you say goodbye you don't let them see you're scared inside the stars look down on you tonight to let you know you'll be alright That's very good The writing is very pretty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted February 3, 2007 Report Share Posted February 3, 2007 ^ that is very pretty i'm gonna come post a song here one of these days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 This isn't finished... but yeah goin through some hard times :/ Gotta write...right? I can't pretend that I'm not hurt I can't pretend that I am worth... any of this I can't pretend that I'm not hurt I can't pretend that I deserve... any of this Come clean tonight upon silence Come clean with myself and on my skin Can't say I didn't want to rid myself of everything. Come clean and I'm overwhelmed I've ignored these multiplying wounds for too long. I fought myself for all of you Now I'm left to heal these aching bruises... too weak to take care of myself. All over the city, friends soundly sleep I fight myself but I've lost the things I couldn't keep... and they're gone forever. All over the city, friends wake from dreams I've only tossed and turned replaying all I've seen I'm castaway, I'm lost at sea I swam too far and I swam too deep... to make it up in time. I reach for hands too far to grasp I answered you but you never asked I just begged for your attention. So once again I'm left alone Breaking the things I've strived to own.. cause they could never replace you. Turn off my light and on my fan To block the sounds from coming in It's an easy escape. Look at my phone to see who's called An empty screen but that's all my fault... cause I'll never call my friends. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatsername104 Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 i really like that Megan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 This isn't finished... but yeah goin through some hard times :/Gotta write...right? I can't pretend that I'm not hurt I can't pretend that I am worth... any of this I can't pretend that I'm not hurt I can't pretend that I deserve... any of this Come clean tonight upon silence Come clean with myself and on my skin Can't say I didn't want to rid myself of everything. Come clean and I'm overwhelmed I've ignored these multiplying wounds for too long. I fought myself for all of you Now I'm left to heal these aching bruises... too weak to take care of myself. All over the city, friends soundly sleep I fight myself but I've lost the things I couldn't keep... and they're gone forever. All over the city, friends wake from dreams I've only tossed and turned replaying all I've seen I'm castaway, I'm lost at sea I swam too far and I swam too deep... to make it up in time. I reach for hands too far to grasp I answered you but you never asked I just begged for your attention. So once again I'm left alone Breaking the things I've strived to own.. cause they could never replace you. Turn off my light and on my fan To block the sounds from coming in It's an easy escape. Look at my phone to see who's called An empty screen but that's all my fault... cause I'll never call my friends. Wow. That's amazing! Two thumbs up to that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted February 15, 2007 Report Share Posted February 15, 2007 aaaa i haven't been on the boards at all in months! it's been forever. but i just wrote something about a week ago for a school project, but it's one of those cool projects where you basically have complete artistic/creative freedom. we had to write a "Song of Yourself" based on Walt Whitman's "Song of Myself", his style of writing, etc. . . . Song of Myself: A Memorial Compost “I celebrate myself, and sing myself, And what I assume you shall assume, For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you.”* I despise position, and Time in itself, The fifth of three, I lie in wait For eager yearnings lie in me I am the young conscience of ages passed Through generations of squalor and consequence unconsidered; Scrutiny of premature life and overdue death The solution of eternal rest, the pendulous weight on lids From homes of sunken hopes, drift on zephyrs The propensity for a hundred windows (and yet more doors) Ours are twenty-five, at most, suppressed and overcast By gusts and chill of bone in an infertile winter so dry Ambulant figures frozen on gaping sills; groping for cord Affixed, adhered to jambs indefinitely wide; impending grasp on boundary Limbs embracing vestige, the familial tapestry of miscarriage The walkway circumscribed with tassels - the fingertips and tiptoes Demarcate intersecting cul-de-sac and sidewalk cracks we toed in summer’s eve Sunlight glanced off glassy fields, backdrop of their exchange [of us] Gazes across sins enclosed in palms slick and shining in nervous salutation For every bad handshake where limbs secede to sidewalk streets: Surrendering vestigium for Sweet Syringe, congested like broad boulevard at five We passed through unbeknownst to us and returned piece by piece; shattered Stones that perforated arms and legs outstretched, surrounding sunken ship, Our fragments, filaments of bulbs - whence flower never formed As sunlight did object to us, and fluorescent now our Black Eyes reject Finally abandoned in name - O, dear Susan, how you left us blind! Sentence barely formed, she found me somnolent and nauseous from the fumigated hole The fragments, legs and arms they spent, had folded in on one and all To protect in suffocation, emblems collapsing on face and mouth Her unnecessary prying hands to wrench me from abyss - toward exploration Through the universe of great exchange and remembrance of countenance, All sick and swift - the lies, the surrogates, to battle against the faults in the face of the clock My Sweet Syringe, the melody of nights up in arms against the past encounters The tune of praise to savior and salvation among the rusted cogs and wheels *the first three lines are actually from Walt Whitman's poem.. it was required. i'll probably also post what i wrote before that influenced a lot of this. i'll do that sometime soon. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted February 16, 2007 Report Share Posted February 16, 2007 ^Thats cool. Must've been a fun project [no name]4 i hate making you feel like shit but thats all you are nothing more and probably something less but i admit i must confess i think you're beautiful standing there mocking me you piece of shit i hope you know i love you i was just another bad habbit from every inhale of a ciggerette i was the smoke that made you choke just another bad habbit every shot from that glass cup you took i was the poison flowing through you its a good thing i left you with silence so you could sit and think about what i didnt say what i wanted to tell you everyday it didnt take long for you to get over it maybe you deserve to feel like shit but thats all you are nothing more and probably something less but i admit i must confess i think you're beautiful i was just another bad habbit from every inhale of a ciggerette i was the smoke that made you choke just another bad habbit every shot from that glass cup you took i was the poison flowing through you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted February 21, 2007 Report Share Posted February 21, 2007 ^ i like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haunted_dreams55 Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 This is a poem that I wrote the other day. Some of it I would say relates to me and some of it doesn't. This is also my first poem I ever wrote, so its not that good. I uselly write short stories. When I was Young Tell me a story when I was young When I didn't care about life When I felt so free Tell me a story when I was young Did you love playing with me? Was it fun for you as it was for me? Tell me a story when I was young Was I as small as the say? Did dad love me anyways? Tell me a story when I was young When you embraced me in your arms Oh how they felt so warm Tell me a story when I was young Do you miss me now that I am gone? Do you sing our song? This is our time to say goodbye So please don't cry I'm safe here with my heavenly father So please don't cry And say goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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