Guest Arya Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 hahahah dang lol...were talking bout a half of a full length cd right there...lol...you should find you some people to play music with. Play music with me! Haha. Those are awesome lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Haha, thanks. I'd love to, but I don't think I can get into your padded room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Awww, man, that's right....I'd find a way, but I can't get out of this dang straitjacket.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 Insomnia and Baby Steps Squinting at the screen, Francisco clicked on a pair of tiles to eliminate them from the game. It was getting harder and harder to read the small tiles, probably because it was getting so late, but though he had to get up in a few hours for class, Francisco could not seem to get himself to go to bed. It wasn’t that he couldn’t sleep—he was sure he’d be out in an instant if he just laid down—but rather that he just didn’t want to. To sleep was to allow the day to end, with him no closer to any one of his goals than he was when the day started. Of course, sitting at the computer playing puzzle games at two in the morning wasn’t bringing his goals any closer, but the idea of going to sleep was so distressing that he tended to put it off as long as possible by any means he could find. His vision was blurring now so that no amount of squinting could make the tiles legible. With a sigh Francisco stretched before removing his hat and running his fingers through his hair. After shutting down his computer he left his hat on the desk and climbed up into his bed. Just as he had guessed it was very quickly that he slid into sleep. With any luck there’d be no nightmares tonight, and tomorrow he’d take some kind of step forward, even if it was only a small one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 okaayy. this is basicly the most personal thing ive ever written, as of now hah. it came to me in school. so i tried remembering it all day haa. its a song, i suck at songs but i dunno it just came to be randomly in study hall haha. its about my friend that ikilled himself a few months ago basicly. i know it sucks, i SUCK at songs. so dont be TOOOOOOO hard on me please haha Rest in peeace, my dear friend. Untill that time & place that will meet agaaain. You went too soon.. What could iii do? I feel so lost and confused. Ooohh. Rest in peace my dear frieennd... Till we meet again. Its been so long, It feels so wrong. Im writing this song...for you. What else could iii do? to show you thaatt... i miss you. Rest in peeace, my dear friend. Untill that time and place that will meet agaaain. You went too soon.. What could iii do? I feel so lost and confused. Ooohh. Rest in peace, my deeaar frieennd... Till we meeet again. Its been three long MONTHS since you went away, But now that i knoow, that ill be okkaayy what else could iii say? ooohh soo much moore to say. ill be okayy. Rest in peeace, my dear friend. Untill that time and place that will meet agaaain. You went too soon.. What could iii do? I feel so lost and confused. Ooohh. Rest in peace, my deeaar frieennd... Till we meeet again. Ohhh you left me here, all aloonnee. i want you to still be here, Ooohh. Life isnt fair, This is UNfair! i need you now! Ooohh ooohh Someone.. Is watching over meee. Someone.. Is wacthiingg overrr MEEEEE. YEEAAAHHH! Rest in peeace, my DEAR FRIEND. Untill that tiiime and place that will meet agaaain. You went too soon.. What could iii do? I feel so lost and confused.. Ooohh. Rest in peace, my deeaar frieennd... Till we meeet again. OH YES WE WILL MEET AGAAAIIIN. OOOHHH AGAIN. (Someone..Is watching over meee) (^Repeat 4 times^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascitiesburn07 Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 ^ that is really good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Yeah agreed. that is really good. Sorry about your friend<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 thank youuuu, and thanks ha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 Oh-whoa Lately I've been feeling so depressed And stressed It seems I'm finally paying the cost So lost I'm not quite sure what's happening Not sure what's going on I'm losing my mind, soon it will be gone Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everyone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Oh-whoa Lately I've been dying of suspense So tense It seems at last I have come to the end No friends I'm not quite sure where they are going Not sure where they'll be I'm all alone right now, that's what I see Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everyone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everyone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 Oh-whoaLately I've been feeling so depressed And stressed It seemd I'm finally paying the cost So lost I'm not quite sure what's happening Not sure what's going on I'm loding my mind, soon it will be gone Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Oh-whoa Lately I've been dying of suspense So tense It seems at last I have come to the end No friends I'm not quite sure where they are going Not sure where they'll be I'm all alone right now, that's what I see Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Can anyone help me grab ahold? Can anyone hold my hand? Everyone's turning away and I don't understand Can anyone help me get my footing? Can anyone help me stand? Everone's turning away as quickly as they can I don't understand Wow. So I pretty much love that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 Give Me The Key To Your Heart I can see right through you Don't try to hide You tell yourself that this is temporary And the pain will subside Let me in to help you I don't want you to float away from me I know you think there's nothing that can be done But I think a little diffrently Give me the key to heart I'm coming inside To repair the damage And take away that's died (had a little trouble with the end) =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 i wrote this in the car =] i was inspired by the play wicked =] BARBIE look at the girl in the back so pretty and perfect but she is cold hard plastic and thats that. she has beautiful blue eyes so pretty and perfect but she will never look rigth at you maybe she is just too shy? she has along slender body oh so pretty and so perfect but you will never feel its warmth what makes her such a hottie? why does every boy want someone so pretty and perfect she has an empty head but she is someone you can shun. who wants a Barbie doll? they are on sale now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascitiesburn07 Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 ^ O GOSH lol...thas funny lol... "She is cold hard plastic" lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 i wrote this in the car =] i was inspired by the play wicked =] BARBIE look at the girl in the back so pretty and perfect but she is cold hard plastic and thats that. she has beautiful blue eyes so pretty and perfect but she will never look rigth at you maybe she is just too shy? she has along slender body oh so pretty and so perfect but you will never feel its warmth what makes her such a hottie? why does every boy want someone so pretty and perfect she has an empty head but she is someone you can shun. who wants a Barbie doll? they are on sale now... dude.......thats, fucking genius. haha seriusly! i LOVE that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 Good job, Courtney! That's cool, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 oh thank you. it really means alot you like it! i have another peom thats published =]. ill post it later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 ;337820'']Wow. So I pretty much love that. Thank you. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 Here's a little something....it's about a music gig that was in my dream the other night. xD XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX "Do you mind?!" I shouted at the 17-year old who had just jabbed me in the ribs with her elbow, the same spot I'd been jabbed in all night. I was sure I'd have a hell of a bruise there at the end of it all. She just ignored me and kept on bouncing, jabbing me again as if to say 'Shush you, I'm trying to enjoy the show!'. Bruised ribs aside, it was a hell of a night so far. It wasn't often I turned up to music gigs by myself, but tonight I thought it would be allright to make an exception. And what ane xception to make. The noise was deafening, what with hundreds of young people bounching, chanting, shouting, screaming, singing along to every word. Not since the Foo Fighters had I been in such an intense crowd: back then, two crowd surfers landed on my head. Tonight, twelve of them had so far. The band finished up their current song, and rapturous applause followed. I whooped and clapped as loud as I could, my own voice drowned out by those around me. "Thank you Newcastle!" cried out the lead singer in that strong Nashville twang of theirs. "This is the first time we've played here ever, so it's an honour to have you all come along for the night!" More whooping and clapping went up as Newcastle showed their approval. Someone trod on my sore big toe and I winced, but I kept smiling like an idiot. Then I realised I was only 10 feet from the front of the stage and it's line of baldy security guards. It was then I lifted up the thing I'd been carrying with me all night and threw it at the stage as hard as I could. Normally I threw like a girl, but that moment must have been a fluke as the bunch of slightly crumpled roses landed at the foot of the microphone stand on stage. Fate truely must've been on my side then when the singer suddenly looked down and saw the red flowers wrapped in paper at their feet. They stooped to pick them up and faced the crowd again. "Aww, this is so sweet!" they said, as more whooping went up. "Who bought these for me tonight?" Several arms went up, but luckily since I was taller than most of them I was picked out of the throng. The singer's finger pointed towards my face. "You there! Mind getting your ass up here?" I couldn't move faster if my life depended upon it. I was at the front barrier, being hoisted up onto the stage by the security blokes, within maybe 7 seconds of being asked up. I awkwardly rolled onto the wet stage and got to my feet, getting a nice view of the several hundred persons in the venue for the night. So that's what all these bands feel like... "So Mr. Mystery flower thrower," asked the singer, putting a petite hand on my shoulder. Or at least, tried to: she was fucking tiny compared to me. Next thing I know, a mic was being shoved into my face. "What's your name and where do you come from?" Trying to keep my nerves in check, I spoke into it. "I'm James, and I'm from County Durham." Some sort of cheer went up from within the crowd. Not bad for my first ever stage appearence, I thought. "And how much did these roses cost you, James from County Durham?" she asked me next, her smile showing a brace of pearly white teeth. "£30," I told everyone within mic-shot. "Worth it though. It got me up here next to you didn't it?" She seemed to blush and turn away, her band mates grinning or laughing in response to my latest revelation. "And why did you want to get up here?" she asked, trying to keep her composure. I swallowed my pride to say my next carefully-rehearsed line. "Cause I love you. In a completely platonic sense, obviously." She laughs again at this part, and seems to blush even more than before, then next thing I knew her arms were around me to give me a rather energetic hug for someone of her petite stature. I returned the favour, grinning like an idiot probably. I couldn't really remember much. What I do know is that her hair smelt nice. Like apples. Or was it strawberries? "See, this is why we love you Brits!" she said, facing her audience once more. "You're so damned nice and adorable. Now James, mind showing us a stage dive?" Oh yes, I thought, another life-long dream fulfilled in the same night. Taking a short run up, I ran and threw myself over the bald heads of the security guards below, while probably pin-wheeling my arms pathetically as well, and landed shoulder-first in the writhing mass of bodies below me. Luckily, they held, and next thing I knew I was being slowly carried away from the stage gradually. "There goes James!" she shouted, pointing towards me. "Be sure to give him a hug if you see him after the show, cause he's a super cool dude! This next one's for you, James!" Another cheer of agreement went up, and Paramore continued on into their next song of the night. Which one it was, I had no idea, as I still had the smell of Hayley Williams' hair in my nostrils, and that's all that mattered to me right now. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Yes, I'm sure you were probably able to work out which band I was meant to be seeing at this gig, and it was probably a bit close to soft porn at some points, but what dreams aren't? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 That was a pretty neat dream. You wrote it out pretty well, too, except it was kind of annoying that you kept referring to the lead singer in plural form. "slowly carried away from the stage gradually" is kind of redundant. "Smell of ...hair still in my nostrils" sounded a little more awkward than romantic, but maybe that was what you were going for. Again, pretty neat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 ^ I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Oh well sorry for that, but I wanted to try and give an air of mystery over who this band was, but I'm sure 'Nashville twang gave it away early. And I'll freely admit I'm no great romantic, so if you could excuse the awkwardness that'd be much appreciated. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Okay, I'm running out of 'concept ideas' to write a new poem. I wanna try something different. Any ideas neone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 dude.......thats, fucking genius. haha seriusly! i LOVE that. really? thanks =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted August 27, 2007 Report Share Posted August 27, 2007 yes! i do haha i dont know why, but when i read it it sounded really sweet. Okay, I'm running out of 'concept ideas' to write a new poem. I wanna try something different. Any ideas neone? id help you, but all i can think of at the moment are like deressing things haah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 27, 2007 Report Share Posted August 27, 2007 ^ What does deressing mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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