Guest Arya Posted August 9, 2007 Report Share Posted August 9, 2007 Wow, Jorgi! I love your stuff! I was going to send you a couple of mine over MSN, but figured I could just post it here or something, haha. This is an old Christian poem I wrote. It doesn't have a title, haha. --- Let go… Don’t give in to it You don’t know… All the consequences Do you really think You’ll come out unscathed? Do you really think You can do this alone? Let go… Don’t give it control You don’t know… How much this hurts me Think about these actions Think of what they’ll do You don’t want to be bound By chains of addiction, do you? So let go… I am here to help you You don’t know… What the future holds A door is open for you Take it, walk through it The other side is the truth Make the choice and believe Let go, let go Give yourself to Christ You now know You have someone to love you He opened his arms For you, oh for you He opened his heart To save you Let go…oh, let go Let Him have all of you You now know You are lost no longer You now know You are free. ---- This one is a song I wrote a couple weeks ago. ----- Alternative What do you do When all the world fades When you see everything in grey There’s no alternative What can you do When a child’s life is taken away Snuffed out like the dead candle wick Life’s color bleeds away Control ripped from your hands When you can’t meet all the demands CH: I can call on you When there’s nowhere else to run You can make me feel brand new Leaving me a cleansed person I can call on you; you’re my alternative See what happened A new life is celebrated A death is mourned There’s nothing else to say I realized We all have numbered years So live like you never have before This is our alternative I’m held gently in your hands Never changing with the sifting sands CH ----- I'll post more when I'm not so lazy, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 11, 2007 Report Share Posted August 11, 2007 Awesome arya I'm incredibly bored, so i decided to be all ANGST SCRIBBLINGS AGOGO Blargh. >> i'll sit and talk with you for a little while if only to hear you laugh and make you smile 'cause i'll be the first to admit that this is all going a bit wrong but i'll do my best to keep it painless and reassure you that you're blameless and you'll be one less thing to worry about and i'll be one less thing to whine about and did i ever tell you that i can't stand you? I swear i was thinking it far too loud did i ever say that i was over you? long before i told you out loud and it wasn't your fault but i'm getting out before it's too late i never planned to hate you (the way i do) just one last request to escape your darkness hidden beneath those eyes whatever you do don't drag me down with you 'cause i couldn't care less if i tried but i'll do my best to keep in touch and as i leave i'll wish you luck with the next sorry bitch you fall in love with as long as you're out of love with me i'm sorry for the way i said it but i'm not sorry it's like this at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 So here's one of our songs, we're gonna be performing it this weekend, cause we're throwing this big party for my grandma and grandpa, and so we wrote this for them, lol, more to come: “You” Loud Whispers I’m running down the sidewalk Chasing the ice cream truck My shoelaces are untied I trip on my chucks Then I’m lying there bleeding for all to see But then you come speeding here to rescue me You picked me up and carried me home (You had things to do, but never left me alone) Chorus Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat You grabbed one of the sweets for me And told me not to let mommy see You giggled, and I laughed We shared something special that I wish would have last When you came and visited You brought me all these toys You put a smile on my face And filled my heart with joy When it was time to go home I know I would see you again Whenever I felt alone You’d always be my friend You always pinched our cheeks and called us you little babies (You always loved us, even when we were lazy) Chorus Now that we’re all grown up We’ve appreciate what you’ve done We did so many things together We had so much fun Even though we don’t see each other As much anymore We’ll still be a family Living rich or poor Chorus 2x Bridge This song maybe just simple chords, a simple tune But we will sing this song for the both of you Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat You grabbed one of the sweets for me, and told me not to let mommy see You giggled, and I laughed We share something special I know will last That was very gooood ! So sweeet .. ;> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 F.U. You broke my heart But I guess I always knew you would You told me lies And lies, they always sound so good Well I'm falling, falling, here and now Gotta get to my feet somehow I'm falling under and it's all your fault You carved these woulds and poured on salt I'm falling under but I'll stand some day And then you'll hear what I have to say You made me cry But for you it's such an easy task You say "what now?" As if you really need to ask Well I'm falling, falling, falling still Entirely against my will I'm falling under and it's all your fault You carved these woulds and poured on salt I'm falling under but I'll stand some day And then you'll hear what I have to say Well I'm falling, falling once again What the hell was I thinking then? I'm falling under and it's all your fault You carved these woulds and poured on salt I'm falling under but I'll stand some day And then you'll hear what I have to say What the hell was I thinking then? That's what I have to say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 F.U. You broke my heart But I guess I always knew you would You told me lies And lies, they always sound so good Well I'm falling, falling, here and now Gotta get to my feet somehow Basically like, ....<333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 Here's a song about a girl. ;P Rachel Oh Rachel... When you came into my life I felt something in my stomach Some call it love, is it true? That I feel the same about you? Oh Rachel... I'll never forget the day we met You said 'hi' to me and gave me a smile Of the most brilliant teeth I've ever seen And then I was under your spell... Woah.... I have to tell you Rachel I'm sure that I love you Woah... I have to admit to you I think that I love you Woah Rachel... Oh Rachel... I've always denied my feelings But enough time has passed Since I first had that feeling I have to tell someone about them... Oh Rachel... Why do you do this to me? Send me crazy and delusional? The acusers knew the truth They knew that I love you.. *chorus* I can't hold it in much longer! I have to let it all out! I need to tell you something about us I know now I'm in love with you! I've known it since that fateful day! I love you Rachel, that much is certain! Woah... Woah... Woah... Oh Rachel my dear.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicollettefalls Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 i really need help writing lyrics for my band any ideas of what i should write about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 First off, everyone... You all have talent and skills beyond belief!!! i love all of your work!!! And Nicollette, my advice is to write about personal experiences.. like a heart break or and emotional moment you've had in the past. or you can be really creative and write about something extremely random.. like.. the night sky.. hahaha. but whatever you do just remember it takes time and everything will come to you! good luck and i know you're gonna write some awesome lyrics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicollettefalls Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 First off, everyone... You all have talent and skills beyond belief!!! i love all of your work!!! And Nicollette, my advice is to write about personal experiences.. like a heart break or and emotional moment you've had in the past. or you can be really creative and write about something extremely random.. like.. the night sky.. hahaha. but whatever you do just remember it takes time and everything will come to you! good luck and i know you're gonna write some awesome lyrics! Thank you oh so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 no problem! i really need to post more work on here... i've been having a major writters block lately.. urgg... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 You SO have to post more ! I went for a trundle across the old pages and: "Pause, Fast Forward, Rewind" you left my lips burning, wanting more you left my eyes crying, searching for something i'll probably never find... you left my feet tapping, dancing on the floor you left my hands shaking, holding the door of my hospital room that you put in.. so run away like you did yesterday i would pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my mind i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would... i want to pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my mind...tonight you left my life hurting, aching horribly you left my heart dying, beating slowly and that's why i'm here tonight.. you left my thoughts dry, and so empty you left my mind without warning... and that's why i'm here tonight.. so run away like you did yesterday i would pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my mind i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would... i want to pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my mind...tonight don't leave me hanging by a string... can't you just please help me? don't run away just yet, because this ending isn't the best... i would pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my mind i miss you, so don't let me go i would pause, fast forward, rewind... until you're right back in my life.. tonight. i think i've lost my jaw somewhere on the floor. basically, i'd say that's alot more than awesome. smash down that bloody block and write more ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORExLOVE Posted August 16, 2007 Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 I got really upset about people saying that ''your to young...'' so wrote about it Your never to young Your never to young to understand, why daddy never held mommys hand. Your never to young to realise that thaeres alot of truth behind those ''lies'' Your never to young to have an opinion on how the leader is ruling your nation. Your never to young to feel frustration, just because its about deforestation. Your never to young to feel alone, even if its because your parents took away your mobile phone. Your never to young Never. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 16, 2007 Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 Not bad (: I'm not usually a grammar nazi, but seeing as it's repeated so many times it's "you're" not "your". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 16, 2007 Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 You SO have to post more ! I went for a trundle across the old pages and: i think i've lost my jaw somewhere on the floor. basically, i'd say that's alot more than awesome. smash down that bloody block and write more ! Oh my goodness. I didn't see that before. THAT'S AWESOME, so I agree with Jorgi, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORExLOVE Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 Thanks Jorgi & i wernt bothered about the speeling lolol but thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 Boredom strikes. = i'll wear your goodbyes as a trophy to celebrate time spent and time wasted (with you) i'll cut you loose and hope it won't be as painful as the last time (this time we're through) and i'd explain how sorry i am that it's like this (it took so long to leave you) but i'm finding it harder to care every second (i'm done caring for you) why are you so unforgettable ? 'cause i sure would like to forget you those insults and regrets hit their mark straight to the heart (that broken heart) i'll wear my hate for you as a mask to mislead any who look at me (don't look at me) i'll find out if it's not too much to ask how much i was worth (one whore or twenty) and i'll claw my way back up again (so you can watch me break free) but i don't want to fall back down again (i'm done falling for you) i'm not sure you know it yet but you were everything you were everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Born For This Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 If I gazed into those vengeful eyes I do not know what I would eventually see Why can't you think of what lays beyond for you Instead of insisting on what's for me? I sincerely hope that soon you'll finally see Those things you dream of: they don't come for free Why are you so set upon predicting my failures when one such as you so little you could be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted August 18, 2007 Report Share Posted August 18, 2007 incredable.. all of you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascitiesburn07 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 this is a cool place...Ive just now noticed it...I love the stuff the girls have written. ive always wanted to start a band with a girl singing...but I havent found a girl around here thas talented enough to write her own stuff and quit singin covers "ALL THE TIME". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meganm15 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 wow, everyone is very talented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Boredom strikes. i'll wear your goodbyes as a trophy to celebrate time spent and time wasted Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Gone We're still friends, that's what I heard you say But those are words, you don't act that way Well, I won't dwell on it one more day This is a game I never liked to play I loved you once, I won't love you twice For once I'm taking good advice I won't be paused, be put on hold I won't wait out here in the cold I'm gone Oh, I'm gone Don't wanna hurt me, that's your excuse You're hurting me right now, so what's the use? Ready to move on I called a truce But I guess your agreement was loose I loved you once, I won't love you twice For once I'm taking good advice I won't be paused, be put on hold I won't wait out here in the cold I'm gone Oh, I'm gone I've never been one to stand up for myself But this time I've got to This time I've got to There's a friend in my life who I can count on And baby, it's not you Baby, it's not you I loved you once, I won't love you twice For once I'm taking good advice I won't be paused, be put on hold I won't wait out here in the cold I'm gone Oh, I'm gone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascitiesburn07 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 ^ gosh i love that....I can already hear the music in my head lol.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Haha, thanks. Man, I've gotta thank this boy some day. I'm up to like 6 or 7 songs about him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascitiesburn07 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 hahahah dang lol...were talking bout a half of a full length cd right there...lol...you should find you some people to play music with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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