justSMILE♥ Posted August 27, 2007 Report Share Posted August 27, 2007 yes! i do haha i dont know why, but when i read it it sounded really sweet. hhahahhaa thanks =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 another poem Just a childish girl wishing For things that wont come true But she keeps wishing For things to dream to She smiles as she walks Because she thinks her dream is there She laughs as she talks Because she believes a laugh is to share She doesn’t care She doesn’t mind When people don’t play fair One day she will shine She is just like the star above She isn’t so big at this time Be soon she will be most loved She will shine she will shine =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meganm15 Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 ^thats really good =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 ^thats really good =] thank you, meg! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meganm15 Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 your welcome =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 your welcome =] =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 Awwww, I like that one, Courtney. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 Awwww, I like that one, Courtney. thank you arya! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-parawhore- Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 READY FOR THIS? LUCKY CHARMS ARE THE DRUG I CANT DENY TONIGHT LUCKY CHARMS GONNA GET ME HIGH! =D my amazing song deserves an award =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lyn Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 ^uh-huh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 Mmmk... Let me do another poem She doesn't know what she wants It's clear that's she's confused She's shy and unwilling And her heart is very abused Can she recover from the pain? She's so desperate and cold She doesn't want to be weak She wants to strong and bold She's not giving up on hope anytime soon She IS certain about that That's how bad she wants it And soon that's what she'll get. Plz tell me what y'all think. Go soft. It's not that very good. I'm a little rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 ^ Oh my gosh, I LOVE that one, Helena! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 ^ Thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 No prob! It's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 Mmmk... Let me do another poem She doesn't know what she wants It's clear that's she's confused She's shy and unwilling And her heart is very abused Can she recover from the pain? She's so desperate and cold She doesn't want to be weak She wants to strong and bold She's not giving up on hope anytime soon She IS certain about that That's how bad she wants it And soon that's what she'll get. Plz tell me what y'all think. Go soft. It's not that very good. I'm a little rusty. Whoa. That's amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 ^ Thank u soo much. I've been posting poems lately, no one has respnded to them. I guessed that u guys didn't think they were good at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 No no. With so much going on in the other sections I rarely ever make it to the Off-Topic aha. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 ^ Oh. But thx anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 ^ Thank u soo much. I've been posting poems lately, no one has respnded to them. I guessed that u guys didn't think they were good at all. Awww, no, we think they're great. I just don't check this thread as much as I should. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 that's amazing helena. i've read some of your other stuff too, just too lazy to respond and tell you that they're great! i haven't written anything in forever. i wanna post something *wants desperately to write something but feels uninspired again* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewymocha06 Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 I once would wait for you forever, Eternity would end before I'd walk. But now I could step on that flower, The one that made me, The one that I could trust, I leave it. Now no dust could ever return, I can see, see clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 I once would wait for you forever,Eternity would end before I'd walk. But now I could step on that flower, The one that made me, The one that I could trust, I leave it. Now no dust could ever return, I can see, see clear. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 I once would wait for you forever,Eternity would end before I'd walk. But now I could step on that flower, The one that made me, The one that I could trust, I leave it. Now no dust could ever return, I can see, see clear. Goodness. Why are you all so good at writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewymocha06 Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 haha thanks:) that's one of my worst i think, i have a poetry site if you would like me to post the link here?? It has my best poems on it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mia of the [Dead] Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 Yes, please do. I love reading poetry lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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