-parawhore- Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^^you are very good at writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 damn, that rocks..it's so deep...and long..dang Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^^you are very good at writing damn, that rocks..it's so deep...and long..dang thank you everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 This is about seeing things through fully, and not just giving up at the half-way point. Tooth and Nail Come this far Just to walk away Well I'm not like you I won't back away I won't give up now... We've gone this far We can't go back now We stand and fight Fight tooth and nail! Fight tooth and nail! Now's not the time For our weakness to prevail We've come this far now We gotta see this through Right to its end! *chorus* We made it this far together... Now don't leave me behind... We made it this far together... Now don't leave me behind... You're stronger than this You gave me strength Now why don't you act like yourself? *solo and chorus* I'll fight tooth and nail I'll fight to the bitter end I'll fight... Not sure what you'll think of this, cause I cooked it up in 5 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^ Me likey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 This is about seeing things through fully, and not just giving up at the half-way point. Tooth and Nail Come this far Just to walk away Well I'm not like you I won't back away I won't give up now... We've gone this far We can't go back now We stand and fight Fight tooth and nail! Fight tooth and nail! Now's not the time For our weakness to prevail We've come this far now We gotta see this through Right to its end! *chorus* We made it this far together... Now don't leave me behind... We made it this far together... Now don't leave me behind... You're stronger than this You gave me strength Now why don't you act like yourself? *solo and chorus* I'll fight tooth and nail I'll fight to the bitter end I'll fight... Not sure what you'll think of this, cause I cooked it up in 5 minutes. i really like it.. it's very powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^Thanks guys. Yeah, just imagine screaming for the last part, like 'I'LL FIGHT!' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 makes it even more rad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 ^Thanks guys. Yeah, just imagine screaming for the last part, like 'I'LL FIGHT!' definately! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 i have seen summers rest in peace earth swept beneath their feet in time, i'll spit my heart out for the cause no cause for concern no cause for concern kiss my eyes and let me sleep bathed in your soft sincereity You're stronger than this You gave me strength Now why don't you act like yourself? I love this thread and the things people write in it. It amazes me. I have no inspiration to write, lately, but i think i'm getting some from you lot. Keep going (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 awww *tear* how touching...haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 27, 2007 Report Share Posted October 27, 2007 weee..new random somethingggg still needs work, like I gotta write some music for it, and get some more lyrics, but here's what I have so far [first verse so far] These carboard boxes Just get wet They cause the falling Drenched in debts These feelings gone As lost in thought The truth belongs Here, not anymore [pre-chorus] WELL! I can't give up All that I worked for All that I wanted Just because you broke some hearts Doesn't mean that you're so bad [chorus] Because everybody does it Once in a while They break a heart But manage to smile THey see what they've done And smirked all the while They break hearts And still manage to smile Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 I'm not too sure about this one...basically it's about enjoying yourself on nights out after long days... Take It Away The clock strikes 8... Time has come... We'll go take it away... Nights out until the early hours Drink so much that we forget What we got up to Don't give a damn though Those are always the best... So take it away Take it away Take it away So take it away Take it away Take it away... Shots of sambuka at 10 JD and coke to warm up Let this alcohol flow though us These nights don't come round often We should make the most of them... *chorus* We'll take it away tonight Yeah... We'll take it away tonight Yeah... Let's take it away tonight And let ourselves go! *solo, then chorus* Take it away! Take it away! Take it away! Take it away..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted October 30, 2007 Report Share Posted October 30, 2007 NIFTY! hahah I love that..it's kinda how I feel right now actually...I just had some spaghetti...haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 quick little poem i just wrote. i think its short and sweet haha Why am i so paraniod? Why am i so worried about this? Its something that i could avoid... but at my own risk. I think you hate me, I think i annoy you. I could be wrong, but id like for you to be in my shoes. To see what you do to me everyday. To feel the pain i feel when i see you, To be me and see how it feels for the one you love to ignore you... It hurts so bad to feel that way. But maybe im just paraniod, And shouldnt worry about this, 'Cuz maybe one day, that thing i could'nt avoid... Might turn around and come my way... With one simple kiss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 ^ That's pretty good X) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 umm you mean thats freakin rad...a little short, but hey...half the radshit out there is short... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 Here's another one....It's not final yet though....it's about how sensitive some of us are... Brittle Don't you know baby? Your words cut deep But you don't see me bleed The way it's always been... Don't you know baby? We're all brittle in the end So bite your tongue Stay your lips Cause we're all brittle in the end... Don't you know baby? I'm hurting right now You don't have a clue How deep your words cut... *chorus* I'm just brittle baby So don't be so harsh I'm just brittle baby So don't speak at all I'm just brittle baby So don't you dare speak! *chorus* Any thoughts? opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 oooh...I like it, you doooo say baby a lot, but hell, It could be a hit...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 ^ I agree with Mariah, haha. 'tis good though. A bit repetitive, but that's how some good songs are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 Thanks guys, but I was semi-tired when I was trying to come up with lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 3, 2007 Report Share Posted November 3, 2007 Thanks guys, but I was semi-tired when I was trying to come up with lyrics. i really like the repetition.. but for some reason it reminds me of "running up that hill" by placebo. no sure why but it's good i've been really busy but i'll have something new up tomorrow i think.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 3, 2007 Report Share Posted November 3, 2007 well...heres a thing that I did for a project I've been working on...so here it issss...It's of course, about paramore and the song that I refused to mention was Breathe. because I know we shoudn't talk about that very much do to the band's wishes. To me, every time I listen to them, it's like the first time I ever heard a word being spoken. I always get these goose bumps when I'm listening to the lyrics. When I hear what's being shown in the words, I can't help but either tear up or jump around in applause. There's just something about them that's different from anyone else, though they get compared to other bands, I don't feel that comparison is right. They are a band that every time i hear, I just feel like someone else. I'm inspired to write, and sing. It inspires me to hear what they're saying and playing. The way that they harmonize is beyond my comprehension. So here's a song just for you guys. I wrote it while listening to a song that I know you guys don't want anyone to talk much about and I think you know which one I'm talking about, but that song saved my best friend from killing herself and got me started on my writing. So here's to Paramore. I’m Mariah and this song is called "Faith." Every time I thought of ending it I'd put in the song that I so badly love I'd think about what I was doing wrong Or if that was what was going on at all But I remember crying while hearing your voice heal my wounds You saved me more than once This is my song for you You've talked me out of everything That a friend would You've showed me who I was Though you didn't ever know me at all And now I know What I'm supposed to do So here's my song for you while I would sit out on the ground Hoping I could get my heart not to pound You’d say just about anything So to you I sing You've talked me out of everything That a friend would You've showed me who I was Though you didn't ever know me at all And now I know What I'm supposed to do So here's my song for you You've given me the thoughts that I have today And the smile on my face The tears and words coming out of my mouth Are all for YOU! You've talked me out of everything That a friend would You've showed me who I was Though you didn't ever know me at all And now I know What I'm supposed to do So here's my song for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 crikey it's been a long, long time since i've written anything i'm trying to get back into it, i found it therapeutic and i'm getting a bit stressed lately but it's harddd to write anything worth reading, i'm so out of sync. nevertheless: colon close bracket i'd shout words so heavy, and throw them like rocks to your window i'd cry tears so strong, they'd break down your door i'd laugh so tragically, that every clown aches in sympathy i'd give up those shooting stars, to remember your smile i'd gather the biggest nets, to try and capture your attention i'd save the whole world from themselves, so nothing could hurt you again i'd dream the impossible, so imagination won't stop me and i'd give up myself, if that smile's for me i'd teach birds new melodies, and harmonise your morning call i'd paint something so beautiful, your eyes would never believe it i'd kiss you so sweetly, that every new romantic screamed with envy i'd hold you so gently , that smile never breaks if i had anything more to give, i'd give you my everything i'd give you it all; my everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 ^ I <3 it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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