Guest Arya Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I'm supposed to be revising, pshaw. -- the situation isn't quite as sophisticated, as first anticipated or assumed the lighting and the laughter casts shadows, tense and terrifying in the room and all is not as it should be it should be calm and controlled, if i knew this was how it would be i'd never have gotten involved and oh, i left the wrong side of bed this morning, i left the wrong bed entirely and completely and the wrong house and the wrong life, with the wrong person left beside me and all is not as it should be, it should be warm and reassuring that's how he'll always be tall, smart and so alluring this arrangement isn't ideal or insightful, it's just spiteful and surprising with harsh words spat across heartbeats, no time left for screams or crying and all is not as it should be, wrong time, wrong place, wrong you, oh, knew it from the start; you will always be you. Awesome! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TangledFairyx Posted November 30, 2007 Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 Yeah when i pluck up the confidence i'll post one... Just gotta pick the right one... Wanna be a storybook/poem book/song book writer. Just any kind of writer that involves alot of emotion. Coz i'm good at that Watch this space... x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 what goes zzzzzzzzzzzzzzb? reversing bumblebee. ------ oh, pleased to meet you i'm the expert of time wasting and regrets i'm sure we'll get on like a heart on fire with my prescence as a frank reminder of everything you'd rather forget. so, take a seat we'll discuss mistakes and misdemeanors exchanging tales just like old friends with encouraging glances and false pretence and everything you won't remember. and we'll be just fine staring each other down like old enemies and raised fists and open hands with every intention of staying calm against blunt dreams and sharp memories. we'll be just fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 ^ i wish i had your talent. may i borrow it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 I'm supposed to be revising, pshaw. -- the situation isn't quite as sophisticated, as first anticipated or assumed the lighting and the laughter casts shadows, tense and terrifying in the room and all is not as it should be it should be calm and controlled, if i knew this was how it would be i'd never have gotten involved and oh, i left the wrong side of bed this morning, i left the wrong bed entirely and completely and the wrong house and the wrong life, with the wrong person left beside me and all is not as it should be, it should be warm and reassuring that's how he'll always be tall, smart and so alluring this arrangement isn't ideal or insightful, it's just spiteful and surprising with harsh words spat across heartbeats, no time left for screams or crying and all is not as it should be, wrong time, wrong place, wrong you, oh, knew it from the start; you will always be you. oh my goodness! "and oh, i left the wrong side of bed this morning, i left the wrong bed entirely and completely and the wrong house and the wrong life, with the wrong person left beside me" just brilliant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 ^love that. relates to me at the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 (: I <3 all of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Post of the double. But i am an exceedingly bored human bean. ----- surely being you isn't so hard, just a few well timed smiles to get what you ask for not that i'm bitter or jealous or impressed but i sure hope i get what i came for, no less i came to tear that smiles away, with a few strategic tears and rehearsed tragedies not that i'm lonely but sick of your sad story and i sure hope you drown in yourself an your misery i hoped it was different this time, perhaps a hint of loyalty and trust for the journey? not that i'm leaving or escaping or alone but i sure hope you find sweet irony, on your own so i'm through with hope, i've had enough of betrayal and this beautiful treachery it's true that i'm cold and angry and cruel but i sure hope i'm all this alone, without you. It appears i'm stuck in a specific rut of how i write things, things are starting to sound repetitive and it's really bugging me ;/ bah, i shall persevere and find inspiration or whatever... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 OMGGGGGGGGG....haha WHOA! dude, that's pretty stinkin rad if I do say so mahself....truly amazazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TangledFairyx Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Poem: July 23rd: There's a girl in my school Her name is Louise But i don't like her Coz all she does is tease She pushes and pinches me And its only septemeber My gang has left me I'm now an ex memeber Now its january I'm wearing my new top She covers it in blackcurrant She says "it's just a drop" By now its March This is making me ill Ha, Louise will be dead When i've had my kill And now its May And by now i don't care I've lost all interest And i know its not fair July 23rd And i haven't cried I hope Louise see's this Because of her i've died. It's a peace of crap but hey... oh well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 i dont even know wwhat the words jorgi means in her lyrics, but i still love it! hahah compared to these songs people are writing, im absolutely shit. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 i dont even know wwhat the words jorgi means in her lyrics,but i still love it! hahah hahaaa! what do you mean ? and thanks anyway, i think ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 ^ hahah nah its a compliment =] im just not good on words that you dont learn in year 3 or below, haha like anticipated and misdemeanors, i have no idea what they mean xD but i loved the lyrics =] lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limelight Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 i would post some of my stuff but i would be afraid of someone stealing it lol people i show say i could publish some of it..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ^It pisses me off when people steal it but I just wanted your guys' opinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limelight Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ok -reads it- i like this part lol “We were just-“ Pouyan jumped in. “I wanted him to have a holiday joint with me. Is that so bad?” He took the joint from my hand and shoved it in Tyson’s face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 i want to see my true friends form the fakes i want to get theses thoughts off my back i want to be different. but those are just words words- not actions i need to speak out for my right i need to fight, thats right, fight people see me as nothing but i know i am a something people's eyesight has just been blinded when it comes to me they looked at the flashing light for too long, now they cant see i told them i wanted to help but no they said " who are you? and what can you do?" so i just watched them walk away blindly, mind you. its pretty shitty, i poste it on my LJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limelight Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ^oh that was good! i liked it esp the twords the end =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ^oh that was good! i liked it esp the twords the end =) thanks =] i wrote it like a long time ago, i feel its a peom that fits my life =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 but those are just words words- not actions i need to speak out for my right i need to fight, thats right, fight people see me as nothing but i know i am a something people's eyesight has just been blinded when it comes to me they looked at the flashing light for too long, now they cant see i have a right good tune going on in my head when i read those, nice one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ^ really!? thankss =]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 ok -reads it- i like this part lol That's my favourite part to lol. It's when I was just like getting into it. It's kinda bad but I'm still working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TangledFairyx Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I'm really into writing stuff like... stories and poems and stuff. This is part of a story i decided to write: Her phone was beeping again, for about the seventh time today. They never left her alone. By now Adalia had was fed up. They were always picking on her. Yeah, she dressed different, her name was different, and she felt like everything about her was diffrent. But she was proud of that. Proud to be Adalia Harwood. Ignoring the text message, she picked up her guitar and started playing it, signing the lyrics that she knew so well If You Thought I'd Bleed Then You Were Wrong, Coz i wont stop holding on... Her phone starting beeping again, but this time it was ringing. The name "Jake" was flashing on its screen. Pressing the green button, she put the phone to her ear. "Hey babe, hows it going?"... That's all i've got so far... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allys_Heartisurs Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 aw keep writing! i want to know what happens next lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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