xletthisgox Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 okay well you should have another PM by this weekend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 The contrast of the icy cold blade As it kisses my skin Sends a slight tingle Through my spine Knowing that you broke my heart, I slide my fingers backwards A slit of my red blood seeps From my arm I was stupid enough to believe That you generally loved me I was head over heals Looking back, I only know that I was an idiot And that only you were to blame My heart was in pieces Yet you were a million miles away Laughing at my mistakes I cared too much I shouldn't have I knew it would eventually end in tears My prediction was right I trusted you with my life You took that trust and used it Ruining me The good time we had; they were all fake And even though you ripped me apart And tore my heart open and crushed it There are still times That I feel I LOVE YOU but you had your second chance I might be a mess right now And I know that you will never care But please, lock the door behing you Just go home I'm sorry, hunny, but I gotta move on with my own life The scars remind us that the past is real --- Written whilst listening to Papa Roach - Scars. Sorry its kinda crappy, too. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowCookie-x Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 I will post something soon. When i get up the courage. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 And now for something completely different ! I don't do prose. But english coursework requires that i must haul myself out of the little poetry-hole i've sunk myself into, and write something on a theme- "A Room". What an enthralling theme. But i did it, and i kind of like it, shockingly. Opinions ? good or bad I do warn you, it's kind of long: --- I remember this place. I remember the old toys we loved and the dolls we defaced; the tea sets we filled with dreams and innocence; the plastic food that fed our imaginations for hours on end. I remember the board games we argued over (I never cared much for rules) and the computer games we saved every penny for, yet never held our attention for long. I remember that duvet, with its tales of caverns and hopeless expeditions and expectations that took us so far away without taking one step. I remember the mattress that creaked reassuringly beneath us after watching one too many horror films; the comforter that did its job so well whilst pouring our tears and our secrets out so desperately to each other. I even remember that old bookcase, and how you changed all the covers around just to see what I would say; the sound of your laughter when I didn’t notice- I thought Goldilocks was Little Red Riding Hood for years. I remember the torn stories of princes and knights we swore we’d never need as long as we had each other. I remember it all and they remember me; I can feel those memories crouching and cringing away in the corner. They can’t bear this anymore than I can; the responsibility crushing down on their delicate figures. They brought us so close we had to be torn apart- there was no other way. I remember sneaking out for the first time - together, of course – with lies and guilt weighing heavily on our shoulders, each waiting for the opportunity or excuse to be the first to back out; but neither did. The beginning of the routine we sunk so easily into, equipped with well rehearsed lines we told to explain unexplained absences to anyone that tried to stop us. I counted each tear I cried the night you ran away; I would have done anything for your return. I hated you for leaving me behind. I remember the exact moment (or person) when jealousy began to exceed trust; the promises we made with every intention of keeping them, but never could. I remember every one. Oh, I remember. I remember the precise shade of his eyes; green enough to clash with my emotions when we were first introduced; the toothpaste stain on his collar; the rip in his jeans and the way he held you so delicately, as if you might break. I tried to forget the spring in your step as you returned from each date; the look on your face as you told me each detail. I could swear that look was laced with pity. I remember the brightness of your smile that never faded for six long months, not even for a second. I remember the second it broke. I wish I could forget the look in your eyes as you walked in and saw it all; the sound of your coffee cup hitting the tiles, so loud I imagined it was the sound of your heart breaking. I wish I could forget the sense of victory I so craved slipping away from me as you ran out of the door and away from him; away from me. I remember the mask of hated and anger you wore as you tore up those toys and set fire to the games. I remember you walking away as you had once before and the ashes that flew right towards me as I watched; burning memories taunting me for destroying them long before. I remember the very last time I saw you; as you turned and looked at me for a while, with your cold stare and dry eyes, I could almost imagine a flicker of forgiveness, perhaps regret. But I know now, as you flipped me the finger and calmly walked away, it was just a trick of the light. I haven’t seen you since, but I miss every second. I’m back where it all began. Oh, I remember this place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 ^That's really, really good. I have another song here...twas inspired by me listening to a lot of Metallica and Coheed and Cambria over the last few days...some parts I've put in, are just how I imagine the song to sound in my head while I was writing it. Don't Let Me Fade Away *intro solo, followed by heavy riff* *switch to clean sound for verses* Time ticks down for everyone None of us are spared From that eternal curse Even though I pray for mercy Pray to our God for mercy... *distortion on* Don't let me fade away Don't let me fade away Hold onto my memory Don't let me fade away Don't let me fade away Don't let me go... I don't want to gather dust Or become a forgotten memory Don't keep me locked up in your mind Hold onto me for as long as you can I don't want to face this fate... *chorus x2* Don't make me beg on my knees All I want is to remain here Where I belong in this place By your side, or in your arms So don't let me fade away! *crazy solo here* Don't let me fade away! Don't let me fade away! Don't let me fade.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 This song I decided to write right away when I learned that commercial sucess songs are simple and just...straight forward, so I skipped the "beautiful" facot in lyrics and made this song in about, 5 minutes tops. Shining Moon When the moon shines, I can sleep When its cold and bright, I dont weep I try to fight for hapinesses I cant seem to keep Look outside now And Find me there Look outside and find me in your stare I sleep in the moonlight Not thinking about all the pain Im not happy until one more day I see the moon once again Because I've suffered too much and I've lost control But I dont know if i hold my mind yes that I dont know because I feel crazy i need the moon to save me I need more than what you've gave me Look outside Now And Find me there Look outside and find me In your stare And watch me no longer care Because I've forgotten This Nightmare And its actually personal too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 That was both hilarious and good at the same time. im joking, That was kind of weird, very actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itdude Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 Yea, that kid is kinda messed up in the brain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 ^ VERY messed up in the brain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 EMO MUCH?!?!?!?! well maybe not EMO persay *who says persay anymore?? lopl* well... yeah dude.. you got some issues, but if you like fictional writing, that's a great asset. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 Reuinion You were always there for me And then they took you away Now I just want to end this here So pass me the razor blade And bid me goodbye for now... But I won't break the skin I remember what you taught me So I will endure this plane If only to see you again... I poured my heart out to you Bled it dry at your feet And now you're gone I am saturated once more With the misery of humankind... *chorus* I know now that there is still hope Hope for our souls on this earth I will cling on to damnation Until our final Reuinion below the stars... *chorus x2* Please remember our promise Don't forget to uphold your bargain And let's enjoy our Reuinion for eternity... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ^ Wow. that's really good, Jimmy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chikowolfkissme Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Sing me to sleep and I’ll be fine before sunrise These knives are upon my eyes Falling asleep empty was never something new, you do it too Breathe for tomorrow, it will always come again and again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
travel_hymn Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 La la, la la I love Paramore La la, la la They're so good on the dancefloor La la, la If you're mean to them they will shut the door La la, la Now you can't see Paramore XD! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 ^^ hahaha, that's proper mint short, simple, not very interesting, but i'm bored: oh let's continue by any means making promises we'll never keep when the only sparks that fly tonight are the cigarette butts in the street and the disapointment under our feet is becoming far too much to handle. so let's try this one more time touch my face and look into my eyes it's a shame there's nothing left for you no regret or stray tears i've cried just the knwledge that we tried (and failed) but oh, we tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 ^^ OMGOMGOMGOMG! JORGI! WHY CANT I STEAL YOUR SKILLLLLZZzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ???????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????? ????????????? I WANT THEM! lopl that would be so fun to write like that... then I would actually have a point in life.. lopl... that wasnt emo at all now was it?! wellllll.. heres just some random things that I wrote... there is guitar for it... I might even just post the tab for it later... +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ [verse] You're just another violent urge coming through No one better to look forward to When I try to look back I know there's none of you left (when i try to look back.... when i try to look back) [pre-chorus] But I know that this aint gettin anywhere Still it's worth a try... [chorus] When I look around for Excuses to get away next time You might just throw around Some new reason for me to stay behind And when you look around for All of your words that made me cry Just pull away Just pull away [verse] And every time you want to walk away I know there aren't enough words - to say "I love you" sounds so empty (so bitter sweet - so bitter sweet) "I love you" feels too empty ...(to me) [pre-chorus] [chorus] [break/bridge] [chorus] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 No one thought I'd ever make it Well it seems that I have done Everything no one believed in Even when I Had No one I Guess I never Needed you or anyone else no more because I've found my ways now I never knew what you were for I've seemed to surpass my own dreams goals and finish lines That I've set up I've done these to only annoy you because I was so fed up of all your lies and cries For someone else in me I've been someone else all along And you can never see That I'm Happier without you right here by my side Now that I dont have your rules to follow and abide Im going to pass all of you and show you what I am beneath And I'll pass the obstacles and everything else I'll meet I feel comfortable right now So why should you ruin it Im going to build my own life And not have you in it mediocre at best, I think that "abide" part is not even how you use that word. hmp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 that's amazing christopher. i love poems like that. like "i'm done with you" sort of meanings. okay i've only posted one of my poems here and people liked it but were amazed at how depressing they were. i thought i'd try again because these aren't completely.....depressing. i'm posting 2 because one's really short: Caught Maybe you haven't heard, so here's the news flash: You're not the boss of every person, every thing. You're just a lie, a myth. I'm done believing it. So why are you still here? Blame the Limelight [yes that title was influenced by Fences] Here and willing. Waiting and wondering. When will the crowd wake up? Stuck in the spotlight for all the wrong reasons. I'm only a hit when I make a mistake. Once tried, forever forgotten. Not worth another chance. Now everyone's warned. Stay away and don't look back. Haven't you heard? I'm just a waste. well that one maybe is a bit....down. sorry it's just how i write Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Caught Maybe you haven't heard, so here's the news flash: You're not the boss of every person, every thing. You're just a lie, a myth. I'm done believing it. So why are you still here? YES. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 thanks :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 freaking amazing you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 thanks :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Your eyes, each a laser in its own way Whenever they meet mine, they shine right through Piercing my heart when you glare ev'ryday Letting the blood spew from ev'rything you do. Its sunny, but only rain is above me Clouds of grey, spilling water on my soul Slipping on ice and crashing misery Whispering words to let me know I failed. I would sacrifice this world to hold you Let me breathe your scent for one last time The memories have come to pull me apart My sorrow cannot compare to a rhyme. Theres no way to discover my mistakes When ev'ry second I spent with you was fake. We had to wirte a sonnet for my English homework. I quite like this, so I thought I'd share. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 you're all extremebean! which is an inside joke, but it means good things... I bet you all break strings too... lopl and you all wish you knew what that meant... welll heres a little somethin I wrote for a friend... she has been having extremely bad depression issues and stuffs, sooooo... yeah.. here okay.. it wasnt a friend.. it was my girlfriend.. but still... arg? Dang the pirate thing didnt hold you back from reading thins... oops? Everytime I look around I seem to find something new in you And everytime you look at me My heart begins to beat And it never really did before You bring me back to Life again And show me who I really am And you know that I would keep you forever Because you're the only thing keeping me together I know you've been saying You "Wont amount to anything" but you know it isn't true You are so perfect to me over there And close up, you're even better If I could come back To life again I'd beg you just to love What you DO have left I wish you knew Your tears are wetting my face too I hope you know I love you You've inspired me To do so many things It's something new But Something I'll get used to Though I may be new to this You make me feel so at home... (feel so at home) I wish I could just Make you smile When I see your eyes so cold And Full of pain I know that I'm not much But I do what I can I could stop and say "Im Sorry" But I'm stuck here staring at you... ++++++++++++++++++++++ and I hope that didnt suck ass like I thought it did... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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