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xxbecksyxx Here We Go Again

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hay guyz I liek 2 rite poetri 2 but idk if i good 4 it y u no tell me if i good k? :3

crawling in my skin

my vagina it will not heal

huge blackness engulfs me with it's neverending labia

i dont know where the void ends

in shaniqua's labia of the void

 

OMG THNX U TELL ME HOW I RITE K? ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^_^_^_^_^_^_^__________________________________^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^________^_^_^_^_^_________^_^_^_^-^__^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^ (KAWAII FACE, NE? ^-^;!~~~~ JA MATA MINNASAN) HAPPY HORIDAYZ

 

Its good.

but next time, try using proper grammer. k?

 

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this is a bit from the story I'm writing:

 

I exited out of the alley-way and turned left. It was hard to stand, let alone walk. I stumbled on something and fell over, my face only inches from the ground. I giggled and had to grip onto the wall for balance to get up. When I was on my knees, I faced forward and noticed a walking shadow. I wasn’t sure what it was - either a big animal or a human. I thought it was a mirage at first, but when it started to move closer towards me, I knew it was real.

 

I panicked, standing as quickly as I could do without falling over. Whatever it was, it was close to me. I tried to edge back, but I realized that I was already with my back against the brick wall. I felt a lump in my throat. I wasn’t sure whether it was down to nausea or nerves. I wasn’t bothered about that, though. The shadow wasn’t far now.

 

I suddenly felt sick. I was almost certain it had something to do with the amount of alcohol I’d drunk. The other 1% was that I was scared.

 

The shadow was so close that I could feel their footsteps on the soft ground, their breath lightly on my cheeks. And yet it all seemed so unreal. It just stood there, unmoved, like a plastic mannequin. I could sense it’s eyes glaring at me, darting up and down, like it was taking a photo with them. It unnerved me. I started to breathe heavier when it’s arm reached out and their skin came into the moonlight.

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Well heres one...I usually just type it on here in notepad and save it...and sometimes people help me with it on msn...I dont know if I did this one, I could have...but here it is     End of the Li

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Claudia, you've done it again. Damn you.   Mel, very nice.     ....dammit, why do I keep coming into this thread?? *runs off again*

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^ i actually was on here a couple days ago and read that and i really like it. i thought it was very inspirational. got a little choked up, too.   so yeah i was posting in the randomness thread and

lilley_1 Never Let This Go

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For You Don't Dare

 

I love you , but you do not seem to care

For some reason you can't bear, the fear of rejection

Or realize all I have for you is my affection

You just keep it buried, for you don't dare

 

Cuz' lowering you barricade means to come out of your shell

And you are not the type who lets his secrets out

You'd rather just wonder "what could've been" and pout

Until your regret and guilt takes you to hell

 

One day you creep up on me like a rolling tide

That turned into a hurricane that I can not ignore

It hit me hard and forced me to close the door

Until that storm temporarily subside

 

Now that I realize I'm in love, I can't take back my words

Cuz' it would mean for me to admit I was wrong

My list of regrets is overwhelming long

But you top the list, for I'm a lovesick nerd

 

You creep up on me like a rolling tide

That turned into a hurricane that I can not ignore

It hit me hard and forced me to close the door

Until the storm temporarily subsides

 

I must find a way to end this plight

For playing the just friends card leaves no one sparred

But I can't climb out of the darkness and into the light

For my own reasons keep us separated

 

You creep up on me like a rolling tide

That turned into a hurricane that I can not ignore

It hit me hard and forced me to close the door

Until the storm temporarily subsides

 

You love me, but I do no seem to care

For some reason I can not bear, the fear of rejection

Or realize all you have for me is your affection

I just keep it buried, for I don't dare

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Jorgi Hallelujah

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i don't even know what i'm talking about anymore. hooray.

 

find a way to stop yourself,

you're all worked up

and all strung out,

i can't keep up,

i can't keep my head up

if it means looking at you

and those eyes.

 

well i can feel you looking at me

(no surprise)

and i can feel them burning

(like sunrise)

 

so find a way

to talk yourself out

of what you're in,

the mess we're both in

(you win)

i can hear you laughing

you win, you win

it all.

 

i'm all yours.

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notoriousfat67 Here We Go Again

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i wrote this years ago when i wrote poems/songs live every night.

 

we grow up just to leave

and we forget who we were

loss of innocence, loss of friends

memories becoming blurred

 

forgotten names

and remembered faces

distant voices calling

from far off places

 

feelings change when you grow older

things never look the same

but everytime i look back i think

"god i miss those days"

 

childhood can never last

but memories live on forever

never regret anything you've done

and always say you'll remember

 

 

 

please be honest,even if its brutal

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Lahninja Born For This

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hay guyz I liek 2 rite poetri 2 but idk if i good 4 it y u no tell me if i good k? :3

crawling in my skin

my vagina it will not heal

huge blackness engulfs me with it's neverending labia

i dont know where the void ends

in shaniqua's labia of the void

 

OMG THNX U TELL ME HOW I RITE K? ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^_^_^_^_^_^_^__________________________________^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^________^_^_^_^_^_________^_^_^_^-^__^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^ (KAWAII FACE, NE? ^-^;!~~~~ JA MATA MINNASAN) HAPPY HORIDAYZ

 

first two lines, just changed the words from Crawling - Linkin Park

lolz.

 

and frick knows where you got the rest from, lmao.

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notoriousfat67 Here We Go Again

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my first one, i was a freshmen and my best friend and this girl i liked since 3rd grade(also one of my best friends) started dating.

 

this poems for you

the girl of my dreams

how you hurt me so bad

tore my heart at the seams

 

I realize now that

im wasting my time

but im still so in love

wishing you were mine

 

and sadly i know

my love means nothing

but i want you to know

you still mean something

 

from the bottom of my heart

these words are true

you're still everything to me

even though im still nothing to you

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No_Sir! Whoa

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I wrote this song a few months ago and its really just about when I was going through some hard time with friends and family.

 

If I could cry a million tears I would

If I could make the years rewind they would

But if I could scream would you hear me

 

Chorus:

I sit here waiting waiting still waiting for the day to end

Nothing but silence silence dead silence running through my veins again

Oh I’m broken please save

 

Take all that belongs with no regret I”ll go

Remember everything wasted and spent

But if I ran away you would find me

 

Chorus:

I sit here waiting waiting still waiting for the day to end

Nothing but silence silence dead silence running through my veins again

Oh I’m broken please save me

 

I’m broken

I have to say goodbye

Don’t waste your time

Cuz you’ve already wasted mine

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notoriousfat67 Here We Go Again

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lol, I have more stuff just nothing recent. I was published twice too. Lately i've just had a bad case of writers block. Im gonna try to write something tonight but chances are it wont be like that one up there so expect something different.

 

have you written anymore stuff?

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MarMaramore Never Let This Go

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^ thats real good though.. you are CraZy!

 

lopl

 

a random few lines that popped into mah head...

 

you give a look like acid

Burning ever through me, Sweetie

Look away, it hurts more than you know, sweetie

Fall back because it stings, *your glare*

And I can't stand seeing you so out of things

Stealing what I have

Or maybe I'm losing it now

But loving you,

I can never know what'll happen next.

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No_Sir! Whoa

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lol, I have more stuff just nothing recent. I was published twice too. Lately i've just had a bad case of writers block. Im gonna try to write something tonight but chances are it wont be like that one up there so expect something different.

 

have you written anymore stuff?

 

oh I hate writers block. Thats cool you were published! Yeah I have written more stuff. I'll post it.

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No_Sir!

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ok this one isnt done yet. Its about one of my best friends. He used to like I'm pretty sure its still true but I am kinda feeling the same way and I really dont want to and everyone is seeing it 2.

 

You built a world

And I want it to burn down

I cant feel a thing

Your voice has numbed me

Your stare shatters all that exists

How could you do this

 

We’re traped scream so maybe they will hear us

Find out we arent all right I wont give up without a fight tonight

If you thought I was through think again

 

I’m losing my mind

And it isnt the first time

I closed the door

But I keep opening it

Cant get enough of it

Why did you do it

 

We’re traped scream so maybe they will hear us

Find out we arent all right I wont give up without a fight tonight

If you thought I was through think again

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notoriousfat67 Here We Go Again

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ok this one isnt done yet. Its about one of my best friends. He used to like I'm pretty sure its still true but I am kinda feeling the same way and I really dont want to and everyone is seeing it 2.

 

You built a world

And I want it to burn down

I cant feel a thing

Your voice has numbed me

Your stare shatters all that exists

How could you do this

 

We’re traped scream so maybe they will hear us

Find out we arent all right I wont give up without a fight tonight

If you thought I was through think again

 

I’m losing my mind

And it isnt the first time

I closed the door

But I keep opening it

Cant get enough of it

Why did you do it

 

We’re traped scream so maybe they will hear us

Find out we arent all right I wont give up without a fight tonight

If you thought I was through think again

 

i really like this one. i can kinda see a paramore influence in the lyrics lol. It just has that feel to it in some points. Better than anything i could write at the moment. I've had a lot of really crappy lines in the last couple hours

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