Defiance Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 oh jorgi we love you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Haha, and i love you all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonjica94 Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Here is one my special songs...I wrote it for my ``friend`` whose father recently died, her mom was raped, and her brother is like...complete idiot...She is such a slut, but she is very unhappy, so this is my song about her: Oh my god The hell she`s going through The hell her life is The hell of future who is smiling And just waiting to eat her forever She lost the friend she never used She doesn`t even deserve this song She cryes, she smokes With her fake face She cannot even run, but she is so thin Oh my God The low is level she is on Her heart is black and beating slow Well, that`s it. I know there are no rhymes, but what can I do, I am no expert. Acctually, to tell you one my secret: This is my first song I ever wrote...I will continiue to write, maybe they get better and better...WHO KNOWS! ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 by we i ment me and my foot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Wow, that makes no sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 you make no fence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 awesome stuff guys ive been writing ALOT lately might post some later (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Cheers (: I'm slowly (but not surely) getting back into this. I'm quite ready to start tearing my hair out if it doesn't get any easier sometime soon. don't breathe don't breathe a word to anyone i'll lose everything and everyone her hands are shaking and your voice is trembling stop listening it's your turn to say just what i need to hear i need to hear something this silence says too much but doesn't explain enough and your eyes, are looking too tired to see this through to see us through to the end i'll finish this it's already over and out in the open so let it go it's too little too late it's far too late but don't breathe don't breathe a word to anyone i'll lose everything and everyone. one word WOW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Jorgi that was amazing. I need to write poems more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Sonja, I liked yours. I loved how you wrote about stuff that is very difficult to pull through from. Keep writing! i am not exactly done with this song. Run away Well that’s fine Until the day you realize what you’ve done Turn around It wont Be the same The guilt is shinning through your eyes The things we have suffered for you Wasting our precous time so that would pull through Is this what you really wanted cause now your falling falling falling and theres nothing we can do Find yourself At a loss For words You never thought You would be standing here Eyes stare Knowing that You’re the one This time you can’t run The things we have suffered for you Wasting our precous time so that would pull through Is this what you really wanted cause now your falling falling falling and theres nothing we can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 standing on the outside looking in you watch your life pass you by everything you ever wished and dreamed slowly fades and dies. and as the drugs destroy you don't say your sorry just let them take you over and be who you want to be regrets are for the weak but i know you regret this and not falling in love and that you won't be missed now you hang by a thread of hope but it won't be enough redemption has long since passed and now you're time is up goodbye... i dont really know what inspired this it just came out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 I captured the memories, That were dangled by a thread, I embraced the feelings, I felt so much in my head, What I thought we had was special, I thought it was so true, Now I lay here in my bed, Waiting and waiting for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 me and him in his arms and his bed i swear this isn't vengeance it was solice you and me in my dreams and my head it was never about you or anyone questions and answers in between lies and pretence i couldn't believe you then or ever greetings and goodbyes creating tension and suspense i don't scare so easily i'll be fine but we won't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 ^ wow just... wow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 thaaannnkkssss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 impressive jorgi beast ;D wooo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 If only I could write, Like the people in this thread, If only thoughts like that, Ran through my head, If only I was as creative as you, Maybe I could write as great as you guys do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 jorgi, as usual. your amazing <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 If only I could write,Like the people in this thread, If only thoughts like that, Ran through my head, If only I was as creative as you, Maybe I could write as great as you guys do. omg see even thats AMAZING your talented my friend (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arrrrr x matey Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 great stuff guys. i'm jealous. i used to write a bunch, but since i've been on medication, idk, the inspiration left. heres something i wrote 2 years ago, the only one i can remember. and i'm sorry if i've posted it before, i honestly cant remember if i have or not. as i lay dieing, i think about my past, my mistakes what went wrong? could it be fixed? if this blade, my vein had not kissed? will there be tearshed, will there be pain? are these my last thoughts as my bllood drips away? as the memories of my past just fade away? as i lay dieing, i just have to say- i'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 ^ omg that was amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 yea i used to write alot, and when i wrote they were these long ass epic poems, like 3-4 pages long haha. i have no clue where they are tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 two new i heard the sound of the sky caving in and i ran and i ran and i ran i saw the sign that i'm no longer winning and died just a little inside terrified, of what's to come with no more ideas and i learn, that what i want is all that i get if i lay out the pathway myself i bow my head in the silence of suffering nothing more i can do drop to the knees of the ones who are dying and lend them the key to the world terrified, of what's to come with no more idea's and i learn, that what i want is all that i get if i work out the way that you left dreams, dreaming is nothing when nothing, nothing is growing old but leave, leave me with something something to hold up my head terrified, of what's to come with no more idea's and i learn, that what i want is all that i get if i work out the way that you left left for me leave with me lay down with me don't wake me. ***** never, lie and wait with me forever don't let me slip into security we're falling apart because we like the risk of vanity bleeding my senses to heal what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me oh, why? do i keep settling for never hearing you speak so loud now we've got something to talk about to work out what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me together, we're so alive i found my faith through trying, and dying together, we're fully alive nothing hurts us now what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me what could i say? let's wait another day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Nice Hannah-san. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 dreams, dreaming is nothing when nothing, nothing is growing old but leave, leave me with something something to hold up my head left for me leave with me lay down with me don't wake me. ***** never, lie and wait with me forever don't let me slip into security we're falling apart because we like the risk of vanity bleeding my senses to heal /adoration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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