WRITELOVE Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 wow..there are some talented writers on this thread!!! I would post my stuff.. but i'm so paranoid that someone would steal them:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 believe me, no one would. theres no assholes on this forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Paramorphic- Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 This is a short story of mine. I hated Algebra. Especially if you had it in them middle of the sweltering afternoon in the middle of the summer. I also hated summer school. For more clarification, I hated Algebra because of summer school. This was my time to relax not talk about Fibonacci numbers. Luckily that was my last class. I only had two classes. Chemistry and Algebra. Chemistry, I was okay with. If I had a book propped in front of me, and a partner at my side of course. My teacher was an old, intellectual man,. He had his good days and bad days. I just have bad days You know how your parents say if you don't study , things will go wrong? My mom doesn't say that, but I realize why most do. I didn't just not study. I completely forgot. And we had a test. On chemicals. And if you accidentally change those chemicals, you get a first-class ticket to eternal damnation. My fingers quirked as I mixed the chemicals. I liked my lips nervously. My eyes kept glancing around. Everyone else was done, except me. I grabbed the nearest beaker, hopeful that it would be right. The liquid foamed up, and then suddenly subsided. I felt an extreme stress release of f my body. Something was bubbling. I looked down and suddenly it shot up in my face. I felt fire all over my body. Soon enough I was in the bathroom, washing ash off of my white hair. I gathered up my books and headed to Algebra, even though I was late. I walked in and got scared " Nice of you to join us Mr. Flemming, please take a seat and begin your exam." Oh, crap. This was our last day. Exams! What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WRITELOVE Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 ^ that was good!! believe me, no one would. theres no assholes on this forum I totally believe you, but its the people just visiting around the boards..who aren't registered i'd be worried about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreRedSoxGurl Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 this is my first poem i've ever written. i dont konw if its good. but i hope it is? "right back in to place" she sits in her bed at night, wondering about her life; finding reasons why she can't do anything right, and her emotions are paying the price. some see the world in her, others couldn't care less. she's always seen in a blur, trying to pick up her mess. those close to her are hurt, you can see it in each's face. she un-intentionally treats them like dirt, trying to find her own place. she's done knocking herself down. because the monster that stole her soul has thought her she has minimal reasons to frown; and she plans to take back her life the dark world stole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Paramorphic- Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Thats really good :hyper: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 you're not alone, whe our bullets all run out we'll throw stones and words to torment and abuse or worse, i'll save you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 amazing stuffs (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geunice Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 wow, this is gonna sound very juvenile compared to all the others, but what's there to lose? here's my poem My Pain, Your Pleasure She wants to feel She wants to hurt She wants to scream Until it burns Her heart is longing It's longing to beat And sense the pain, The passion, the heat She'd rather be broken With your powerful hands Than have his fragile fingers Travel her body's wonderlands She wants to love, Lust and cater Just for a little pain And all for your pleasure ..it's a work in progress...this poem as well as my writing skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreRedSoxGurl Posted April 12, 2008 Report Share Posted April 12, 2008 i really like that, it's very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Cupid why have you struck me over a million times, I can only really love one, But you have me loving more! I can't choose and i can not take just one, I love them to much, For my heart you have truly touched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 the passion, the heat, the sweat, whats next? everytime we try it, it all falls apart, maybe if we went back, back to the start, we could find the reasons, the reasons to this misery, and stop everything from falling apart, again. i didnt even think about that, literally just decided to write something while reading this thread, and bang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Paramorphic- Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Is that about sex or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 slightly yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Paramorphic- Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Thought so. A little graphic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 just like me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlzSpeakSoftly Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 ^ haha it was graphic but it was good. so in english we had to write a cinquain and it really sucks..but it has to do with paramore so yeah.. Music flows from my heart. I hear it thru the door. It is a wicked form of art. We sing it forever more, A band called Paramore. yes i am still quite aware its terrible but i figured i would post it anyway. i hate poetry...haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 ^ oh I love that, Taylor. I love how you added paramore to it. She took down the pictures And her happiness fell with them So she lays her wishing her world would end Starving for love But love is rejecting her Strangled in fear sicne it all began Trying to hold on as long as shee can It’s a matter of time Before she wishes she was dead instead of alive She sings a song Of no hope and misery She has nothing to give,shes empty Hurtful words slice through questions Nothing will change her confession Slowly fading into nothing It’s a matter of time Before she wishes she was dead instead of alive She sings a song Of no hope and misery She has nothing to give,shes empty So she lays here wishing her world would end And she lays here wishing you would see that shes suffering All she ever wanted was you to tell her that you loved her this is about my friend who as been thinking of killing herself because of her mom and some other reasons. Her mom is so mean to her and she feels like she cant do anything right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 ^ oh I love that, Taylor. I love how you added paramore to it. She took down the pictures And her happiness fell with them So she lays her wishing her world would end Starving for love But love is rejecting her Strangled in fear sicne it all began Trying to hold on as long as shee can It’s a matter of time Before she wishes she was dead instead of alive She sings a song Of no hope and misery She has nothing to give,shes empty Hurtful words slice through questions Nothing will change her confession Slowly fading into nothing It’s a matter of time Before she wishes she was dead instead of alive She sings a song Of no hope and misery She has nothing to give,shes empty So she lays here wishing her world would end And she lays here wishing you would see that shes suffering All she ever wanted was you to tell her that you loved her ! Awesome! I think the best one here...Well in my opinion so far! Awww man, I wish I wrote that... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 ^thank you so much!! You have no idea how much that means to me! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Have fun, Have it while you can Cause lifes going to get you down One day you'll wake up Just like me And you'll realize that Theres more to a frown Pain will punch you on purpose and Love will lure you low deep into dark days But dont worry! Apparently its just a phase So erase your daze, And wipe that smirk off your face Cause life gets the last laugh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 i keep forgetting to post grrrr okay i GOTTA go type some of my stuff up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 I was getting all geared up to do my whole "i am constructive critisizer!", i even got my stern typing face on and everything. It doesn't need it, it's perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 I was getting all geared up to do my whole "i am constructive critisizer!", i even got my stern typing face on and everything. It doesn't need it, it's perfect. really? wow no waaay haha but i like constructive critisism haha, anything??? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 I have to admit i'm pretty shocked at myself, i really don't have any haha ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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