Wildman Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 ^ One word: Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 yes chris. yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 we stand and watch you cry your eyes dry no need to apologise much less to explain i'd stand and watch all over again empty towns, empty hearts look down, stand apart nostalgic and necessary; accidental accessories i asked for everything, back then now you can have it all back suitcases pakced and left in halls 7 year countdown to losing it all i heard what you said when you spoke, you said "i'm leaving my home for a heart that's dead" don't assume, don't assume i changed for you so i'll stand and watch you cry your eyes dry no need to apologise no, much less to explain i'd stand back and watch it all over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 ^ Wow, good! Here is one I've recently worked on (NOTE: the asterisks are lines that are to be screamed with emotion) Why Do These Wings Hang From The Wall Why am I so unsure *Test my heart *Forget myself All alone and lost in the world Give me something, *That I can be proud of Show me something, * That I can live for [Chorus] When will you show *Hearts will crash down Forgiven, too slow *This is how we'll fall know Give me something I can take in *And let it all fall down Wisdom is in shambles *Let alone, broken Is this what we had hoped for? *I hope not *I see nothing [chorus] Anything, that I can feel Why is this pain so real? *Shed no tears Oh, anything ends [Chorus] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zHairA Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 ^nice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Words It seems this is what I need to do Trading feelings for words Is it crazy, I wonder To think I need see What lives down under I don't know who to ask So I'll always just ask myself I'll never know the answer Not even my love and I know I'll never ask her Why should I let her see All the confusion and the mess Am I being selfish Or am I trying to be the best Just for her to see I wished and I said That if maybe I was dead "Would everything else be together" Thats the question Forever left in my head But no,You can't answer Because even you have no right You showed me your history of lies And it's my rightful reason you always fight When will you grow You and her both No one said they'd be stopping you Stopping your hate and your growth The only comfort I find Is trading feelings for words wow , really good! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 well we don't need this and wasn't it you who said that tomorrow's a brand new day ? well, you fucking lied to us it's the same as yesterday and i don't need this so turn around, turn back around we'll start again but start afraid and travel miles away from the people we used to be the sound of whispering replaces words i trusted well i'm paranoid and i'm annoyed i longed to break away and tear out your name i could be so much more march in time, fall back in line it's about time we all fall down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 ^ Absolutely stunning! Defiantly better than my stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 burn, burn there's something in my veins transmitting frequencies letting me know there's something going on the horizon lightening lights up my world oh, i tremble to think that we are something that we can have a face to stand out from someone born in my place and even though your eyes they clear the skies i've realized i've realized sing, sing for we've found a reason i've got a plan to speak against my voice the silence of your thunder deafens us oh, how loud can we get? that we are something that we can have a face to stand out from someone born in my place and even though your eyes they clear the skies i've realized i've realized oh, to be remembered when i can't forget myself is something i don't think that i can handle to be remembered i just won't forget myself there's something in the feel of your arms when i fall that we are something that we can have a face to stand out from someone born in my place and even though your eyes they clear the skies i've realized i've realized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 sing, sing for we've found a reason i've got a plan to speak against my voice the silence of your thunder deafens us oh, how loud can we get? that we are something that we can have a face to stand out from someone born in my place and even though your eyes they clear the skies i've realized i've realized oh, to be remembered when i can't forget myself is something i don't think that i can handle to be remembered i just won't forget myself there's something in the feel of your arms when i fall <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 so turn around, turn back around we'll start again but start afraid and travel miles away from the people we used to be <3 <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 I'll Always Lose Another priceless sad face Coming in my place So if I'll ever need some sympathy I won't get it this time from me Well this home It can always be a game to me But it seems I'm always losing But the home isn't even fighting you see You know I'll lose And I also know I'll lose So I'll have a drink And other things to abuse I know I'll lose I always lose If you want to come back Don't ask permission from me I will never be mean to me It's not about you It's about me you see I know I'll lose Like I always lose As long as I never mix in Any pride I won't care much if I lose Like I always lose Come on and have your share Go on and take more It's not like I care Theres always the long run to run for So again this time you don't Owe it to me to be fair I'll just find another thing to use So I don't feel so bad when I lose Like I always lose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 woah, i'm blown away by the talent on these boards. [: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 i never usually write like, long pieces, stanzas are usually quite short. but have a long(er than normal) to break tradition. turn off that radio oh, it's been singing the same old lies that i told you just last week the same ones that, oh the same ones i heard my parents speak but wait, i'll wait you just wait and we'll be fine patience, i lied through my teeth and through these sheets my dear, i can't quite make out your words seen but not heard so go back to sleep, back to sleep i didn't ask for anything you turn around and start saying that i don't love you, oh well i, i don't love you, so don't turn your back on me and don't point the finger at me 'cause i tried i tried to hold on, to hold on, hold on but you forgot well it's my turn and i say, i say you're useless and i'm afraid it's all going downhill fro here the sky won't fall far from here but the rain will cry down, will cry down all the way and i say we'll all fall down on the way but i'll try to hold on, to hold on, hold on and i'm a mess. draw us on the windowpane i'll disapear and won't complain but watch and i'm here i'm right here, i'm here i'll disapear but i'm right here, so watch me now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 ^ wow, that was great. haha, i've decided to go all mayday parade and have a nice, long title. x] Sometimes It's Easier Not To Kiss and Make Up. I miss you now, Now, that you’re still here. His heart is drowning, You’re bringing me down. Please, Put down the glass, Turn this around. The world just flew by, And left us for dead. With the part of two lips And the tilt of a head. Right now, Let’s dance, Forget all the times, The screaming, the lying, Chemicals burning inside. Each promise is broken, And everything I wouldn’t do, (everything I’d never do) All of it is done. The jealous stare of a scream, My hypocrisy lied, There’s nothing left for us, (nothing left for us to do) All of it is done. The world just flew by, And left us for dead. With the part of two lips And the tilt of a head. You’re patience is more than welcome. Let me peel off your disguise, Gently kiss thy lips, Wipe tears from blood shot eyes. Now that this means something, I’m sure it will do. The meaning’s just as blurred, As the eyes you see me through. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 EDIT: craaaap! somehow i managed to post that twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 ^actually love that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Beautifully Flawed Beautiful distress, such a mess the flaw you behold is captivating it pulls me in as i try to escape i’m like a fly stuck in your web your surrouding me and ready to attack your facade is gone, and we are one on one the fear releases the grip it has on me as you gaze deep into my eyes, my soul i feel calm, you just want love,to be understood free, in the arms of a fallen angel we are now intertwined, flawed as one © JM 2008 Blurred Reality In a dream or is this reality? the line is blurred my eyes hazy in a fog suddenly dizzy where am i? am i dead? i reach out your hand slips away i fall trying to grip your hand again but only to realize i’m bleeding grasping onto a thorn covered bush only a dream i think only a dream or is this a nightmare? © JM 2008 My Protector (Twilight Inspired) Your topaz eyes gaze into mine Like a fine wine, your all mine I reach my hand out to touch you To see if this is not at test A cruel test of my unconscious state You look at me and flash your crooked smile Then grasp my hand and speak, it’s real you say, I’m real I suddenly feel faint, my blood flows to my feet I feel myself drifting into the unconsciousness Then suddenly I feel you grasp onto me gently as if I was a feather in the wind So gingerly you treat me A glass teetering on the edge of a table I am to you Very breakable For you are my protector You are my vampire angel © JM 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I know your real Kiss me now Just a touch of the lips I know you're in love You can tell me Talk to me I know you want me Feel me Touch me I know you want to die with me Hold me And Die By Alannah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 hide these shadows and i'll hide my shame i say i, i'll hide my face and i'll fade away don't let me shine (don't let me shine) everyone will see and i, i'll be someone who isn't me explain the pictures and who i could be just don't let me shine (don't let me shine) i'll be fine dismissed i, i'll be your piece of mind crouching low and with dry eyes just don't let me shine don't let me shine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 ^ beautiful <33 what the hell happened? I have forgotten what things used to be like we'd watch the rain as it declined whilst linking hands like twins we didn't like the way we were so we broke down the wall that stood between us and ignored the passing glares pardon me, but do you rememeber what went wrong with the picture? Because somethings's wrong with the way you talk, it crushes down on my heart like a boulder what the hell just happened here? I loved you. I really did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 ^I love that. (sorry i don't dig the word "boulder" though ) but like. all of it. (minus boulder ) is so good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 ^ naah I wasn't fond of it either. I couldn't think of anything else at the time though but thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 ^I love that. (sorry i don't dig the word "boulder" though )but like. all of it. (minus boulder ) is so good. lmao wtf, Why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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