777 Posted December 3, 2008 Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 tum te tum the thieves owe you the things that they borrowed and the truth owes you the lies that they told but didn't i say ? well didn't i say i loved you well yesterday owers you the promises of tomorrow and happiness owes you the disappointment of sorrow but didn't i say ? but didn't i say i loved you 'cause loves owes me the relief of hate and time owes me one second too late but didn't i say ? didn't i say i loved you. Oh my word! *Cue inspirational music* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 ^love that. go home and i'll put some music on up loud, turned right up loud to make it sound like someone's home and pour yourself a drink i'll pour myself a drink they say reinvention starts here and intervention is unnecessary but fear is necessary and i'm right here your heart is full of liquor but i'm no better ice cubes in your glass is all i'm good for you're all i'm good for well i'll toast this champagne for you if you devote your pain to me and i'll toast a success and leave your mind in a mess along with your bed but you asked for this well the king came on over and tripped over your frown and smashed his crown so stay down, son, stay down. thank you btw, wow, that is, wow. ^^ linney , how can you write like that? *jealous* it's amazinggg. Thank you gorgeous I'll let you in on my secret, I saw a movie and I was going to get myself some water and when I paused it I saw a bucket on the screen xD No, but srsly. That's what inspired that song. _____________________ Jorgi & Closesttoheaven: that was awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 sorry for doubleposting, but I just wrote this song, and I would like to know what you guys think! This time Jorgi's poem inspired me --- I owe you my heart And I say that you owe me The piece of my heart That you tore apart I am sure of it now Cause you turned me down I won't stay down I will Fight to get this right I'm not Giving up on trying This time And I claimed to've forgotten you But I remember that smile I know that look in your eyes I'm sure you want the truth It was me who turned you down The lies come back around Just like you said Just like you said The memories didnt fade They grew stronger And every minute I wish I had A little more time with you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 This time Jorgi's poem inspired me hah that's so great ! love it, btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Loved and Lost There I go again Tearing myself This way and that So eager to please And so eager to lose... *Chorus* Don't bother trying Cause I've loved and lost Too many times before I've no interest In your little game Cause I've loved and lost Too many times before... I've always asked that question The one we all dread to ask They say the hardest question Is the one you ask yourself Well they were dead right... *chorus* I've loved and lost Too many times to track When will this all end? I've loved and lost Over and over again Why must I endure this pain? *solo* *repeat verse 1* *chorusx2 to end, over outro solo* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 hah that's so great ! love it, btw. haha Thanks btw, James that what very awesomeish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 btw, James that what very awesomeish Why thank you Miss Linny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 ^haha YW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 just a quick little something I just wrote... your eyes are lying to you again streetlights mask my darkness even in the darkest of places. what you say doesn't break me. I see that you judged me wrongly. your eyes can lie without your realization, I'll do the opposite to what you wish. I won't be your personal genie. Just shut up and walk away. Don't even try again tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 That was GREAT!^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 new one (just wrote) Fear;The Struggle The fear comes back The dam is broken Fear is released Gushing it fills every inch of my body My soul, my inner being terrified Of what could easily be retold I wish it never was, but it is I wish it never could be, but it can The fear will always stay, but time will move on Moving forward, yet being pulled back All at once it starts to attack This is the story of fear that is all so clear It's the tale I've come to bear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 just a quick little something I just wrote... your eyes are lying to you again streetlights mask my darkness even in the darkest of places. what you say doesn't break me. I see that you judged me wrongly. your eyes can lie without your realization, I'll do the opposite to what you wish. I won't be your personal genie. Just shut up and walk away. Don't even try again tomorrow. that is amazing! <33 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 That was GREAT!^ that is amazing! <33 thanks you two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Here is something random from the top of my head This death, this anguish Pull me down again Forever lost in that lie Is this it? I doubt it But still, I'll wait for you Only when in death we'll unite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 I like that! ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Heres one that I'll do right away...This topic has been at the top of my head for awhile. I don't know exactly how to use it...Or to trade the words for the exact emotions. If I could do it perfectly I would...But...then whats the use of practice? Where I'm Not Why am I, Only sad Where I am And where I'm Not Is another sight and a place to be When will I be there Under the clouds And in the green Kissing the sky Somewhere in time The place that will owe me I don't know, I feel normal now though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 thanks you two no problem, i really like it <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Here is something random from the top of my head This death, this anguish Pull me down again Forever lost in that lie Is this it? I doubt it But still, I'll wait for you Only when in death we'll unite i like that Heres one that I'll do right away...This topic has been at the top of my head for awhile. I don't know exactly how to use it...Or to trade the words for the exact emotions. If I could do it perfectly I would...But...then whats the use of practice? Where I'm Not Why am I, Only sad Where I am And where I'm Not Is another sight and a place to be When will I be there Under the clouds And in the green Kissing the sky Somewhere in time The place that will owe me I don't know, I feel normal now though. wow that is good, i totally understand where you are coming from. I go through times where i feel like that as well. Your very talented. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 ^ Thank you Here is another out of randomness: Show me how to lie You seem good at that Is it only for me, or only for you Tell me again Lies are eventually true or thrown out of proportion Tell me if any are Lie to me tonight and hope it becomes true See what they are, and hope it's thrown out of proportion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zHairA Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 ^wow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 wow that is good, i totally understand where you are coming from. I go through times where i feel like that as well. Your very talented. <3 You really are pretty great aren't you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 You really are pretty great aren't you *looks around* me *points to self* really? awwww...*blushes* you are pretty great too, and talented! Seriously i love your stuff <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 *Points RIGHT AT YOU* YES YOU! ! I like your stuff too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 *Points RIGHT AT YOU* YES YOU! ! I like your stuff too. ! thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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