devotion Posted May 19, 2006 Report Share Posted May 19, 2006 Who am i to you?Another friend that you like to talk to? or am i the person the you can't get out of your thoughts? I've been thinking could this be? no it can't. Friendships should stay friendships. Shouldn't they? Shouldn't they The feeling of confusion over takes me. What should i do? I wish i had the answer' date=' then life would be much simpler I wish knew what to do, I wish i knew what to say Are the feelings here? or will they just go away? If only If only If only i knew Your words they stick to me like glue Try to wash it away, but it just stays. My thoughts run through my mind at 100 miles per hour SLOW DOWN! I scream, but it goes unheard. Is this a chance i should take? or a another "first" i should skip? I wish i knew what to do I wish i knew what to say Are the feelings here? or will they just go away? If only... I wish i knew what to do I wish i knew what to say Are the feelings here? or will they just go away? if only... if only A song written in confusion, A song written with emotion A song written about you I wish i knew what to say Are the feelings here? or will they just go away? If only i knew, if only we both knew....[/quote'] hmm that song would be pretty cool with some screaming.. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nonxperfect Posted May 19, 2006 Report Share Posted May 19, 2006 ^haha. i have a lot of other songs, but that was the only one on my computer. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted May 22, 2006 Report Share Posted May 22, 2006 Here's me in a stormdrain somewhere down my street Here's me not wanting saved or feeling trusting Here's me, eyes inches away from waking lives of the city Here's me wanting reassurance and not pity Here's me letting the murky water rise up me slowly Here's me letting go without knowing Here's me, eyes inches away from waking lives of the city Here's me wanting reassurance and not pity Scared to go out and fake a smile for anyone again want to destroy this burden before it comes down so suddenly again Now everyone's got someone but me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bored_one107 Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 wow these are really good im not that poetic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nonxperfect Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 Confused Of What To Do Confused about my life. Wondering. Thinking. Wishing that you didn't live so far away, but still in teh same state. Do ages really matter? They're just numbers ona number line, that determines our whole lives. If my <3 stopped, would everything be ok? Would all the pain and confusion be taken away? I'm trying, I feel like i've already failed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 ^Thats how I felt last night. Nicely put into words! Good job. Remember Remember when I used to smile Life was fun to me Remember when I didn’t care And this was just a dream Remember when I was a good girl And everything felt right Remember my old perfect world Where no one ever cried *I remember I remember How we said this would never happen I said id never bleed And you promised the same Make a deal promise me You wont leave me for my mistakes Remember when I fell down I struggled getting up Remember how I lost it And didn’t know how to stop Remember all our memories Of dying together I remember laying here Not believing it'd get better * Remember what we said We'd catch each others fall And here we are stuck Between each others walls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nonxperfect Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 ^thanxs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 This is what happens, when I land myself into trouble. fun fun.. Against the rules “Get out of my way” you said “I don’t need you here right now” “Your whole life is pretty sad” “And don’t you dare writing this down” Sorry mum, Im gonna have to be a bad girl Ill do everything wrong and crush your world But wait, isn’t that exactly what I already do? I love messing things up especially for you *This is a lovely beginning of a new end for me Im all the things you never wanted me to be Youre losing control and Im watching you fall Too tired to fix you up with a new wall Im not a hero, don’t expect me to save you Im far from perfect, and sometimes I go against the rules I want what I cant have So I find other ways to feel this hole I need that little bit of attention I cant find at home Besides a different location nothing much has changed Screaming and yelling, yeah we’re still the same Im back where I was, thirteen again We can be okay, but it’s usually a nightmare * “Your apologies never mean a thing” Okay then mum, Im not so sorry, I don’t give a shit “You’re a horrible person, I knew you never cared” I truly am sorry mum, you still have no clue who I am.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Try I wonder if you wonder What you’ve gotten yourself into I wonder if you’re put off When you hear the things I’ve been through I wonder if you think I’m weak Or think that I’m a mess I wonder if I tell you more If you’ll think of me less There’s comfort in your presence There’s comfort in your touch There’s comfort in words, but I fear I may have said too much I’m at a standstill At a halt And it’s entirely my fault But if you’re not frightened away I know that I can try today I wonder if you see me As something that you’re stuck with now I wonder if you’d leave me If you could only find out how I wonder if you think I’m not Worth the trouble I cause I wonder if this thing we’ve got Might have too many flaws There’s comfort in your presence There’s comfort in your touch There’s comfort in words, but I fear I may have said too much I’m at a standstill At a halt And it’s entirely my fault But if you’re not frightened away I know that I can try today I’m trying, I’m trying Every day Not lying, not lying Don’t run away There’s comfort in your presence There’s comfort in your touch There’s comfort in words, but I fear I may have said too much I’m at a standstill At a halt And it’s entirely my fault But if you’re not frightened away I know that I can try today I’m trying, I’m trying Every day Not lying, not lying Don’t run away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Down_Set_Go Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 Sinking Ships and Small Hellos There were things we started but never began, Drowning in our sorrows hardly helped. Neither did the sleepless nights or countless days. Sinking ships never sail even with a heavy wind. How did we come to this, we’re only polite smiles and small hellos. (CHORUS) And we’ve tried so hard to get this right, maybe the next time around. Help us cause we’ve done it again. We fell into the pit we dug for someone else. Take us back to before this began, to the times we stayed and never ran. Pretending we lived close enough, though we hardly did at all never fooled anyone. We look at the same sky but different heavens. Sinking ships never sail even with a captain. How did we come to this, we’re only blank stares and awkward silences. (CHORUS) Are you ready to give up and start again, Or throw it all away with repetitive sorrys. (CHORUS) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chikin Posted June 2, 2006 Report Share Posted June 2, 2006 Just read through the majority of this thread and wanted to tell everyone who posted something that it's excellent. I thought everything I read was very creative and unique. Thanks for the good reading! I write a little bit myself and would appreciate some feedback, thanks guys! 8D ______________________________ This is about a suicide ------------------------- Its unreal The pain I feel No where to turn For this answer I burn What brought you to this You've made my life amiss Did you only think of yourself What about everyone else This, I can not bear Do you even care Your gone now I still don't understand how The damage is done But it feels like it has just begun I wish I could erase But instead I must embrace Its real The pain I feel ______________________________ Sitting in St. Jude's, waiting to have blood taken, lol. ---------------------------- Sitting alone, alone, so alone With a quiet mind But then I fall into the unknown This pounding makes me blind I'm screaming from inside I can't figure out why I feel I have to hide All I want to do is cry ______________________________ Clock ticking Fan spinning Mind troubled Life crumbled Certainty gone Confusion dawns Answers dead Heart shred ______________________________ Looking at the sky Letting out a long sigh Lying so still Such a thrill Whole body in sync Feel my chest sink Then rise up again And down falls the rain Drops slowly streaming down my cheek The grass so sleek Clothes clinging to my skin Close my eyes and spin ____________________________ Do you ever see something in someone And it just shines like the sun You don't know what's there And you can't help but stare As if they are holding onto something swell Like their own personal wishing well With one smile They make everything feel worthwhile I look at you And it's true Your one of them Like a gem In you, I see so many things And I imagine you with wings Because I know you can fly So high into the sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SingMeASong Posted June 4, 2006 Report Share Posted June 4, 2006 "Box Of Old Photos" Copywrited: Me. "Box Of Old Photos" Copywrited: Me. I was searching in my box of old photos I came upon a picture,that used to make me smile But now it brought tears filled with envy All of us smiling,so happy to be living what happends when they fade away? When the room is silenced and nothing to say And the memories deteriorate I feel like i’ve lost you,and the smiles are gone... Let's go back two years Reminisce on jokes that don't make sense I wish I payed attention, and didn't take it for granted I want to feel alive to be with you everyday and not feel awkward when I say ‘I love you’ Everything seems so black and white my throat is sore and so unused It collected dust with all the lies ‘i’m fine really’ was overused. I want us back to what we used to be a happy family,can’t you see? All of our smiles are way too fake All are problems were left un-attended I wish you could see how happy we were when all of us felt alive... I wanna smile when searching in my box of old photos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted June 5, 2006 Report Share Posted June 5, 2006 Mel,the seocnd one is awsome!! i liked both, but the second one its great. All the other ppl, great stuff too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted June 5, 2006 Report Share Posted June 5, 2006 Mel' date='the seocnd one is awsome!! i liked both, but the second one its great. All the other ppl, great stuff too[/quote'] Thanks mate. The second one was kind of meant as a sarcastic joke though. Just messing around.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renith182 Posted June 10, 2006 Report Share Posted June 10, 2006 Hey guys Heres a song i wrote for Hayley. I passed this to her when i met her just 40 hours ago lol. Here is goes Avalon Dreams Collide Verse 1 This day begins like any other, with feelings pertaining to a greater hope. A hope ingrained in my soul through still frames and moving pictures. Frames a heart would live in, with pictures skipping a beat. A comfort I confide in, your aura that surrounds me, the sincerity of your heart. Verse 2 Committing to the depth of these feelings with subtle daylight above. The fossils of a lesser past, whose pallor coincides with this present day. A distinction blurred by our worlds apart. With clarity unseen even till death do us part. Chorus Staring into emeralds with your crimson glory glowing from the halo. Your voice clearing disillusions of this mirage in which I live. Loving who you are and what you do, frankly everything I know about you. Will this unison be broken, as we leave to our lives, before even meeting you, our dreams collide. Verse 3 Laying here today, stargazing to this pipe dream of the past. A past where our lives intertwined, my shoulder there for you in hard times. Times that were meant to be, standing by you even when you’ve fallen down. The door swinging both ways, with our world’s together, bliss by paramour. Bridge But as these curtains close, the Avalon takes absence. Running to you at the end of this tunnel, my heroine, Hail Mary. Can’t leave you without saying goodbye, my existence holding me back. This love or reality? Take your pick Ren, Hayley I will love you till eternity’s end. Outro This day ends like any other, with feelings pertaining to a greater hope. A hope ingrained in my soul, knowing that you’re around. Knowing you’ll never jump the shark, the ocean waves of the industry. Nostalgia for remembrance, Love for countless lifetimes. Ren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted June 13, 2006 Report Share Posted June 13, 2006 Hey guysHeres a song i wrote for Hayley. I passed this to her when i met her just 40 hours ago lol. Here is goes Avalon Dreams Collide Verse 1 This day begins like any other' date=' with feelings pertaining to a greater hope. A hope ingrained in my soul through still frames and moving pictures. Frames a heart would live in, with pictures skipping a beat. A comfort I confide in, your aura that surrounds me, the sincerity of your heart. Verse 2 Committing to the depth of these feelings with subtle daylight above. The fossils of a lesser past, whose pallor coincides with this present day. A distinction blurred by our worlds apart. With clarity unseen even till death do us part. Chorus Staring into emeralds with your crimson glory glowing from the halo. Your voice clearing disillusions of this mirage in which I live. Loving who you are and what you do, frankly everything I know about you. Will this unison be broken, as we leave to our lives, before even meeting you, our dreams collide. Verse 3 Laying here today, stargazing to this pipe dream of the past. A past where our lives intertwined, my shoulder there for you in hard times. Times that were meant to be, standing by you even when you’ve fallen down. The door swinging both ways, with our world’s together, bliss by paramour. Bridge But as these curtains close, the Avalon takes absence. Running to you at the end of this tunnel, my heroine, Hail Mary. Can’t leave you without saying goodbye, my existence holding me back. This love or reality? Take your pick Ren, Hayley I will love you till eternity’s end. Outro This day ends like any other, with feelings pertaining to a greater hope. A hope ingrained in my soul, knowing that you’re around. Knowing you’ll never jump the shark, the ocean waves of the industry. Nostalgia for remembrance, Love for countless lifetimes. Ren[/quote'] whoa.... thats awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SingMeASong Posted June 16, 2006 Report Share Posted June 16, 2006 Title:Miss Independant. Copyrighted:ME. About: How one of my friends got into weed after telling me that she was herself and not going to follow the crowd. My,my,my Miss.Independant. Oh how much you have grown. Hello there Miss.Independant. Who makes those decisions for you now? Criss-cross imitations on the phone. Your incharge now, don’t let the world swallow you whole Silver over gold, go do what your told. I make my decisions now... Right? Offer still stands take it or not Unsurety of your answer, Now that’s just fabulous Everyone else is doing it well hello miss independant. My,my,my Miss.Flip-flopper I never would have known hide it under the floor board Should have never left you alone I bow to you know sweet talker oh how much you have grown. Who makes the decision? Honey dripped collisions my,my,my Miss.Hypocrite the artificial flavor where did you go oh miss independant? My,my,my Miss.Pretender My hardest contender But now you surrender? Hello weed. Now go ahead,proceed and set away your dreams goodbye friends goodbye life My,my,my miss.Hypocrite,oh how much you have grown. I'd love comments on this song,please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted June 22, 2006 Report Share Posted June 22, 2006 Ok this song is about my best friend, and i wrote it just so she know's i'm always gonna be there for her but, it's kinda sad. Shut Your Eyes: I wont let you fade away this time - So hold on to my hand and don't - Let go again - So shut your eyes cause - Everything will be alright - Just know I'll be here til the end - Don't pretend that this could end - cause no matter where you are - I'll still be here to help you through - Just take my hand and shut your eyes - Cause I'll pull you through - So push all your bad times aside - I'll never let you go back so you - Could fall through like before - So take the time to shut your eyes - And realize I'm here to pull you - Through all your bad times and - Don't pretend this could end {End} well that's it i hope you guys like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted June 22, 2006 Report Share Posted June 22, 2006 Universe The sun is just a mask for whatever’s underneath In all its bright light, it’s the thing that keeps us cool When I say keep smiling, I mean that thing upon your face It gives you time to step away, cause it has everybody fooled What is this game we’re playing across the known universe? I say and monkey heads into the wrong direction Monkey falls, monkey fails and blames me for getting hurt Did you really expect me to apologize for some stupid recognition? I can see you’re scared but you feed yourself the fear Of failing other people more than yourself You’re drifting off but I need you to hurry home to me Because I have to tell you, you’re the only truth I’ve met You are a unique definition of life, but the words you say Implant a big smile on my face and it won’t go away If you need me I’ll come running, if I have to, I’ll tell you twice I want to give you my heart instead of selling you lies I’ll try to stay true to whatever it is I’m saying I’ll try to grow and only get better I’ll try till I get what it is I deserve Someone to know across the unknown universe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 UniverseThe sun is just a mask for whatever’s underneath In all its bright light' date=' it’s the thing that keeps us cool When I say keep smiling, I mean that thing upon your face It gives you time to step away, cause it has everybody fooled What is this game we’re playing across the known universe? I say and monkey heads into the wrong direction Monkey falls, monkey fails and blames me for getting hurt Did you really expect me to apologize for some stupid recognition? I can see you’re scared but you feed yourself the fear Of failing other people more than yourself You’re drifting off but I need you to hurry home to me Because I have to tell you, you’re the only truth I’ve met You are a unique definition of life, but the words you say Implant a big smile on my face and it won’t go away If you need me I’ll come running, if I have to, I’ll tell you twice I want to give you my heart instead of selling you lies I’ll try to stay true to whatever it is I’m saying I’ll try to grow and only get better I’ll try till I get what it is I deserve Someone to know across the unknown universe.[/quote'] ohhhh..... thats good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 ^Thank you. Lying was the only thing we both knew how to do I don't want to be your world, only the words inside your head That keep you from failing the things you said And the things you do, make one whole story About that one papercut, that cut way too deep And now you don't know how to heal again Unless it's all a play and you're the greatest actress I guess you're the greatest actress cause every time I tried To fix you, you cried, don't you know you were supposed to smile? And every time you said you loved me it seemed real Pretty lies you told, but at least they were meant for me I remember looking at you, but I saw nothing at all Even your shadow ran away from your wall Do you recall that one time, when you promised you'd take care of me? Instead you ran away as hard as you could and let me bleed I heard a weak "sorry", said I'd believe it if you'd believe it too But I lied and walked away from a person I never really knew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liarsxgoxtoxhell Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 Thank you! I haven't seen you around before [haven't had time to check the boards cause of exams] so welcome to the boards! ahaha :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 Walk Away (Don't look back this time) Don't look back now that you start to - Walk away Don't feel like what your doing - Is a mistake - Walking away from here wont be your fear - Staying where you are will end up a regret for You - Don't look back cause you'll be alright - Don't feel like walking away Isn't right - We know coming back isn't what you want - So just walk away don't worry About leaving us Behind - Cause we'll do just fine so Be on your way now And don't look back this time - Leaving here you know is right - So pack your bags tonight and be - On your way this time - Just know either way we'll still be here - By your side So walk away and don't look - Back this time - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jchurch004 Posted July 4, 2006 Report Share Posted July 4, 2006 ok so ive been writing for my friends band for a while now, unfortunately theyre a metal band so i dont usually have very deep lyrics.. if u know what i mean lol.. anyways this weekend i started working on a song a little and i finally finished my rough sketch of it.. its basically about the weekend altogether as it was surreal to say the least.. its definitely not one for my friends band so i figured id share it with u guys.. anyways tell me what u all think and let me know what i could to make it better.. its pretty good so far tho.. i think.. "Little children learning to fly" Intro - And I wish you were all here To witness my descent Verse - Lift me up on high As I fall from this 14th story balcony The city is so bright with lights Oh, the beauty.. Deaf to my fear of heights And in a moment of true bliss I pray the Gods one last wish (kiss) Chorus - Listen, listen to that thing in your chest little boy Share with us your deepest thought and joy Falling deep and far beyond what you all know Plummeting to the point of no return And so in his final destination This child simply takes it all in Verse - Broken hearts led me to this treasure X marks the spot The spot I will soon alight I can see the fog rolling in Off in the distance, and as it gets closer I wish I could take you all in my heart Bridge - Come with me now Blood, sweat and tears have now passed on Hold my hand, feel my heart and in these few moments Keep me alive Final Verse - Purple and pink lights with tints of red Light up the sky, invade my mind Twisting and falling, the colors begin to blur But this is reality, never to awake The boy takes one last look at himself In a mirror which has haunted for years And as I gaze back at the young boy I smile, turn out the light and continue on my way (Repeat Chorus X2) So here I am Learning to fly once again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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