travel_hymn Posted March 18, 2008 Report Share Posted March 18, 2008 PARAMORE SONG! my name is Hayley and I love you my name is Hayley I hope you love me too :hyper: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 18, 2008 Report Share Posted March 18, 2008 I retrace my steps, Of the time before you left, The memories that left, Creep back with each step, I take in a breath, Hoping to see you again, Knowing Its not going to happen, Why did you leave that rainy day, Leaving me in the woods, Leaving me to decay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 18, 2008 Report Share Posted March 18, 2008 The grass is cool, Beneath our feet, As we run holding hands, Singing out of key, We laugh and kiss, Hug each other tight, Because when the summer comes, Life will be dark as night, This summer romance, Has grown into more, Than what I have ever felt before, I hope this could last forever, I hope it could be more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 this is my attempt at bulldozering down writer's block. it's a reet bitch, you taught me to hate and how to fall and how to break and lose it all in one split second when i lost my mind whhen insanity beckoned from your bright blue eyes and i'm sorry i forgot to thank you but don't worry i won't forget you or how you ruined it all i despise you entirely and i can't think at all but you inspire me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Jorgi <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Stephaine, I love your writings!! Its kind of dark and just amazing. Jorgi, that was pretty sweet. I love the thank you part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 here's a new one. sorry i've been out of things i've been so so sick never, lie and wait with me forever don't let me slip into security we're falling apart because we like the risk of vanity bleeding my senses to heal what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me oh, why? do i keep settling for never hearing but you speak so loud now we've got something to talk about to work out what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me together, we're so alive i found my faith through trying, and dying together, we're fully alive nothing hurts us now what's the worst thing to say? where's the worst place to be? i thought you were never coming back, never coming back to us, to me what's the last thing to say? when there's nothing to see i thought i was never coming back, never coming back to you, to me what could i say? let's wait another day. that's really personal to me. lot's of bad memories actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 PARAMORE SONG! my name is Hayley and I love you my name is Hayley I hope you love me too :hyper: oh my word lara! THat is so random You totally just brightened up my day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 I wrote this on the day of my 17th birthday. It's kind of obvious of what it's about. =p I want to go back To those days Where I was a kid I want to go back Into the past Where days seemed to last I want to go back To the home That I used to know I miss those days That were so carefree And people just let you be Growing up, in this day and age Isn't that bad, you see I just don't want to grow Yet I want to be more Oh why can't I Just turn the hands Of time backwards And begin again? I love growing up And experiencing new things The only part that I won't like Is turning into a machine I just want to go back Into those days That I could enjoy in so many ways Though I don't regret The choices I've made They have changed me Into the person I am today I just long to be That kid again And all that mysteriousness That is comes with At least I Still have those memories I hold onto with My heart and mind Oh how I long to be That kid again For just one more day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 thats cool Justin. I guess when you finally get where you want to be you want to go back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Haha, I guess that applies some of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Untitled It all started last weekend, when you were talking to your pretty little whore. She shags other men can't you see? Then she leaves you alone on the kitchen floor. She hates you, and she always will. I hate you, too. Yet, why, everytime I see your f**kin face, I feel attracted to you? In all the irony, why can't you see? I'm much better than she'll ever be. My heart feels the need to burst out of my chest, and jump to the person I like the best. I was like this the day I met you, But we were young back then. How did we think love would work? Ask yourself that, asshole. Look where we are now sweet heart. What can we do? In all the irony, why can't you see? That I.... love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Stephaine, I love your writings!! Its kind of dark and just amazing. Thank you very much, I appriciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 you taught me to hate and how to fall and how to break and lose it all in one split second when i lost my mind whhen insanity beckoned from your bright blue eyes and i'm sorry i forgot to thank you but don't worry i won't forget you or how you ruined it all i despise you entirely and i can't think at all but you inspire me. what you wrote about, i hate that feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Guys. I am stuck. I'm writing this plot of a story. I know exactly what I want to happen. But I keep going off track. I'm experimenting with a new way of writing, too, but it won't go right and arghh. Help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 what you wrote about, i hate that feeling. tell me about it, it's reet horrible. Guys.I am stuck. I'm writing this plot of a story. I know exactly what I want to happen. But I keep going off track. I'm experimenting with a new way of writing, too, but it won't go right and arghh. Help? I'm horrendous at writing stories, i go off on a tangent every other sentence. Plan it out first. Write out in rough what you want to happen at the beginning, middle and end. Write out what characters you're using and what they add to the story, and how the follow through. Write out test chapters/paragraphs, just mess about with orders of how things follow through. Just write through it, it doesn't matter if you write a load of rubbish, you can scrap the bits you don't like and develop the bits you love later on once you've ordered how things are going to happen. Just scribble things down until you find something you like. It works for me, occasionally Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 when writing lyrics i always have a note pad with me and when something comes to me i just scribble it down, this happens a few times a day, then you just piece bits and bobs together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 I'm attempting to break down writer's block. I hate it. I can't write anything decent. I went for an abstract approach in this attempt, yuck. i'm sorry i caught you unawares please tell me you're not scared cause i'm not so scared of you or what we've seen well, white walls dance blightly under your gaze under your gaze my mistake for leaving so soon just turn back around before this hits you in your face your beautiful face so this isn't what i asked for let's shake heads and hands in unison and beg for forgiveness not to mention some respect in the presence of such greatness so this isn't what i asked for, no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Jorgi <3 brilliantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Jorgi <3 brilliantage. Agreed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 (: <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Jorgi, I love your writing!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 god i wish i had the patience to write stuff down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonjica94 Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Here is one my special songs... I wrote it for my ``friend`` whose father recently died, her mom was raped, and her brother is like...complete idiot...She is such a slut, but she is very unhappy, so this is my song about her: Oh my god The hell she`s going through The hell her life is The hell of future who is smiling And just waiting to eat her forever She lost the friend she never used She doesn`t even deserve this song She cryes, she smokes With her fake face She cannot even run, but she is so thin Oh my God The low is level she is on Her heart is black and beating slow Well, that`s it. I know there are no rhymes, but what can I do, I am no expert. Acctually, to tell you one my secret: This is my first song I ever wrote...I will continiue to write, maybe they get better and better...WHO KNOWS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Jorgi, I love your writing!! Cheers (: I'm slowly (but not surely) getting back into this. I'm quite ready to start tearing my hair out if it doesn't get any easier sometime soon. don't breathe don't breathe a word to anyone i'll lose everything and everyone her hands are shaking and your voice is trembling stop listening it's your turn to say just what i need to hear i need to hear something this silence says too much but doesn't explain enough and your eyes, are looking too tired to see this through to see us through to the end i'll finish this it's already over and out in the open so let it go it's too little too late it's far too late but don't breathe don't breathe a word to anyone i'll lose everything and everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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