777 Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 I think it's great. Like the rhyme scheme and things. It's superb. Even if it is "random" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Thanks I am in love with your avvi ang sigy Axl Rose <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 :hyper: Rep, And I love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 xD I love you too? Lawl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 i ran oh, i ran and the ground followed me i supported the trees and i forgot you. i screamed, yes, i screamed and songbirds heard me they sang and the rain kept rhythm and i forgave you. i laughed, i laughed so loud at the thunder its applause lasted for miles and i regret you. i danced, oh, i danced elegantly with my dreams the water carried me and i left you. but i cried, i cried one tear dedicated to you honest crushed me but i don't think i love you. relief is mine to keep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 ^^ we need to jam / write together some time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 for sure man, that'd be rad (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 but you comin cambridge next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
closesttoheaven Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Why do you tell me you care, when you don't care at all Am I what you want? 'Cause you're what I need I'm trying to fall in and out of love Can't you just let me be? but your thoughts always come back to haunt me And I can never let you go I'll tell you I'm for real so you won't have to be hurt no more I'm trying to fall in and out of love Can't you just let me be? You're the air I need to breathe If I don't have you, I'll be left here to sufficate I'm trying to fall in and out of love Can't you just let me be? I thought love was all I wanted but I'm throwing your heart right back at you, like a piece of rock on the ground I need one more look in your eye, before I can fall asleep tonight I'm trying to fall in and out of love Can't you just let me be? Look at where we are now (My thoughts you can never know) Look at where we are now (My thoughts you can never know) Your thoughts are haunting me, My thoughts will haunt you, Then we'll realise, that we're only repeating history, falling in and out of love again Crapness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 God dammit Jorgi, You're awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SANDIEGO Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 omg wow i love all of these songs!!! i put up another one on youtube YOUTUBE.COM/IBETHANYYY tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Poetic line of the day You only have one life to live. So love it, live it, and like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 get away, the voice, they shout, can't get much louder and you might catch what they're saying before they catch you out don't worry, darling i've had my fun the sun won't miss me too much and you'll miss me more but i'm down with this town (telephone whispers that spoke my name i heard but i am speachless for what i have to say) don't worry, darling i've done my time the lies won't hurt me too much and the lines i crossed are forgiven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 ^ i actually want to have sex with your mouth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 oh fuck i just realised how THAT sounded, NOT LIKE THAT...for once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limelight Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 ^ HAHAHAHAHAHA that is the funniest thing ive heard all day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahaha ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 i aim to please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 i love this. <3especially the first two parts. Thank you so much This Is How We’ll Dance (one-shot) We boarded the tour bus, ready for another tour. It was going to be amazing. Our album, Riot!, just came out and we were really psyched on touring with new songs, and maybe new fans. Zac and josh were messing around, throwing luggage at each other’s heads. I laughed and chucked some at Josh, you ducked away easily, but ended up getting hit in the head with Jeremy’s suitcase. “Laugh while you can,” Josh told Zac, who was laughing wildly, “But one day you will wake up with half of you ass gone.” Zac put on a look of mock horror and continued laughing. I rolled my eyes, but smiled. Those two were always fighting, but they were the best of friends. I looked at Jeremy, who was grabbing his suitcase from next to Josh and carrying it inside. He came out with a couple of eggs and threw them both and Josh and Zac. They roared in rage and turned to me. I shook my head and pointed to Jeremy, who was rolling on the floor with laughter. “See if you can cut off my ass,” Jeremy said between breaths, “But you have egg in your hair until we take a shower” Zac jumped on Jeremy, then Josh went on top of them. I laughed aling with them as they wrestled on the concrete. “Hey, Hayley,” Josh called, “Come join us!” I laughed and jumped on Josh. Jeremy grunted with the added weight. Zac grabbed my head and gave me a noogy. I yelled and got off Josh. “C’mon guys, we need to get on the bus,” I said, fixing my hair. Somebody mumbled “Party pooper” as they got up. “Butthead!” I yelled and tackled Zac. He let out an “Oomf.” As he hit the ground. “What did you call me?” I asked, sitting on top of hit and hitting his chest numerous times. He hated that. “I called you a hardy pooper!” he said. I laughed and got off him. “Never comment on my pooping again and you will remain alive,” I said and walked in the bus. I heard him laugh. I grinned and walked to my bunk, which was already filled with the clothes I had dumped on there earlier. I noticed all my bras were missing. I looked around the room and searched every corner. “Josh!” I finally yelled. “What?” he asked, coming in the doorway. “Where are my bras?” I asked. “Um, ask Jeremy, I saw him carrying brightly colored objects earlier,” he said, pointing outside of the room. I gave him one last glare and walked into the living area, where Jeremy was playing a Game boy. I smacked him across the head. “Ow! What was that for?” he asked, rubbing his head. “For stealing my bras,” I said. He looked confused for a second and then he smiled. “They are in Zac’s bag,” he told me, grinning. “Zac’s bag?” I almost yelled. “Yeah, his bag,” Jeremy mumbled. I rolled my eyes and dug through Zac’s bag. I only found one of five. I walked towards Jeremy and threw it at his face. “Gah!” he yelled, “What was that for?” “There was only one,” I growled. “Really? Ask Zac, then,” he grumbled. “Zac!” I called, and he poking his head out of a closet. “Yeah?” “Where in the bus did you put my braziers?” “Oh, those colorful things that you wear to hold your boobs up?” he asked, “Yeah, I put water on them and froze ‘em” My eyes widened, “Dude!” “Yeah? I have a name you know.” “Oh, I’m sorry Zac. Where are they now?” “In Josh’s bag,” he pointed in the room. I rolled my eyes. This what was what, the millionth time I’ve been in there, looking for the blasted bras? I walked in and opened Josh’s bag, sure enough, they were there, the ice melting a soaking all of his clothes. Zac was in trouble, that was true. I left them, nonetheless. I wasn’t about to soak my own clothes author's note: So, what do you think Omg, amazing -------- I don't know if I've posted this but it's an introduction to a story/book, I haven't decided yet.. Sorry it's kinda long, But here it is: I always ran in the early saturday mornings. Same old path, ever since I moved to Birmingham three years ago. Round the woods, by the old pharmacy, the almost hidden path trough the other wood and then round in a half circle and back again. I had always liked to run. Feeling the wind drag your clothes and your hair. I always used the same clothes. The white sneakers, the grey sweatpants, a blue tshirt and the black windjacket. In my left pocket I had a small bottle filled to the top with cold water. In the other pocket of my jacket I had my old cellphone, which I only used for important calls. My dad had been most unwilling to give me a new phone, like the other kids at school have. - Don't want to spend money on unneccisary things, do we? He had told me an amount of times. At those times, I used to think of the kids at school who frowned and looked weirdly at my phone. Their whispers being so loud that I could hear them. - Look, that girls phone is sooo old.. But while running, I didn't think of that. As soon as I started running, kicking off into my mind, all my troubles flew away with the wind. No worries at all. It was a wonderful feeling, that was only mine. I didn't invite my older brother to run with me these mornings, even though his begging. He was sad by it, because he loved running, just as much as me, if not more. But the fact was, that I didn't want to share the amazing feeling. Now I just ran past the old pharmacy with my ipod on a good volume, my heartbeats almost in the same rythm as the song that streamed into my head. My interest for running was a bit unusual for my age of 15. Not anyone else in my class liked it. There were those in school who actually disliked me for my running skills. But I had two friends that I kept close to heart. Dispites the fact that both Angela and Brian hated all sports, didn't pull us apart. In a strange way, it was like if we were connected. We didn't have much in common but we were like siblings. I loved them both to death and I knew without a doubth that they loved me too. It was not something we walked around telling eachother all the time. It was just there. Invisible and impossible to touch but the feeling was right. Oh, I forgot to tell you a detail on my tshirt. It's a white box with black letters on it, my name. Isabelle Hart. ------ EDIT: Sorry for making such a loong post, but I just made a song, and I am kind of happy with it, and I wanted to know what you guys think.... It's called "Who I Am". It is a struggle for me to hold back the tears To keep the pain inside me without it showing But I've taught myself to live a lie hiding the truth deep within I know it's wrong but I've been doing it for years Making the words transparent without you knowing Been willing to say goodbye But that would be a sin The lies i've formed within my head Is easy to stumble out by now Now I know how it's done But I wish I did not know Oh, Oh, this secret Oh, Oh, I want it to be known Don't be surprised if I fake a smile I've done that before In a life where nothing made it worth living Singing made me pull through I have not talked about this in a while It is not something I adore A time where I always kept on giving And taking was known to you The lies i've formed within my head Is easy to stumble out by now Now I know how it's done But I wish I did not know Oh, Oh, this secret Oh, Oh, I want it to be known I don't want to sacrifice the life I'm living now Even thought that sorrow is eating me up inside out sometimes I think I should have made a vow Not to give you anything not even a dime Oh, I, Oh, I can not be sorry for who I am No, I, No, I am not sorry, can you understand The lies i've formed within my head Is easy to stumble out by now Now I know how it's done But I wish I did not know Oh, Oh, this secret Oh, Oh, I want it to be known Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 New song about Hayley! Hey Hey Hayley I was thinking of you again, today I thought of your smile I thought of your face I thought of you like... Will we ever be? Chorus- Hey hey Hayley, will you come to me? Hey hey Hayley will you show me the love? Will you love me Will you hug me Will I ever know you? And I wonder Will I see you Will I know you Can I ever meet you? Will my dreams ever come true? What can I say Chorus God, your just so great My, I just wanna hold you Gracefully in my arms Oh, there isn't anyone that is perfect/ like you You, are, a sight for sore eyes Bring me too, my love Just sing to me, just sing to me Chorus My dear Hayley, can I love you? My dear Hayley, is this true? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTarget Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Awww that's so cute! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Awww that's so cute! Thank you. I'm working on the tune, and some chords. Hopefully I can record it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTarget Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Awesome. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 ^ I'll tell you when I got it recorded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 lol, I'll wait for this one as well. Make it gentle. Edit: Plan I'm alone because you pulled the love That held me from underneath I never thought anything like this Could ever happen to me And now I'm alone with pain And I'm convinced the friends That I thought you and I could be Has left the minds and hearts of you and me Why was this, So discrete Why couldn't I see it This kind of thing was held from me It's like it was born to not reach my ears And to secretly act without the consent of my fears If this was your plan Then it hit my heart Why would you sacrifice our love Just to get it your way How could you trade the bearer of my biggest love, Just to end your play When did you decide to attack us And to leave us with pain Until the end of the day If this was your plan Then it hit my heart so hard Let us grow old and forget this day Bless me so that I could see Theres another day for me Lets forgive, But not because we Can't or can Let us dance around the beginning Our peaceful start If this was your plan Well then it killed my heart Another Edit: It's Alright You can answer your own ways And you can decide for yourself But we both know that one day You'll be ashamed of what you'll say So why don't we leave it tonight And let it stay in yesterday You know we're both much bigger than this So let's not leave the pain here to stay We told ourselves That this is not good for us So let's not hate And let us move along Because in the end it's alright Our hate will fade in the night I won't tell everyone That I wanted no fun For everyone That, I will take to my grave Instead I'll keep my head To myself until I am dead And I know they'll forgive me And when I forgive them I'll let them be at peace Just as they left me AND ANOTHER EDIT!?!? : Little Kid I am hurt, I live inside the pain For now I'll think I won't love again I heard the same song, The same song all along The song of you, My friend I love this feeling This feeling of sympathy But the funny thing is I'm the only one giving this to me I've used that line, I've used it some time before And I'll never grow tired of it I'll only do it sometime some more I believe I'm a kid Just a little kid inside Because I chose everything else And I gave all the victory to my pride And I no longer care And I don't want to walk around the view The sight of myself ashamed On my knees in front of you But I'll live just for my act Because it's only you You shouldn't worry You shouldn't worry at all One day I'll beat myself up for what I did But until then, I'll watch myself lose And act like a kid I apologize for making this page a little lengthy, But I did this recently and I'm making lyrics to better suit me and my acoustic guitar, So it's not all so boring...Hence the rhymes. I could be a rapper! Kind of...Maybe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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