The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[777]

 

 

Somewhere And Gone

 

It seems I'll be out of here

I'm not respected anyways

Don't you dare try to lie to me

I'm sick of your game

All you guys ever do is laugh at my name

I'll be gone into another town

Alone at peace and happy at least

I'll give a day, When I'm gone away

To miss all the ones

I love and left that foreseeable day

 

You can keep on talking

You can keep on doubting

But one day my ghost

Will laugh in your face

Not cause I'm bad

But cause I'm sad

That you couldn't

Have me at your place

You can think what you want

But it won't matter to me

We won't talk ever again

 

It'll be the end

There'll be no words you can send

Have your own life to live and attend

Happily raise your own growth

Be happy for us both

 

The people we can be

All the emotions we see

Isn't it exciting to know

Life is here for you

And for me

[Wildman]

^ Beautiful!

 

In about 8 hours I'll post a song I recently wrote, so people, be on the look-out! XD

[777]

I'll be!

[Wildman]

Well, this is probably the closest thing I've written that's on a "sexual" side. Anyway, I wrote it a couple days ago, and there still are some adjustments I am yet to make:

 

Kill The Torture

Of what I’ve seen

Everyday hoping and dreaming

One day we could be

It was never that easy

The faces we hide behind

A grateful suffering beckons me

Behind closed doors, open up to me

 

[chorus]

No song can justify my means

Stricken never-the-less, yet still broken

Feel me inside, feel it outside

And when I hear you calling, “please forget me”

Please forget me

 

Though I’m trying

You are the only one I’ve ever loved

Just forgetting

Filling up my heart with lies

Yet I’m falling

Deeper and deeper in myself

Behind closed doors, open up to me

 

[chorus]

 

Nothing is better

Still not any closer

Please take it all away

In my dreams it’s me and you

Please don’t let this happen to me

Take me too

Behind closed doors, open up to me

 

[chorus]

 

If this is truly how you feel

I’ll let go too

But this is how I feel

Selfless and alone

Can you feel it?

You and him must be

[roxchick93]

^oh wow i really like that! :]

[Jorgi]

don't worry today, i'll leave tonight

everything will make sense in the morning

(we'll be alright)

the lights that were broken

are shining down as you open

the door on your way out

 

is this fair ? i didn't think so,

glance around, face down on

the floor with your feet and

your dreams,

is this fair ? i needed hope, so

i took yours

 

so don't turn around, face the sun

watch it rise and close your eyes

(we'll shine for no one)

the promises you told them

are left just as broken

as the hearts the lost it all

 

you've stolen the show

and i've lost my pride,

bruised both your eyes and

swallowed the lie- it's all mine.

[Linney]

your opinion was,

thrown away with the rest of them

and your lies were,

believed like the best of them

pardon me i'll watch

as you make a mess of this all

 

but i hope you survive,

oh you'll survive

just to see you cry

 

i laughed along

and the last one was his own

the stories sold,

were better kissed than told

take aim, take cover

hit the road and i'll hit back

 

the way you walk

the way you walk away

the way you talk

with nothing to say

fight hard, fight hard

and i hope you survive

just to see you cry.

 

Awesome!

 

I have way too many... so I will only post one now... more later... I guess:

 

I could say I was the first man to really go to the moon.

I could say I saved a whole town without a single goon.

I could say I took over an entire empire with a single spear.

I could say I’m many things, but let me make this clear.

I could say I was the one that stopped the Katrina victims from getting support.

I could say I was the one that brought Dread Scott to court.

I could say I was the one who dropped the first nuclear bomb.

I could say I was the one who messed up senior prom.

I could say I’m the one who drank the last beer.

I could say I’m many things, but let me make this clear.

 

If I said I was the one who killed JFK,

If I said I was the one who took your mother away,

If I said I was who made the dark rule over day,

If I said I was the one who put you up for prey,

If I said I was the one who will bring a gun to M.I.T,

Would you still respect me?

 

I could say I am many things, but I won’t lie.

I could say I am many things, but you won’t reply.

I could write down a poem to show you my love.

I could be the one who rose their hand JUST above yours.

I could be the one who made your mom fall asleep at the wheel.

 

 

It's not done yet... but I really like it.

 

I'm gonna say like Chris said to Jorgi, I hate you for writing that, cause I wish I wrote it. It's the most amazing poem I've read in a while

 

Flawed Scripture

 

You all deny the pain and the blood

of innocents spilled at the hands of your God

Witch hunts and holy crusades

Killing those that would not obey

Your crimes against man cannot be be ignored

Your whole fucking scripture is nothing but flawed

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

A glorified cult with your own twisted law

Living life on your knees, kneeling before

preachers of deception that thrive off of war

preachers of hate that demand more and more

but you're their slave 'till you get up off the floor

So rise from your knees and give them their war

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

amazing, it's so true

 

Eh... made this a while ago... not that good...:

 

My heart has betrayed me.

It has led me astray.

It has made me believe in this thing called love.

It has made me give myself away.

It has trapped the thought of you in my mind.

It has let me believe.

But I won’t lose this time.

I know it will never be.

I will not let myself believe.

I am no one.

You are the light.

I will never let me believe

That we both can burn bright.

Just run. Run away from me.

I am only bringing you down.

Your life has promise.

You could become world renown.

I’ll just sit in my dark corner.

Watching you slip away.

But this is better for you.

It is better this way.

 

In my final dying breaths,

I will wish I did something.

But then I will realize

that I clipped my wing.

With the thought of you in my mind

I could do anything.

But knowing it will never be

broke down everything.

My whole life in pieces

hoping for some help.

Fuck that.

I’ll pick it up myself.

You were the wind beneath my wings.

But the wind that never was.

We were never there.

Nor will we ever be there.

 

So finish me.

Take the final piece of my heart.

You were my everything

But you fucking finish what you did start.

How could you of been my lifeline

If we never were?

I can’t think straight without you.

Everything is a blur.

When you lifted me up

It was all in my head

I’d rather stay down here,

Stay down here and rot instead.

As I will say

In my last breath

Better to have never gotten what you loved

Then to have lost it in the end.

 

once again, love it

 

 

 

Somewhere And Gone

 

It seems I'll be out of here

I'm not respected anyways

Don't you dare try to lie to me

I'm sick of your game

All you guys ever do is laugh at my name

I'll be gone into another town

Alone at peace and happy at least

I'll give a day, When I'm gone away

To miss all the ones

I love and left that foreseeable day

 

You can keep on talking

You can keep on doubting

But one day my ghost

Will laugh in your face

Not cause I'm bad

But cause I'm sad

That you couldn't

Have me at your place

You can think what you want

But it won't matter to me

We won't talk ever again

 

It'll be the end

There'll be no words you can send

Have your own life to live and attend

Happily raise your own growth

Be happy for us both

 

The people we can be

All the emotions we see

Isn't it exciting to know

Life is here for you

And for me

 

I spy talent..

[Linney]

Sorry for doubleposting, but since everyone was being so amazingly talented I wanted to share something, and hopefully it's not that bad...

 

 

Betrayed you

 

i'll knee before your glorious shape

i'll trap my words and make them wait

i wish that was true

oh god, i wish that was true

 

you look at me as if i've betrayed you

you talk to me as if i've broken you

i wish it wasn't true

that i've really betrayed you

 

i spread my wings and try to fly

but i find that they are paralyzed

not like my tongue that should've been numb

but ofcourse i was unintentially dumb

i opened my mouth

i gave you away

and now it's obvious

you won't let me stay

[777]

Sorry for doubleposting, but since everyone was being so amazingly talented I wanted to share something, and hopefully it's not that bad...

 

 

Betrayed you

 

i'll knee before your glorious shape

i'll trap my words and make them wait

i wish that was true

oh god, i wish that was true

 

you look at me as if i've betrayed you

you talk to me as if i've broken you

i wish it wasn't true

that i've really betrayed you

 

i spread my wings and try to fly

but i find that they are paralyzed

not like my tongue that should've been numb

but ofcourse i was unintentially dumb

i opened my mouth

i gave you away

and now it's obvious

you won't let me stay

 

 

Now I HATE YOU, I should have done that! :crybad:

 

 

 

 

Anyways, Linney once again my lyrics friend...You're GREATNESS!

[Linney]

^aww, don't hate me.. you're soo much better than me so you don't have to worry! But, THANK YOU!

[777]

lol hot potato! Your turn to catch..Because I think you're better than me! So don't worry!

 

And let's end the game.

[emily !]

v Read the post below, i accidentally added it twice.

[emily !]

^ You're equally great! End of.

 

Chemically Numb.

Bragging rights were flushed away,

With every drunken kiss.

Tasting terror on your lips.

Feel him rushing through you,

‘cause you won’t remember this.

 

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

Slurring on your dirty words,

Begging him to stay.

 

Counting down the seconds,

Until you are obsolete.

The hands are ticking on the clock,

Men, Swimming in your sheets.

 

In between the bushes,

Through your secret alibi’s.

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

 

My cheeks are stained,

Remembering the light.

You’ve slipped beneath

The narrow minded,

And you have lost your fight.

 

They all replaced your innocence,

And stole away your fears,

You’ve become my darkest dream,

A shadow of what was.

 

This spinning room,

Inside my head

Has become all that was.

Counting down the seconds,

Until you are obsolete.

 

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

Slurring on your dirty words,

Begging him to stay.

 

 

haha, i just have to share this part of an MSN conversation:

Ashlea. ® Hangover says:

ummm just thinking about last night HMM1 hahah wbu?

Emily. says:

um, pretty much just writing lyrics.

Ashlea. ® Hangover says:

Ohhh sweeeeet About me right? =D

Emily. says:

ofcourse

Ashlea. ® Hangover says:

Hahahaha good.

..luckily she doesn't know they really ARE about her.

[777]

Hah, Clever.

 

And I also like the way it is. I'm glad you don't refrain from any words.

[kyute_shana]

^ You're equally great! End of.

 

Chemically Numb.

Bragging rights were flushed away,

With every drunken kiss.

Tasting terror on your lips.

Feel him rushing through you,

‘cause you won’t remember this.

 

haha, i just have to share this part of an MSN conversation:

 

..luckily she doesn't know they really ARE about her.

 

i like this part! who's ashlea btw?

[emily !]

i like this part! who's ashlea btw?

 

thanks [:

She's a friend of mine who used to say she wasn't into drugs, smoking, and excessive drinking blah, blah, blah.

And then she started hanging round with people who are..and now she kinda does it aswell, just to fit in.

and then, just before she was bragging about how she practically fucked three differant guys last night while they were all drunk.

I don't wanna know, and it doesn't make her look cool. I'm sick of hearing about it.

..the worst thing is, My boyfriend was at the party, So i don't know if he was involved and she just didn't tell me about it.

[kyute_shana]

thanks [:

She's a friend of mine who used to say she wasn't into drugs, smoking, and excessive drinking blah, blah, blah.

And then she started hanging round with people who are..and now she kinda does it aswell, just to fit in.

and then, just before she was bragging about how she practically fucked three differant guys last night while they were all drunk.

I don't wanna know, and it doesn't make her look cool. I'm sick of hearing about it.

..the worst thing is, My boyfriend was at the party, So i don't know if he was involved and she just didn't tell me about it.

 

wow..talk about peer pressure! it's a good thing you weren't hanging around with the same set of people..yep..it's not really cool.. hmm..it's not really advisable to ask your guy about it..but if it would give you some peace of mind..maybe you should..

[emily !]

wow..talk about peer pressure! it's a good thing you weren't hanging around with the same set of people..yep..it's not really cool.. hmm..it's not really advisable to ask your guy about it..but if it would give you some peace of mind..maybe you should..

 

uhuh, it's ridiculous actually.

yeah, i think i will. [: thanks.

[777]

thanks [:

She's a friend of mine who used to say she wasn't into drugs, smoking, and excessive drinking blah, blah, blah.

And then she started hanging round with people who are..and now she kinda does it aswell, just to fit in.

and then, just before she was bragging about how she practically fucked three differant guys last night while they were all drunk.

I don't wanna know, and it doesn't make her look cool. I'm sick of hearing about it.

..the worst thing is, My boyfriend was at the party, So i don't know if he was involved and she just didn't tell me about it.

 

Awww I'm sorry, I can say I kind of see the same thing here.

 

My friend braaaaags about his drugs. He definitely takes pride in it.

[emily !]

^ I hate it, 'cause it's not the sort of thing to take pride in. I've seen first hand the effects drugs can have on families. it's a load of bull.

[kyute_shana]

uhuh, it's ridiculous actually.

yeah, i think i will. [: thanks.

 

yep..it really is..no prob

[holleh]

^ You're equally great! End of.

 

Chemically Numb.

Bragging rights were flushed away,

With every drunken kiss.

Tasting terror on your lips.

Feel him rushing through you,

‘cause you won’t remember this.

 

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

Slurring on your dirty words,

Begging him to stay.

 

Counting down the seconds,

Until you are obsolete.

The hands are ticking on the clock,

Men, Swimming in your sheets.

 

In between the bushes,

Through your secret alibi’s.

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

 

My cheeks are stained,

Remembering the light.

You’ve slipped beneath

The narrow minded,

And you have lost your fight.

 

They all replaced your innocence,

And stole away your fears,

You’ve become my darkest dream,

A shadow of what was.

 

This spinning room,

Inside my head

Has become all that was.

Counting down the seconds,

Until you are obsolete.

 

This is how

You’ve become,

So fucked up now,

So chemically numb.

Slurring on your dirty words,

Begging him to stay.

 

I love it. A lot.

 

 

Wow. We have some really talented people on these boards!

[{Alice Cullen}]

Don't Run Away

 

You can only run away for so long

You can't hide from the past

You can't escape your feelings

But you can learn to deal with them

To learn from past mistakes

Move forward, not back

To choose to not go to where it was all black

But instead to a new world of color

A world of hope, a world of peace

A world where you are in control

[holleh]

Don't Run Away

 

You can only run away for so long

You can't hide from the past

You can't escape your feelings

But you can learn to deal with them

To learn from past mistakes

Move forward, not back

To choose to not go to where it was all black

But instead to a new world of color

A world of hope, a world of peace

A world where you are in control

 

This seriously made me cry.

It's really beautiful.

Just like you

[{Alice Cullen}]

This seriously made me cry.

It's really beautiful.

Just like you

aww and aaww *blushes*

thank you