{Alice Cullen} Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 i just wrote a new one, not my best but yeah.. They say it's all in how you view yourself But what if it's in my head? What if i can't quit hearing the words that were said Fat, elephant, ugly, you name it What if when i look in the mirror i see a whale No joke, seriousness in tow What if i feel that low? What if i lose the weight but still feel the hate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 I wrote this in a few sittings, so it may moodswing at certain points. Don't Make Me The Bad Guy, I Know What I Did Wrong Pouring my heart out to you Filling it back up with hate I just wanted to say I love you But it was something you couldn’t take Step off, get back and move out of my way Forget everything I ever meant to say Sentimental feelings got me all fucked up In a way, I cannot feel the same Unwritten memories fail Ceasefire on my only thought, and bless what I have created [chorus] You have made me all fucked up But I still love you Is that all you need, all you feel? My feelings will last forever Together is all I need But your sorrow is still within reach I cant forget, I’ll never forget Those two words you spoke to me I will not be angered Just a little broken I’d throw my heart out to you And sewing myself together I try to forget I was left all alone [chorus] Tired and reckless Scared and alone And I have completely lost my mind Lost and insane I have completely lost myself Navigating the haze I am completely lost and confused Please make this end now Are you still ashamed of me? [chorus] Have you completely lost your mind? I’m done with this denial This torment you defile This pain is not enough Give me the cancer Let me die slowly, and see That I know that I’m not worthy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 I wrote this in a few sittings, so it may moodswing at certain points. Don't Make Me The Bad Guy, I Know What I Did Wrong Pouring my heart out to you Filling it back up with hate I just wanted to say I love you But it was something you couldn’t take Step off, get back and move out of my way Forget everything I ever meant to say Sentimental feelings got me all fucked up In a way, I cannot feel the same Unwritten memories fail Ceasefire on my only thought, and bless what I have created [chorus] You have made me all fucked up But I still love you Is that all you need, all you feel? My feelings will last forever Together is all I need But your sorrow is still within reach I cant forget, I’ll never forget Those two words you spoke to me I will not be angered Just a little broken I’d throw my heart out to you And sewing myself together I try to forget I was left all alone [chorus] Tired and reckless Scared and alone And I have completely lost my mind Lost and insane I have completely lost myself Navigating the haze I am completely lost and confused Please make this end now Are you still ashamed of me? [chorus] Have you completely lost your mind? I’m done with this denial This torment you defile This pain is not enough Give me the cancer Let me die slowly, and see That I know that I’m not worthy This is seriously beautiful. It made me cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 The Noise All This Noise Surrounding Me Blocking Out My words Those Words I Love You Cannot Be Heard Not By You Not By Anybody Drowned Out By The Noise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 ...And heres to my Brother obviously... A Demon This thing starts inside you Making me do what it wants to The honor we made Makes the desire fade And I don't care about All the things that you've paid Cause why buy something when I needed nothing Why can't I say everything But this one thing Can't you tell Why you're so well Paving your own intentions All the way back to hell I called you a demon I Called you my brother I gave you my true love But you wanted something other Than me We could be Something else Can't you see I Called You A Demon I've Placed You My Brother You're Emaculate But You're Not A Lover Your Face Is Flawed With Your History Your Answers Stay And Thats Such A Mystery What Can Happen Again Is We Can View Something Longer Than The Eyes That They Give You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 ...And heres to my Brother obviously... A Demon This thing starts inside you Making me do what it wants to The honor we made Makes the desire fade And I don't care about All the things that you've paid Cause why buy something when I needed nothing Why can't I say everything But this one thing Can't you tell Why you're so well Paving your own intentions All the way back to hell I called you a demon I Called you my brother I gave you my true love But you wanted something other Than me We could be Something else Can't you see I Called You A Demon I've Placed You My Brother You're Emaculate But You're Not A Lover Your Face Is Flawed With Your History Your Answers Stay And Thats Such A Mystery What Can Happen Again Is We Can View Something Longer Than The Eyes That They Give You Ohh mann... This is great. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wiking Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Just take these pills and you'll forget about everything But do you want to forget ? Are you ill enough today Temptations are high when the devils inside of you So hold on, to yourself Believe, in yourself Your the one who decides So take a chance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 This is seriously beautiful. It made me cry. Thank you very much! OK, I don't remember when I wrote this song, nor is it very good and it's not titled. I don't think it's finished either... Oh well, here it is: I’ve never seen you But I love you The way you look, the way you smile Makes me whole inside The way you talk, the way you walk Makes me whole inside I’ll never make this work tonight [chorus] Is this something that I’ll never hold Something that’ll never happen I see no reality No way to be Only thing that comforts me Is no wisdom If you love me, you will come with me Or I’ll just bleed Mourn this day, but just remember that I’ll always love you I believe in you So please forget me Fade, fade, fade away [chorus] Is this what you truly wanted? Is this façade, a true disguise Take no pain, in this shame Take on this hand that I’ll never hold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyute_shana Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Thank you very much! OK, I don't remember when I wrote this song, nor is it very good and it's not titled. I don't think it's finished either... Oh well, here it is: I’ve never seen you But I love you The way you look, the way you smile Makes me whole inside The way you talk, the way you walk Makes me whole inside I’ll never make this work tonight [chorus] Is this something that I’ll never hold Something that’ll never happen I see no reality No way to be Only thing that comforts me Is no wisdom If you love me, you will come with me Or I’ll just bleed Mourn this day, but just remember that I’ll always love you I believe in you So please forget me Fade, fade, fade away [chorus] Is this what you truly wanted? Is this façade, a true disguise Take no pain, in this shame Take on this hand that I’ll never hold This is a very beautiful song..I can totally relate to it! Thanks for making this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 This is a very beautiful song..I can totally relate to it! Thanks for making this! Thank you much! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Whoa, Chris, that's amazing. <3 _________ this song is twilight/new moon inspired, but it's from Edwards point of view.. my heart isn't beating i see that you are fragile and i try not break you but it's so hard now when i'm aware of the bruices i so easily can make i try to control myself because somehow you're worth it when my life was empty you entered the room in my mind i tossed and turned wondering how i could react like this but the only thing i know is that i don't ever want to let you go i know that i'm being unfair and i don't try to hide it but you don't want to see me as the dangerous person that i am but i try to control myself because somehow you're worth it when my life was empty you entered the room in my mind i tossed and turned wondering how i could react like this but the only thing i know is that i don't ever want to let you go you promise to love me whoever i am whatever i do you say i love you my heart isn't beating but it is beating for you whatever i'll do it'll be the best for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 ...And heres to my Brother obviously... A Demon This thing starts inside you Making me do what it wants to The honor we made Makes the desire fade And I don't care about All the things that you've paid Cause why buy something when I needed nothing Why can't I say everything But this one thing Can't you tell Why you're so well Paving your own intentions All the way back to hell I called you a demon I Called you my brother I gave you my true love But you wanted something other Than me We could be Something else Can't you see I Called You A Demon I've Placed You My Brother You're Emaculate But You're Not A Lover Your Face Is Flawed With Your History Your Answers Stay And Thats Such A Mystery What Can Happen Again Is We Can View Something Longer Than The Eyes That They Give You amazing. Whoa, Chris, that's amazing. <3 _________ this song is twilight/new moon inspired, but it's from Edwards point of view.. my heart isn't beating i see that you are fragile and i try not break you but it's so hard now when i'm aware of the bruices i so easily can make i try to control myself because somehow you're worth it when my life was empty you entered the room in my mind i tossed and turned wondering how i could react like this but the only thing i know is that i don't ever want to let you go i know that i'm being unfair and i don't try to hide it but you don't want to see me as the dangerous person that i am but i try to control myself because somehow you're worth it when my life was empty you entered the room in my mind i tossed and turned wondering how i could react like this but the only thing i know is that i don't ever want to let you go you promise to love me whoever i am whatever i do you say i love you my heart isn't beating but it is beating for you whatever i'll do it'll be the best for you Linney, that awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 ...And heres to my Brother obviously... A Demon This thing starts inside you Making me do what it wants to The honor we made Makes the desire fade And I don't care about All the things that you've paid Cause why buy something when I needed nothing Why can't I say everything But this one thing Can't you tell Why you're so well Paving your own intentions All the way back to hell I called you a demon I Called you my brother I gave you my true love But you wanted something other Than me We could be Something else Can't you see I Called You A Demon I've Placed You My Brother You're Emaculate But You're Not A Lover Your Face Is Flawed With Your History Your Answers Stay And Thats Such A Mystery What Can Happen Again Is We Can View Something Longer Than The Eyes That They Give You wow, that is seriously amazing. Just wow, i'm blown away by that. Wow. amazing, your so talented <3 I wrote this in a few sittings, so it may moodswing at certain points. Don't Make Me The Bad Guy, I Know What I Did Wrong Pouring my heart out to you Filling it back up with hate I just wanted to say I love you But it was something you couldn’t take Step off, get back and move out of my way Forget everything I ever meant to say Sentimental feelings got me all fucked up In a way, I cannot feel the same Unwritten memories fail Ceasefire on my only thought, and bless what I have created [chorus] You have made me all fucked up But I still love you Is that all you need, all you feel? My feelings will last forever Together is all I need But your sorrow is still within reach I cant forget, I’ll never forget Those two words you spoke to me I will not be angered Just a little broken I’d throw my heart out to you And sewing myself together I try to forget I was left all alone [chorus] Tired and reckless Scared and alone And I have completely lost my mind Lost and insane I have completely lost myself Navigating the haze I am completely lost and confused Please make this end now Are you still ashamed of me? [chorus] Have you completely lost your mind? I’m done with this denial This torment you defile This pain is not enough Give me the cancer Let me die slowly, and see That I know that I’m not worthy and that made me start to cry, i've been through a relationship where i felt just like that. you are an amazing writer <3 we have so many talented people here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 don't act surprised that look in your eyes was a dead give away as your legs gave way run, coward ? run, cornered or stand your ground stand up proud (stand your ground) look up, face down this whole town has stayed the same since it brought me down (you're next, you're next) with her name on the walls and your face in the hallway let's pull it all down and forget (you're next) imagine what we could have been we could have seen this coming as the end comes closer let's imagine, let's examine what made us who we are where we are (who are we ?) pardon me, most sincerely listen, listen closely ignore the world and live right now ignore the words and speak loud now listen, listen closely and live right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 ^ Very amazing, as always! XD and that made me start to cry, i've been through a relationship where i felt just like that.you are an amazing writer <3 Thank you, that means a lot to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 Thank you, that means a lot to me! no problem, i speak the truth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 This is something I wrote about 4 years ago, and I recently found it. Anyway here it is, it's nothing special, it's written about the same girl as all my others, oh wellz. Create A Hope Because now You pulled me far Deep in the ground To rot away Now I'm dead You've caused this pain to me [chorus] As I thought I was the one (that you loved) But time to go and crawl (away) Crawl beneath Fall back down Create a hope Look at this life you have dishonored Look at this life you have fallen Created life-less hope Less hope I hate you Burn-DIE-Hold for The life in which you gone The void of nowhere You said no End of story [chorus] Life is over We woke up And ended time Over the horizon, our fate 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 That could be one epic love song. It's thunderous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 This is something I wrote about 4 years ago, and I recently found it. Anyway here it is, it's nothing special, it's written about the same girl as all my others, oh wellz. Create A Hope Because now You pulled me far Deep in the ground To rot away Now I'm dead You've caused this pain to me [chorus] As I thought I was the one (that you loved) But time to go and crawl (away) Crawl beneath Fall back down Create a hope Look at this life you have dishonored Look at this life you have fallen Created life-less hope Less hope I hate you Burn-DIE-Hold for The life in which you gone The void of nowhere You said no End of story [chorus] Life is over We woke up And ended time Over the horizon, our fate I fucking love this so much. Seriously. I'm litterally bawling my little eyes out. So amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 ^ Thank you, I wrote that when I was 12... Ahh... Youth... That could be one epic love song. It's thunderous! Is that a compliment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 It really is, I actually dig that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 ^ Sweetness! Here is yet another from the 'ol song book of mine, I wish I could write as dark as I did then, now I go more for a melodic feeling, my old ones are more-the-less poems, oh well, here it is: Never My Heart Not telling Not doing anything at all I keep saying that I don't care Searching and praying To find the missing heart Hoping for that ending to come near I want nothing from you Except, all I want is your heart For you taking mine away from me [chorus] Call me near and never steal my heart You have no heart And I know this will never happen Keeping everything away Tear me to no meaning And not a moment to heal What I love I hate how you answer the prayer As shall be in my heart The sorrow or heartless love I don't give a damn what you feel You have no heart [chorus] My chest is full of blood A gaping hole exists I search for the sake of it all Harshly I grasp the meaning But I fall again From the loss Too many times I'm told about stopping But I proceed Only to lose my heart Once again Once again So when you [chorus] Nevermore Crush what has been hungered For so long I never want anything As long as my heart is honored For nevermore Lost my heart to you You have no heart at all So this is how it ends [chorus] I don't want your heart Damn, I use the word "heart" too much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 i just wrote this and i apologize in advance if it makes no sense whatsoever. I am drugged up for real, i'm waaaay sick. Yay for fevers! anyways here it goes. Dream Love Pretty soon, off to sleep Dreams overpower, unconscious state I am only yours, for tonight only If we had more time, we could For now we don't, so we can't Look in my eyes, show no hate Let's cuddle, just relax For soon it will all just be a dream The sun will come and wash it all away Then will come another day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 ^ I can understand a meaning for it. I like it a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 ^ I can understand a meaning for it. I like it a lot! thanks, i can't even comprehend, i mean begin to comprehend what i was trying to say. My meds are taking effect..whoa! i think it is night night time for me..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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