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I could possibly mean you want to be in bed with another, or, the fact that you sleep with another and dream about them, or, you were with someone but it turned out to be a dream... Just some ideas...

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I could possibly mean you want to be in bed with another, or, the fact that you sleep with another and dream about them, or, you were with someone but it turned out to be a dream... Just some ideas...

well yeah, i do dream about someone alot. And his name is Robert Pattinson, no lie. Stupid, yes.

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The Middle

 

Just ask the world

What have you learned

Are you foolish, Do you forget

We haven't experienced the worst yet

 

You know it all

Don't you know it all

All the time

I won't know it all

I last recall

It was my fault

After all

 

Ask your friends

Did you meet the ends

Did father strike

The soul you loved

The woman you love

The woman who cried for

who'll rise above

 

It's all me

You know it's me

No one is there to be

With me

They know me

I don't know me

I'm here for all to see

 

Who did I ask

Any of my friends

No ones answering

I guess I'm ignored again

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Linney, that awesome! :D

 

Thanks love :)<3

 

 

EDIT: found some poems/songs I wrote some time.. umm, I don't know if I've already posted the 2nd one, but oh, wth.. here they are.

 

Illusion of you

 

if you were real

i'd hug you now

but you're not real

you just can't be

 

i saw you fade

i saw you die

i saw your life crawl up inside

 

so please don't talk

because i hear your voice

and it's telling me to believe

but i won't believe, because you aren't real

 

i won't go to the point when i try to touch your hand

because it will go straight through

it's just an illusion of you

 

my mind is playing games

to avoid the pain that scar me

it's terrible

because i'm miserable

without you around

i can't make a sound

no one can save me

from feeling so shut down

from living like a ghost

because you're not here

and that is my fear

 

Promises

 

one single touch and the story ended

no colorful dream where nothing was broken

photos laying in a mindless disaster

shattered in pieces they are

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

one more night and the pain hid within me

shiny swords designed to protect a heart

were magically gone just like that

a void suddenly born

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

soaring lies in the unfaithful sky

you swore to protect me

and still I'm broken

where did all the promises go

you were supposed to save me

why did you god, let me sink

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

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Here is yet another from back in the day:

 

Nothing At All

 

Of all that I have tried

Nothing seems to fit

Never-the-less fill the blanks

Masking what is given

(Given to me)

 

[chorus]

Rolling thunder

Given to me by the gods

Sucked from a vampire

And torn to life

Nothing at all, nothing at all

 

Dear Jesus, in case you didn't know

I tore myself together

Crucified next to you

Not you, not you, not you

 

[chorus]

 

Please help me

I am lost

Deep in the forest of you

God bless it, God bless it

Blinded by the storm

 

[chorus]

 

Strike me down

Strike me down

Strike me down

Strike me down

Strike me down

Strike me down

 

 

Talk about metaphors... Damn...

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Promises

 

one single touch and the story ended

no colorful dream where nothing was broken

photos laying in a mindless disaster

shattered in pieces they are

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

one more night and the pain hid within me

shiny swords designed to protect a heart

were magically gone just like that

a void suddenly born

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

soaring lies in the unfaithful sky

you swore to protect me

and still I'm broken

where did all the promises go

you were supposed to save me

why did you god, let me sink

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

where did the love go

as strong as the wind

it was ripped away

leaving me naked to the truth

 

That was, Awesome! <3.

 

Tonight.

Your Acoustic riffs,

And melodys,

Are reaching into me,

And I am waiting,

For you to fall,

Just like I fell for you,

Tonight.

 

I cannot say,

I feel alright,

That’s not the way,

I feel tonight.

‘Cause tonight I feel like,

(Tonight I feel like)

I should be with you.

(tonight I should be with you)

 

If every kiss was deafening,

I would hum your silent lullaby,

Goodnight.

‘Cause baby, never felt like this,

Love,

I never felt the same.

I have never felt like this,

Before.

 

This song is swimming,

Through my thoughts,

Erasing memories,

Remembering everything I was taught.

‘Cause I have never,

Been in love,

Before,

 

I cannot say,

I feel alright,

That’s not the way,

I feel tonight.

‘Cause tonight I feel like,

(tonight I feel like)

I should be with you.

( tonight I should be with you)

 

The past was all I waited for,

The nights when you,

You would call me yours.

Now it’s dead,

I feel alright.

That’s not the way,

I felt that night.

‘Cause tonight I feel like,

(tonight I feel like)

I can’t be with you.

( tonight I shouldn’t be with you)

(shouldn’t ever be with you, goodnight)

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I Must Be Crazy

Well look here my friend right now

Your father doesn't care

His alibi is absent

On who he spends his time with out there

Don't you wished he loved you

Never hurt mother and cared?

He's only going to hit me again

Please don't get so scared

yes I know this is all so strange

You never saw anything like this before

But there are people so unfortunate

People who live on the floor

You're so used to luxury

But I was never jealous

Not like all the others

Who don't love their brothers

 

He who doesn't love his brother

The one he sees everyday

Can't love his father

Whom he worships in every way

 

I like that I can shock you

I wonder what it is I like

I feel that I can't love you

And there's nothing I can do

 

Who shall I blame

To end my satisfaction

When I play your game

And beat you with a passion

I'll take a break

Cause my life is here to make

And you won't have a fraction

 

 

 

 

For practice. Probably nothing I'll use.

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I Must Be Crazy

Well look here my friend right now

Your father doesn't care

His alibi is absent

On who he spends his time with out there

Don't you wished he loved you

Never hurt mother and cared?

He's only going to hit me again

Please don't get so scared

yes I know this is all so strange

You never saw anything like this before

But there are people so unfortunate

People who live on the floor

You're so used to luxury

But I was never jealous

Not like all the others

Who don't love their brothers

 

He who doesn't love his brother

The one he sees everyday

Can't love his father

Whom he worships in every way

 

I like that I can shock you

I wonder what it is I like

I feel that I can't love you

And there's nothing I can do

 

Who shall I blame

To end my satisfaction

When I play your game

And beat you with a passion

I'll take a break

Cause my life is here to make

And you won't have a fraction

 

 

 

 

For practice. Probably nothing I'll use.

 

That was amazing, truly.

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I Must Be Crazy

 

Well look here my friend right now

Your father doesn't care

His alibi is absent

On who he spends his time with out there

Don't you wished he loved you

Never hurt mother and cared?

He's only going to hit me again

Please don't get so scared

yes I know this is all so strange

You never saw anything like this before

But there are people so unfortunate

People who live on the floor

You're so used to luxury

But I was never jealous

Not like all the others

Who don't love their brothers

 

He who doesn't love his brother

The one he sees everyday

Can't love his father

Whom he worships in every way

 

I like that I can shock you

I wonder what it is I like

I feel that I can't love you

And there's nothing I can do

 

Who shall I blame

To end my satisfaction

When I play your game

And beat you with a passion

I'll take a break

Cause my life is here to make

And you won't have a fraction

 

 

 

 

For practice. Probably nothing I'll use.

i'm blown away by this as usual <33

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Chris, that was <3.

 

____

 

another heartbreak

 

if i would've shouted out my thoughts

would it have made it better

if my throat got all sore because i screamed so much

would you think it was better

 

better than this silence

that i hide within

 

i'm sorry to disapoint you

but i won't start talking

just for you

no, not for you

cause you're the reason i crawl back inside

your love

it scares me

 

i am aware

that you think that i'm dreaming

of a world

where you're gone

but that's not true

no, that is not true

 

my numbness and silence

conseal my fright

you think that i don't love you

but the truth is that i'm scared to

you push on my limits

breaking the rules

that i've fought to create

you're breaking the rules

i can't deal with another heartbreak

don't deny it

it always follow

so therefor

i'm not banding with you

 

i tell myself such stories

to make sure i'm not falling

in love

in love

oh not in love

cause heartbreak will follow

i know it will follow

so forgive me please

this is my disease

unable to love

cause heartbreak will follow

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Chris, that was <3.

 

____

 

another heartbreak

 

if i would've shouted out my thoughts

would it have made it better

if my throat got all sore because i screamed so much

would you think it was better

 

better than this silence

that i hide within

 

i'm sorry to disapoint you

but i won't start talking

just for you

no, not for you

cause you're the reason i crawl back inside

your love

it scares me

 

i am aware

that you think that i'm dreaming

of a world

where you're gone

but that's not true

no, that is not true

 

my numbness and silence

conseal my fright

you think that i don't love you

but the truth is that i'm scared to

you push on my limits

breaking the rules

that i've fought to create

you're breaking the rules

i can't deal with another heartbreak

don't deny it

it always follow

so therefor

i'm not banding with you

 

i tell myself such stories

to make sure i'm not falling

in love

in love

oh not in love

cause heartbreak will follow

i know it will follow

so forgive me please

this is my disease

unable to love

cause heartbreak will follow

 

Ohhh man that is some great stuff.

 

I'll show you my favorite part.

 

that i've fought to create

you're breaking the rules

i can't deal with another heartbreak

don't deny it

it always follow

so therefor

i'm not banding with you

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questions, well i didn't know

they meant so much

or answered so little.

the way you moved

against the wall

was a little bit confusing

-looking my way ?

or looking away

straight lace, straight face

walk this way.

your eyes shine,

and you're just as high

as the joint in your fingertips

the words at your lips;

on the tip of your tongue

should be sung, sing them loud

sing them loud

this is all, this is everything

but are we anything ?

but are we anything,

sing them loud.

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Ohhh man that is some great stuff.

 

I'll show you my favorite part.

 

that i've fought to create

you're breaking the rules

i can't deal with another heartbreak

don't deny it

it always follow

so therefor

i'm not banding with you

 

thanks :D:hug:

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Kids Like Us

 

 

 

Listen here, You won't know nothing

I'll tell you what to learn

Then you'll have a chance at something

Who cares about the other kids

Because it's only me that hates you

I feel that I can tell you this

Because there are so few

 

Kids Like You

 

I'll look at him again

I know he ain't my friend

He'll teach us fear

Plus everything here

When will this thing end

 

They wove my will to bend

 

Recess is here

And now's a break to take

What were they thinking

I think their loyalty is fake

Look at all these pictures

These letters, And all of this

I wonder how many more

Lessons they'll miss

 

 

Where is my mother

Where are my friends

The other kids are terrified

We'll erase all of the ends

I fought for my sisters

My brothers and the misters

Why am I nothing here

Sitting and learning with fear

 

 

 

 

 

Basically about how I feel about the beginning of school. Or what my feelings remember about it.

 

And about "that" one teacher...

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Kids Like Us

 

 

 

Listen here, You won't know nothing

I'll tell you what to learn

Then you'll have a chance at something

Who cares about the other kids

Because it's only me that hates you

I feel that I can tell you this

Because there are so few

 

Kids Like You

 

I'll look at him again

I know he ain't my friend

He'll teach us fear

Plus everything here

When will this thing end

 

They wove my will to bend

 

Recess is here

And now's a break to take

What were they thinking

I think their loyalty is fake

Look at all these pictures

These letters, And all of this

I wonder how many more

Lessons they'll miss

 

 

Where is my mother

Where are my friends

The other kids are terrified

We'll erase all of the ends

I fought for my sisters

My brothers and the misters

Why am I nothing here

Sitting and learning with fear

 

 

 

 

 

Basically about how I feel about the beginning of school. Or what my feelings remember about it.

 

And about "that" one teacher...

amazing as usual :hug:

 

new one from me:

The Endless Story

 

 

 

Once again it starts

Like it never parts

Maybe I should friend it

Then I wouldn't have to pretend

Put on a mask, a facade

Be strong, but yet weak

It would be part of me

Instead of just my enemy

But alas we fight

Night after night

Day after day

Simple betrayal at it's best

It's all in my mind they say

Is it?

Am I crazy?

Or is just some sort of poetic justice?

Maybe it will end in a heroic fight

I would be the hero

I would be the one who did something right

Instead of the failure

I wouldn't have to keep looking over my shoulder

But the story goes on....

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:D!

 

 

But I am sorry you're not having the best night.

 

You have msn?

 

Oh, And I might as well leave this here

 

 

Like You

 

Your humor is innocent

Anything will make you smile

I think I fell in love

And it's been awhile

When I could say

Someone could take my pain away

You're a lot to look forward to

Cause you make my day

 

When was there someone like you

Why couldn't I make things right

How did I love you?

When did you shine so bright

 

Everyone I met hasn't made me happy yet and

Everything that was fine was never mine

How could I have someone

Like you

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