{Alice Cullen} Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 ! But I am sorry you're not having the best night. You have msn? Oh, And I might as well leave this here Like You Your humor is innocent Anything will make you smile I think I fell in love And it's been awhile When I could say Someone could take my pain away You're a lot to look forward to Cause you make my day When was there someone like you Why couldn't I make things right How did I love you? When did you shine so bright Everyone I met hasn't made me happy yet and Everything that was fine was never mine How could I have someone Like you and thanks <3 and actually i feel better except i can't sleep but that is nothing new. and awww that is soo sweet, i love it.. YOU ARE GREAT!!!! i wrote this a few months back about Twilight, yeah yeah STFU My Protector Your topaz eyes gaze into mine Like a fine wine, your all mine I reach my hand out to touch you To see if this is not at test A cruel test of my unconscious state You look at me and flash your crooked smile Then grasp my hand and speak, it’s real you say, I’m real I suddenly feel faint, my blood flows to my feet I feel myself drifting into the unconsciousness Then suddenly I feel you grasp onto me gently as if I was a feather in the wind So gingerly you treat me A glass teetering on the edge of a table I am to you Very breakable For you are my protector You are my vampire angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 hahah And another great one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 hahah And another great one. haha thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andalix Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Jen and Chris, you two are great at writing! I'm fascinated! Respect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Jen and Chris, you two are great at writing! I'm fascinated! Respect! aww thanks <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andalix Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 aww thanks <3 No problems, just keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Here's one There's No Cure For Love Why were we such fools Saying we were friends When we both knew we loved each other We wanted to be with each other every living moment in every day To hold each other in each others arms To be able to say "I Love you" There is no escaping this feeling You and I We are meant to be Forever and Always This is a sickness And there's no cure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 ^ That's was beautiful! I felt what you felt when you wrote that, fantastic! Here is something my tired self is going to write of the top of my head: With Haste, My Fellow Brethren Waiting for me at the top as I make my way from the bottom Thinking of how us both, fit into this world We are both on different ends And I know know I'm not great And I know you are the one with the better life I know you are still more perfect Fuck these feelings I always seem to have I'm still at the bottom Striving to become better Getting up to the point where I can even see you close This pisses me off in so many ways I cannot describe You are what I live for now You have given me a passion A reason to see if we are meant to be I love you, but it's complicated to grasp You are the one for me, Hayley Yeah, you wanna stab me don't you? Oh well, that's how I feel... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Here's one There's No Cure For Love Why were we such fools Saying we were friends When we both knew we loved each other We wanted to be with each other every living moment in every day To hold each other in each others arms To be able to say "I Love you" There is no escaping this feeling You and I We are meant to be Forever and Always This is a sickness And there's no cure I really like this one. It even inspired me a lot to make this... Trigger I will pray And I'll fall I'll get stronger And wronger than anything at all I will pray I've lost, Once again Will I die, Will it end What happened To us I'm a fool According to you Well I am one Well done It's nothing new You've turned all of them Everyone against me I can't blame them You're a good liar It's just that I'm sorry Your fate is with the fire Maybe one day you'll grow And know, Your soul will go Somewhere good If you change yourself Today and even tomorrow Don't blame your sorrow And thanks Alannah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 ^ Wow Chris, that was amazing, is it OK if I use that song to play? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 ! IS IT!! Use it man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Sweetness! I hope it doesn't turn out as bad as "Voids"... lol Damn classical guitar.... I hope I get an acoustic for christmas! (That can also explain why the guitar playing sounded so awful!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 hahah, Thats what I was using. Voids was....Now that I think of it, It was just below mediocre. I think maybe you need to practice the guitars until it's stuck in your head....And while you play the song you should be able to say anything without thinking of the chords and song. Then you'll be able to sing and play fluently. And don't worry about messing up the lyrics or anything, I'm not like that. It's already good enough for you to use it I'm so excited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 All I played in that song was G7 and C Major the entire time in a VV^V motion. So it wasn't that hard, I didnt memorize the lyrics, so my sister has to flip the page in my notebook back and forth... Even a n00b can play those chords... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 lol yeah I suppose so...Since the fingers are so similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andalix Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Alannah, Ernest and Chris! Those are beautiful! How can you write poems like these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andalix Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Alannah, Ernest and Chris! Those are beautiful! How can you write poems like these? EDIT: Damnit! Post duplicated! Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 It's ok Woodpecker. And thanks by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andalix Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Thank you for forgiving me! And no problem, Woodpecker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 I really like this one. It even inspired me a lot to make this... Trigger I will pray And I'll fall I'll get stronger And wronger than anything at all I will pray I've lost, Once again Will I die, Will it end What happened To us I'm a fool According to you Well I am one Well done It's nothing new You've turned all of them Everyone against me I can't blame them You're a good liar It's just that I'm sorry Your fate is with the fire Maybe one day you'll grow And know, Your soul will go Somewhere good If you change yourself Today and even tomorrow Don't blame your sorrow And thanks Alannah. This is good Glad I could inspire you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 26, 2008 Report Share Posted December 26, 2008 Here is another out of tiredness and boredom. Lion, Tigers, Bears, Oh My Footsteps seem to be leading to my room The harder and harder they seems to come I just heard my mother scream, they are taking her away I am so scared, I am hiding under my bed They'll find me and I know it I'm hearing my two sisters screaming, they have been found They are taking them away I am so scared, scared for my life The Green Police are a fright for sure I hope I'm not sent to death They are in my room, I hear frantic talking They look under my bed, only to find me They drag me away, I start screaming like my mother and sisters My father has been killed by these men already They put me on this truck It's dark and raining outside I am hungry and been standing here for hours Finally, they let us out There are several others there There are large towers here, barbed wire fences too I know I'm here till death Here I come Father This one is a bit more personal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 ^ Wow That's Good Ernest Untitled Nothing Here Nothing in this heart Not Now Not Ever No Love Nothing Nothing for you to love in me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 Here is another out of tiredness and boredom. Lion, Tigers, Bears, Oh My Footsteps seem to be leading to my room The harder and harder they seems to come I just heard my mother scream, they are taking her away I am so scared, I am hiding under my bed They'll find me and I know it I'm hearing my two sisters screaming, they have been found They are taking them away I am so scared, scared for my life The Green Police are a fright for sure I hope I'm not sent to death They are in my room, I hear frantic talking They look under my bed, only to find me They drag me away, I start screaming like my mother and sisters My father has been killed by these men already They put me on this truck It's dark and raining outside I am hungry and been standing here for hours Finally, they let us out There are several others there There are large towers here, barbed wire fences too I know I'm here till death Here I come Father This one is a bit more personal. i love your titles. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 Here's one There's No Cure For Love Why were we such fools Saying we were friends When we both knew we loved each other We wanted to be with each other every living moment in every day To hold each other in each others arms To be able to say "I Love you" There is no escaping this feeling You and I We are meant to be Forever and Always This is a sickness And there's no cure Aww... I love it <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 i love your titles. =D lol, thank you! I actually take more time coming up with the song name than writing it itself... lol 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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