The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[holleh]

i love your titles. =D

 

I thought this said "I like your song titties

 

I was like "AH SAY WHAATT???"

[Wildman]

^ Do you have reading glasses? lol

[emily !]

I thought this said "I like your song titties

 

I was like "AH SAY WHAATT???"

 

LMAO.

[Wildman]

OK, I'm gonna write a short one before I go to bed

 

Yo, Dude, Go Pop Your Zits Elsewhere

If this is how it ends

I'm sorry for that pain I gave you

Ending it now would only make things worse

For both of us

I love you, but I still know that hate

For this, I cannot forgive

We were both wrong

I shot you down

While you let me fall

I know we can both be fucked up

Both on different side

I know my mind is fucked up too

Still nothing can feel right in me

God damn this

[777]

Lies! Lies! Lies!

 

When the truth hurts you

You can blame it on me

I've never been a liar

And your lies they'll never set you free

You'll be held prisoner

You'll hold the ball and chain

Forever carrying the weight

Forever holding the pain

There's only one key to free yourself

That's tell the truth

And you won't be the same

 

So, Is that how they all see you

What did you do

 

They see you so low

Another thing you wouldn't know

What are you gonna do

To redeem yourself

From everything you never knew

 

Could it be you always judged yourself

Trying to disguise everything about yourself

You tried to hide things that weren't well

The truth is here in front of you

And there's no more lies that you could tell

 

What we saw could have been very strong

What we saw would come all along

You never ever tried to hurt yourself

You won't even admit to this song

[emily !]

^ That was great, but I think we've all learnt to expect that from you now. =D

[{Alice Cullen}]

Lies! Lies! Lies!

 

When the truth hurts you

You can blame it on me

I've never been a liar

And your lies they'll never set you free

You'll be held prisoner

You'll hold the ball and chain

Forever carrying the weight

Forever holding the pain

There's only one key to free yourself

That's tell the truth

And you won't be the same

 

So, Is that how they all see you

What did you do

 

They see you so low

Another thing you wouldn't know

What are you gonna do

To redeem yourself

From everything you never knew

 

Could it be you always judged yourself

Trying to disguise everything about yourself

You tried to hide things that weren't well

The truth is here in front of you

And there's no more lies that you could tell

 

What we saw could have been very strong

What we saw would come all along

You never ever tried to hurt yourself

You won't even admit to this song

awesome, i love it <33

 

2 new ones from me:

Places

 

 

I think I'm starting to find a place

A place where I belong

But I'm still afraid that it will go all wrong

What if it's all in my head

And nothing is right and things are the same?

What if it's just some kind of game life is playing with me?

I guess I will just have to wait and see.

In time the truth will tell.

 

The Fear

 

Fear is my enemy

What are you afraid of they ask?

I'm afraid of going back to my old life

I'm afraid of losing control of my body

The feeling of helplessness that comes along with it

The flailing, unconsciousness

Missing days of my life

Not knowing what happened to me

I don't want to go back

I can't; not now, not ever

I will deal with this fear forever

 

not my best but yeah..

[777]

awesome, i love it <33

 

2 new ones from me:

Places

 

 

I think I'm starting to find a place

A place where I belong

But I'm still afraid that it will go all wrong

What if it's all in my head

And nothing is right and things are the same?

What if it's just some kind of game life is playing with me?

I guess I will just have to wait and see.

In time the truth will tell.

 

The Fear

 

Fear is my enemy

What are you afraid of they ask?

I'm afraid of going back to my old life

I'm afraid of losing control of my body

The feeling of helplessness that comes along with it

The flailing, unconsciousness

Missing days of my life

Not knowing what happened to me

I don't want to go back

I can't; not now, not ever

I will deal with this fear forever

 

not my best but yeah..

 

I really like the first one. Places is great.

 

Not saying your second one isn't great, Just saying the first one stands out to me more. Jen you're AWWWWESOME.

 

^ That was great, but I think we've all learnt to expect that from you now. =D

 

Emily, You're the best. Thanks.

 

 

 

Edit: just because I feel like an attention whore I'd edit a post instead of make a new one.

 

 

 

Fighting Freedom

 

Are we fighting freedom?

As we think everything's right

Why are they bad

Everyone else can change

But why aren't we glad

I think we're a little used to this

 

Anytime anywhere you'll get mad

They're standing in your sight

And you wanna fight

Well I guess we all won't fade

Quietly into the night

 

Are we fighting freedom

Acting like little kids

Why am I sad

When his face is in my arms range

 

 

When will we see

They're as ugly as you and me

We think we're on gods side so much

But don't you know

And what is bad all must go

It feels like everything that happens

Is him playing tricks

It might not be like that to him

But my conscience is dim

 

Yes we're fighting freedom

I wonder what will be next

We're making a mess

I wonder what we could use

For our united power to test

We're fighting freedoms

[FrankiePoo]

That Girl

Who was that girl?

The one who was walking alone, with the broken look in her eyes?

The one with no friends

No happiness?

She seems so miserable

Her eyes open wide

Looking at the different people

Those people

They make fun of her

They laugh and stare

They point and talk

Why do they do such horrid things?

Because she is different

Then there’s the boy

Her boyfriend

Could you call him a boyfriend?

They never hang out

Just chat on myspace

Sure, they look and wave

Bun no verbal contact whatsoever

Then there is her crush

The one who ignores her

The one who left with no word after

That guy who used to hang out with her constantly

Where did that go?

Where did her whole life go?

Down the drain, with everything else

Everything she touches turns to shit

But strangely enough

That girl

Who is standing all alone

Is me

 

Just something

[Jorgi]

can i just say guys, i remember when this thread was so dead. and now there's amazing stuff being written in it near enough every day. makes me so proud :')

 

i've now been outclassed a million times over in this thread, but i'm going to write anyway so deal with it ayeee ;D so yeah,

 

ummmmm. something something something.

 

if i lose you, along with the rest

i swear i was going to give you a second chance,

i swear i never meant, i never meant the,

i never meant the last dance ? last chance.

 

well we don't just fit in,

i'll forget myself right on time,

but i swear i never meant to forget you

and i was going to give, going to give,

give myself and yourself and ourselves

the best chance.

 

so easily i lost it all,

well we could have guessed

the minute, the minute we fell

i'm a liar and a fool

so easily we lost it all

and i would never, and i,

and i would have never guessed.

 

paint every town the same,

bright reds and broken golds

and with stories we told

and glances, second looks, and glances

over our shoulders

we've never felt so old.

we've never, never felt so lost.

 

so if i lose you, i'll lose it all

second chance, second chance,

were always my, were always my plan b,

were always my last chance,

and i swear i meant it all.

[Wildman]

^ Another by the master, bravo!

[777]

Fake

 

I'm as ugly as you thought I was

It's no big deal I thought we were friends

The things you do to try to

Make thing bend

Now that's a bitch for you to do

Hey, You idiot

There nothing new in what you do

 

Cause everything here

Only can resemble fear

But I can see and it's

Only me

Can't you leave me be

 

Funny how love, Can let you see everything

Funny how hate can blind you from everything

 

All it is, Is hate being thrown back

At one another

All it is, Is you trying to show everyone

That you could be my brother

[FrankiePoo]

Wow, chris

That's amazing <3

[roxchick93]

^

Wow

That's Good Ernest

 

Untitled

Nothing Here

Nothing in this heart

Not Now

Not Ever

No Love

Nothing

Nothing for you to love in me

 

that reali good. i like it. short and simple. =]

[FrankiePoo]

^

Thanka<3

[Wildman]

You loved me

You ripped me

Tore apart everything that had become

I loved you

I brought you sorrow

Please, this is only a disgrace

I cant alone go near you

For all the wrong I have done

This will never be right, never

Forever filled with doubt I cannot go any further than I have already

God damn this emptiness

Because of you I will never be the same again

[emily !]

^ that's great!

i'm going to break the trend and post one of my longer 'songs'.

=S

 

Red Stains of Memories.

 

my evanescent dreams,

are climbing through the darkness,

running from one thousand lights.

dreams, blinded in the darkness.

 

i can see for miles now,

the rain has washed way your tears.

bellowing thoughts just like the thunder,

your soul's been sleeping all these years.

 

drowning in your liquid flames,

losing sight of who you were,

becoming something,

coming closer, to

becoming what we became.

 

i'm losing sight now,

the mirror's cracked,

the sunset's faded in the dusk.

A broken cliche,

exhausting seven years of luck.

 

 

the valley,

of our universe,

is drowing in your,

drowing in your liquid flames.

a beuatiful excuse for honesty.

A broken bottle,

lipstick stains on memories.

 

a blood red blanket,

too deep to save you from undone.

following footsteps of the careless.

this is all that we've become.

becoming something,

coming closer to,

becoming what we became.

 

this disaste's happening,

three miles away

from where we stand.

This disasters lacking,

what was a blood red stain.

[Jorgi]

Fake

 

I'm as ugly as you thought I was

It's no big deal I thought we were friends

The things you do to try to

Make thing bend

Now that's a bitch for you to do

Hey, You idiot

There nothing new in what you do

 

Cause everything here

Only can resemble fear

But I can see and it's

Only me

Can't you leave me be

 

Funny how love, Can let you see everything

Funny how hate can blind you from everything

 

All it is, Is hate being thrown back

At one another

All it is, Is you trying to show everyone

That you could be my brother

 

BOOM.

that's the stuff. right there.

[Linney]

everyone in this thread have major skills. just saying.

 

________

 

Learn

 

you scatter your thoughts

and give them away

piece by piece

you leave your heart unprotected

 

what can i say

you gave it away

it all

it all

you gave him your all

 

he speak with soft words

that he knows will trick you

you don't see it

he's destroying your heart

 

what can i say

he tricked you to stay

pain

pain

he ensured you pain

 

got to learn to scream

got to fight for real

until you're safe

 

got to shut down

got to come down

to this world we live in

to the place you're dreading

 

i have to wake you up

got to get you out

cause you are paralyzed

underneath his fake loving hand

 

and what can i say

i said don't you stay

i saw

i saw

his anger i saw

 

you are wishing for sunshine

when he's wishing for rain

you're just like that first time

but he's not the same

 

he'll only bring you pain

when you're stuck crying in the rain

[Jorgi]

everyone in this thread have major skills. just saying.

 

true facts. including you, love that^

 

 

 

this night, this fight

these lights-

are they burning your eyes ?

i'll burn your goodbyes,

i'll burn your goodbyes

it begins tonight.

 

(so here is where it all goes wrong,

here is where we both go wrong)

 

information, devastation,

old news and disapointment-

face away to where you came from

time for a new direction

it's time for a new direction

i depend on you.

 

(well it makes no sense at all

we fight, defend and we fall)

 

you are my reason

the night is mine to take,

the night is mine, stay awake,

stay awake you are my reason,

stay awake.

[Ace]

Dear Misery. :

 

((I wrote this to vent bad feelings in the 7th grade. It's kinda random but I did feel bad...))

 

This is the first step and the first chapter.

This is the final half, the final hour.

i just wanna quit!

I'm sick and tired of it!

Why do people think they're better, when people are more obvious than feathers on birds that are worthless to us?!

God loves everyone and so do I, but I can't take much anymore!

I gave up everything I worked to hard to get,

just because of their foolish behavior and ignorance.

I quit more and more , til the fact that I realize that I love something so much more than I wish for something to happen to them!

And there is only one thing to do to fill the empty hole in they're heart is to brake other people's hearts and make them hurt, just so the ones I love can feel brave and happy, when others are living in MISERY!

[FrankiePoo]

^

Thats good Breanna

I like it

 

A chapter for my story, Academy of Delinquents

 

I didn’t want to go to The Pencey Academy. Not only was it a boarding school, but it was the worst boarding school in the nation. There were juveniles, future prostitutes, and others that were unbelievable. It all started out with a letter.

 

Dear Alex Botteicher,

We are proud to inform you that you have been accepted to The Pencey Academy in Belleville, New Jersey. We will provide all expenses for traveling and uniforms (Girls: Plaid skirt, knee high socks/ tights, sensible shoes, white button down shirts. Boys: White button down shirt, black slacks, loafers.). If you have any questions please contact Principle Warlock at 896-786-7486.

 

 

The Pencey Academy

 

The shortest, most worst letter I ever received.

Now I was at the airport, waiting for the bus to take me from North Dakota to Jersey. At least I looked hot in my mini plaid skirt, my favorite black and red srtiped socks, black flats, and a tank top with buttons and my platinum blonde hair (with a pink streak, oh yeah). They needed to be more specific about this dress code thing, because with me, I was going to turn into something hot and sexy. I mean, I wasn’t a slut, but I couldn’t help being stared at by guys and girls alike. It wasn’t my fault my boobs were huge and attracted a lot of attention.

But anyway, other than my appearance, I boarded the plain, getting some wolf whistles here and there (Did I mention my skirt was really really short? Yeah) and flew off to a criminal paradise

*-*-**After The Plane Ride*-*-*

Belleville was dirtier than it sounded. It was run down, had no money for economical stuff, and everyone there looked like they would rape and murder you in the blink of an eye.

The school was worse, though. Bits of the walls were missing, and where there was wall, it mass covered in moss (or mold?). All the kids there were strange also. I walked through a group of guys that were talking about butt flexing, and they stopped when they saw me. That’s what everyone did, actually; even a few teachers. It amused me, because not nearly this many people paid attention to me.

In my thoughts, I accidentally ran into a guy, making me topple over, making my skirt lift over my stomach, revealing my laced underwear. Many guys whistled, others laughed.

Red faced out of embarrassment, I shoved down my skirt and stood up. On the ground there was a guy about my age wearing a leather jacket and some tight black pants. His hair was black, long, and shaggy, and looked a bit greasy. His face was beautiful, perfect even. His eyes were a deep hazel, his cheekbones low, his teeth, white. Perfect.

He stood up, also red faced.

“Sorry about that. Wasn’t paying attention,” he mumbled, “Got to go find my dorm, bye.”

And he left. Just like that. Not even one look at me.

But I got a good look of him, and boy, did I want him.

[FrankiePoo]

Double post

D:

damned computer

[Linney]

true facts. including you, love that^

 

 

 

this night, this fight

these lights-

are they burning your eyes ?

i'll burn your goodbyes,

i'll burn your goodbyes

it begins tonight.

 

(so here is where it all goes wrong,

here is where we both go wrong)

 

information, devastation,

old news and disapointment-

face away to where you came from

time for a new direction

it's time for a new direction

i depend on you.

 

(well it makes no sense at all

we fight, defend and we fall)

 

you are my reason

the night is mine to take,

the night is mine, stay awake,

stay awake you are my reason,

stay awake.

 

haha, thanks btw, that was amazing!

 

 

and Alannah, that was really good! Is there a continuing? *wanna read it*

[STOPthissong!]

Crap, I haven't posted here in a while.

Well here's something short I just did.....

 

It's all building up

 

 

I choke on my words

they're piled up one by one.

But I swallow them down and speak what I don't feel.

I don't think you realise what is real.

But in a way, neither do I.

 

I don't want what you think I want

'you're a good friend' over and over again.

To you, it makes complete sense

but it's just a jumble of letters to me.