The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[FrankiePoo]

Thanks

[holleh]

I'll Always Lose

 

Another priceless sad face

Coming in my place

So if I'll ever need some sympathy

I won't get it this time from me

 

Well this home

It can always be a game to me

But it seems I'm always losing

But the home isn't even fighting you see

 

You know I'll lose

And I also know I'll lose

So I'll have a drink

And other things to abuse

I know I'll lose

I always lose

 

If you want to come back

Don't ask permission from me

I will never be mean to me

It's not about you

It's about me you see

 

I know I'll lose

Like I always lose

As long as I never mix in

Any pride

I won't care much if I lose

Like I always lose

 

Come on and have your share

Go on and take more

It's not like I care

Theres always the long run to run for

So again this time you don't

Owe it to me to be fair

I'll just find another thing to use

So I don't feel so bad when I lose

Like I always lose

 

This is really good...

 

I wish I could write well.

[{Alice Cullen}]

This is really good...

 

I wish I could write well.

i'm sure you can. Just write what you feel, just think and write. It doesn't have to rhyme, just write. Trust me, it helps too when you write. Try it, just have fun with it

I'm not good but i write still..lol

[Linney]

Jen, you are amazing when I read your poems I always sing some melody to your texts

[{Alice Cullen}]

Jen, you are amazing when I read your poems I always sing some melody to your texts

aww thank you

i just write whatever comes into my mind *shrug*

[Jorgi]

inspire, explain

stay away; complain

i'm amazed.

and you stand with your back to the sun

(ready to run)

i stayed, dismayed;

disobeyed;

amazed.

 

streetlamps kept your corner company,

quick, jump in, jump out

smile, eyes down

pose weary, nearing the end

dignity left with all of your friends

 

and i stood, i couldn't leave

couldn't comprehend; disbelief

i said, don't expect too much

expectations are for those with luck

(you and i both know

that left long ago)

 

explain; inspire

sit down; admire

i'm amazed, i'm dismayed,

i'm destroyed; saved

i'm amazed.

[{Alice Cullen}]

inspire, explain

stay away; complain

i'm amazed.

and you stand with your back to the sun

(ready to run)

i stayed, dismayed;

disobeyed;

amazed.

 

streetlamps kept your corner company,

quick, jump in, jump out

smile, eyes down

pose weary, nearing the end

dignity left with all of your friends

 

and i stood, i couldn't leave

couldn't comprehend; disbelief

i said, don't expect too much

expectations are for those with luck

(you and i both know

that left long ago)

 

explain; inspire

sit down; admire

i'm amazed, i'm dismayed,

i'm destroyed; saved

i'm amazed.

i LOVE it <3

[holleh]

i'm sure you can. Just write what you feel, just think and write. It doesn't have to rhyme, just write. Trust me, it helps too when you write. Try it, just have fun with it

I'm not good but i write still..lol

 

I always think all my stuff comes out really cheesy and like, teenage cliché-ish.

 

I think I'll post a bit more of it when I find something I really like haha.

[Wildman]

I was attempting to write with similes here, but I fail!

 

"You Can Change Your Mind, But You Can't Change Your Heart... Unless You Get A Heart Transplant"

 

What I do, isn't that easy

And what you do, seems so hard

Lost alone, in the shadows

You we're found, In the light

Killing me with the words I hear from you

Reviving me from the voice I hear you speak

 

[chorus]

You're so perfect

And I'm so far from you

Can I feel the one I need?

The only words from yesterday, is to say

(I love you), (I want you), (I'd kill for you)

 

These words are crystal clear and I cant hear them

Shouting out to me with these words I can't decode

But I'm still here, But I'm still here

These voices in my head, lack the sound of yours

And though I try, it can't suffice the feeling of what I've done

Although my heart can hear you, I still say

 

[chorus]

[repeat first verse]

[chorus again]

 

My facade is not enough

But what I see, seems so real

I need to disappear and leave you alone

Light the lantern and go back home in the dark

And piss away all I've tried to become

And never, never try to say

 

[chorus]

 

Also once again with my weird, long, song titles...

[holleh]

I was attempting to write with similes here, but I fail!

 

"You Can Change Your Mind, But You Can't Change Your Heart... Unless You Get A Heart Transplant"

 

What I do, isn't that easy

And what you do, seems so hard

Lost alone, in the shadows

You we're found, In the light

Killing me with the words I hear from you

Reviving me from the voice I hear you speak

 

[chorus]

You're so perfect

And I'm so far from you

Can I feel the one I need?

The only words from yesterday, is to say

(I love you), (I want you), (I'd kill for you)

 

These words are crystal clear and I cant hear them

Shouting out to me with these words I can't decode

But I'm still here, But I'm still here

These voices in my head, lack the sound of yours

And though I try, it can't suffice the feeling of what I've done

Although my heart can hear you, I still say

 

[chorus]

[repeat first verse]

[chorus again]

 

My facade is not enough

But what I see, seems so real

I need to disappear and leave you alone

Light the lantern and go back home in the dark

And piss away all I've tried to become

And never, never try to say

 

[chorus]

 

Also once again with my weird, long, song titles...

 

Love, love love LOVE it <3

Especially the chorus. It kinda reminds me of a situation I'm in right now... Hehe

[Wildman]

Love, love love LOVE it <3

Especially the chorus. It kinda reminds me of a situation I'm in right now... Hehe

 

Thank you! It's probably the best thing I've written in months!

[777]

ohhh you guys are so inspiring! Sooo soo excited now!

 

I'll make one soon.

 

 

 

Edit:

 

Here we go, Off the top of my head.

 

 

Grown

 

Who is it to say

My heart has gone away?

Maybe I'll love anyone again

Had they not laughed at my name

Well I guess someones gotta do it

To be the opposite of envy

My whole life and all of my friends

Saw my immature end

But I'll always be friendly

Only because I enjoy everything

That comes my way, But not for me

 

When I told you

You were gone now

You only fed your fame

And when I told you

You were gorgeous

You let your pride smile

Because you played your game

 

Am I the victim, Had I let you

Convince me I am weaker?

Am I the bad guy

Letting you twist my soul

To break anything I know?

Are you the hero

Sent down from above

Am I the loser who lost everything

But love?

[Jorgi]

i LOVE it <3

 

thankyou (: (:

 

Are you the hero

Sent down from above

Am I the loser who lost everything

But love?

 

right there. thaaat's the stuff.

[Vicki]

another new poem:

The Fight

 

Becoming i fear, unknown to many

I struggle with myself

The feelings i try to hide

Are all but unclear to me

I want a resolution

I want an definite solution

To feel harmony in this world

To not be fighting day to day

In a world that just seems to be gray

 

© JM 2008

 

new one (just wrote)

The Abyss

 

Sometimes it all seems clear

But then it all disappears

Left to wander lost

I struggle with the loss

I think i know who i am

And then i'm gone again

Running through the abyss

Just like a hit and miss

Can you find the lost one?

Will you bring me back to me?

 

© JM 2008

wow, i love it Jen! =D and + for your rpattz sig and ava xD

inspire, explain

stay away; complain

i'm amazed.

and you stand with your back to the sun

(ready to run)

i stayed, dismayed;

disobeyed;

amazed.

 

streetlamps kept your corner company,

quick, jump in, jump out

smile, eyes down

pose weary, nearing the end

dignity left with all of your friends

 

and i stood, i couldn't leave

couldn't comprehend; disbelief

i said, don't expect too much

expectations are for those with luck

(you and i both know

that left long ago)

 

explain; inspire

sit down; admire

i'm amazed, i'm dismayed,

i'm destroyed; saved

i'm amazed.

 

Amazing.

[{Alice Cullen}]

wow, i love it Jen! =D and + for your rpattz sig and ava xD

thanks <3

 

and wow, we have some seriously talented amazing writers on this board! :mrgreen:

keep up the great work everybody <3

[Linney]

Chris, that was AMAZING love it!

 

________

 

aaand, I wrote something this morning..

 

 

A bullet for you

 

he filled a bucket with water

and stuck your head in it

the air vanishing

the water demolishing

 

watch me breathe

watch me breathe

for I'm taking breaths for you

 

When he's destroying you

I'll be saving you

Even if we're a hundred miles apart

I'll save you

I'll save you

I'll take a bullet for you

 

he stained your life with disaster

your tears were born with his rage

lost under the surface

I'll pull you up

 

see me fly

see me fly

I'm taking you with me this time

 

When he's destroying you

I'll be saving you

Even if we're a hundred miles apart

I'll save you

I'll save you

I'll take a bullet for you

[Jorgi]

^love that.

 

 

 

go home and i'll put some music on

up loud, turned right up loud

to make it sound like someone's home

and pour yourself a drink

i'll pour myself a drink

 

they say reinvention starts here

and intervention is unnecessary

but fear is necessary and i'm right here

 

your heart is full of liquor

but i'm no better

ice cubes in your glass is all i'm good for

you're all i'm good for

 

well i'll toast this champagne for you

if you devote your pain to me

and i'll toast a success

and leave your mind in a mess

along with your bed

but you asked for this

 

well the king came on over

and tripped over your frown

and smashed his crown

so stay down, son, stay down.

[Vicki]

Chris, that was AMAZING love it!

 

________

 

aaand, I wrote something this morning..

 

 

A bullet for you

 

he filled a bucket with water

and stuck your head in it

the air vanishing

the water demolishing

 

watch me breathe

watch me breathe

for I'm taking breaths for you

 

When he's destroying you

I'll be saving you

Even if we're a hundred miles apart

I'll save you

I'll save you

I'll take a bullet for you

 

he stained your life with disaster

your tears were born with his rage

lost under the surface

I'll pull you up

 

see me fly

see me fly

I'm taking you with me this time

 

When he's destroying you

I'll be saving you

Even if we're a hundred miles apart

I'll save you

I'll save you

I'll take a bullet for you

 

^^ linney , how can you write like that? *jealous* it's amazinggg.

[Wildman]

I wrote this when my best friend broke up with his girlfriend

 

"The TV Isn't Working Because You Didn't Plug It In"

 

Did you think that I was gonna cry to you?

Did you think that I was going to fall apart?

Not now, Not never

Forget it

This is my time to show

Let me know what I can do

I’m not that broken inside

 

[chorus]

Tell me if you’re sorry

But please don’t waste my time

Still lost, yet sorrow still runs through my veins

Is this what I had waited for?

I don’t think so

 

I never waited for anything like this

This is what I hoped

But I doubt it would last forever

Missing you, still enthralled with hate

Cant cover up this drowned back decision

Cover up this pain in my lie

I’m not that broken inside

 

[chorus]

 

This moment I’m waiting for

Probably won’t be as I hope

You are what I’ve strived for

Hold me back with feelings I cannot cope

As we hold untrue

Let this be the last time

When all I wanted was you

Count me in too

And never forget this past

I am not that broken inside

[my.heart.]

my arms are slipping

while others are reaching for

something contagious

infectious and hopeless

you heard that wrong

we need somebody,

your body is keeping me whole

 

and if somehow,

we don't find our way to you

at least you tried

now i'm ready

so just let the worst begin

or show our end.

 

there's no day like today

to make it clear

that somebody

cares if we live or die

inside these walls

oh, i need somebody

your body is fighting my way

 

 

and if somehow,

we don't find our way to you

at least you tried

now i'm ready

so just let the worst begin

or show our end,

 

the end of what i know

the start of what i never should have known.

 

******

 

this will be improved on and eventually set to music i hope.

[Wildman]

^ Yeah set it to some music and record it! I'd love to hear it! It's really good!

[Jorgi]

my arms are slipping

while others are reaching for

something contagious

infectious and hopeless

you heard that wrong

we need somebody,

your body is keeping me whole

 

and if somehow,

we don't find our way to you

at least you tried

now i'm ready

so just let the worst begin

or show our end.

 

there's no day like today

to make it clear

that somebody

cares if we live or die

inside these walls

oh, i need somebody

your body is fighting my way

 

 

and if somehow,

we don't find our way to you

at least you tried

now i'm ready

so just let the worst begin

or show our end,

 

the end of what i know

the start of what i never should have known.

 

******

 

this will be improved on and eventually set to music i hope.

 

oh, yes please

[closesttoheaven]

prepare for some ultimate crapness!

 

so what's going on?

we haven't walked on the beach forever

it's been so long

i think i'm going crazy

or is it just you who’s driving me insane

 

i made a promise

a promise that i wouldn't fade away

this is not a broken promise

cause you're the one who’s fading

 

i cried for your name

you still haven't come

now i'm drowning so deep, i can't breathe at all

will you come back

and say what you meant

just like you did before

 

my ships are sinking in the deep icy ocean

will you come and save me?

no, not this time

cause i noticed

you're too busy saving the survivors on yours

 

i cried for your name

you still haven't come

now i'm drowning so deep, i can't breathe at all

will you come back

and say what you meant

just like you did before

 

i think i know now

no one will save me

would you be no one?

i think i know now

no one will save me

will you be no one?

i think i know now

no one will save me

are you no one?

 

you've called your group of saviors

but you haven't called me

cause i'm not part of those who survived

you won't save me now

you can't save me now

 

cause now i''ve drowned so deep, i can't breathe no air at all

you won't come back

and say what you meant

it's not like before

 

can you guys honestly tell me what you think?

[emily !]

^ i honestly think i was really good! well done [:

[Jorgi]

tum te tum

 

the thieves owe you

the things that they borrowed

and the truth owes you

the lies that they told

 

but didn't i say ?

well didn't i say i loved you

 

well yesterday owers you

the promises of tomorrow

and happiness owes you

the disappointment of sorrow

 

but didn't i say ?

but didn't i say i loved you

 

'cause loves owes me

the relief of hate

and time owes me

one second too late

 

but didn't i say ?

didn't i say i loved you.