deanfunk Posted June 30, 2007 Report Share Posted June 30, 2007 MORE MORE MORE!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted July 3, 2007 Report Share Posted July 3, 2007 "Life Sucks" is there anybody out there that can help me. i know you wouldnt dare or care but id like to share my feelings. why cant i just have one peaceful day? a day that would blow my mind of happiness and disbelief, a day so sweet that id just have to stop and take it all in and lay on the grass and watch the clouds go by and take a deep sigh of releif. why cant i have that? why cant everyone have that? i know that life has its perks... but i havent seen any of thoes yet. all ive seen are liars and jerks, and people that want to threat me and scare me and sometimes i cant be strong. yes, i gotta "move along", but sometimes i just gotta take all this shit in. let it out in my pillow and just scream till the end. i pray. i pray EVERY day just to have that one day. maybe all this worrying is worthess and my day is on its way. right around the bend... but i want to feel it in the palm of my hand. i want to FEEL that happiness... i want to FEEL the disbeleif of all the peace happening... because i LOVE that feeling. and im trying to LOVE life but as of now life sucks. yeah sure thats a bit straight forward but can you name at leats ONE person that doesnt agree? were all in prison and we just wanna be free. life has its moments... the monents where you feel releaved and relaxed, yes. but i want that day... that ONE day. and WHOLE day. thats ALL that i want... and i have NOTHING left to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted July 3, 2007 Report Share Posted July 3, 2007 Aaahhh Susan that's awesome! :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted July 3, 2007 Report Share Posted July 3, 2007 "Life Sucks" is there anybody out there that can help me. i know you wouldnt dare or care but id like to share my feelings. why cant i just have one peaceful day? a day that would blow my mind of happiness and disbelief, a day so sweet that id just have to stop and take it all in and lay on the grass and watch the clouds go by and take a deep sigh of releif. why cant i have that? why cant everyone have that? i know that life has its perks... but i havent seen any of thoes yet. all ive seen are liars and jerks, and people that want to threat me and scare me and sometimes i cant be strong. yes, i gotta "move along", but sometimes i just gotta take all this shit in. let it out in my pillow and just scream till the end. i pray. i pray EVERY day just to have that one day. maybe all this worrying is worthess and my day is on its way. right around the bend... but i want to feel it in the palm of my hand. i want to FEEL that happiness... i want to FEEL the disbeleif of all the peace happening... because i LOVE that feeling. and im trying to LOVE life but as of now life sucks. yeah sure thats a bit straight forward but can you name at leats ONE person that doesnt agree? were all in prison and we just wanna be free. life has its moments... the monents where you feel releaved and relaxed, yes. but i want that day... that ONE day. and WHOLE day. thats ALL that i want... and i have NOTHING left to say. Quite like that Has nice catchy lines. However, dare i say it, the title is a liiiitttle too cliché for my taste or even the song's style. Use of the imagination ? You're clearly creative enough to think of a better one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted July 4, 2007 Report Share Posted July 4, 2007 thats true HAHA i wasnt even gunna title it, cuz i titled it after i qrote it. but like the 1st line that came to my head to actually make me WRITE that was "life sucks" haha that was all i could think of and i kept sayin to myslef Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 4, 2007 Report Share Posted July 4, 2007 Susan's awesome.. nuff said... lol!!! i lovelovelove it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephy Posted July 9, 2007 Report Share Posted July 9, 2007 I only write 'poetry' when I'm angry/sad.. at the time it makes sence but once I'm over it the poems no longer make sence to me... heh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted July 9, 2007 Report Share Posted July 9, 2007 Business Studies lecture for 2 and a half hours. Naturally i didn't pay much attention: / Cue the musiciansand pull the red curtain right back down 'Cause it's always raining on your halo Cut off the last line but don't forget to breathe Pull down your mask just to watch me leave (You know i'd stay if you say so) Your words would stop us believing so keep them in your head And stay with me as we watch the world fall apart To the sound of breaking hearts (i don't think there's much left to see) You said "forever" like i was a gift Guess it's time to give it back Remember what was written in that last love note "sentence to death; hanging by hope". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 I only write 'poetry' when I'm angry/sad.. at the time it makes sence but once I'm over it the poems no longer make sence to me... heh. yeah! i know, when im liek, happy or like. normal mooded i cant like write at all i tried but it came out corney and weird haah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 ah jorgi, that was awesome. i love the last 2 lines alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 Business Studies lecture for 2 and a half hours.Naturally i didn't pay much attention: / Cue the musiciansand pull the red curtain right back down 'Cause it's always raining on your halo Cut off the last line but don't forget to breathe Pull down your mask just to watch me leave (You know i'd stay if you say so) Your words would stop us believing so keep them in your head And stay with me as we watch the world fall apart To the sound of breaking hearts (i don't think there's much left to see) You said "forever" like i was a gift Guess it's time to give it back Remember what was written in that last love note "sentence to death; hanging by hope". i LOVE this!!! omg.. i smell TALENT! hahaha.. great job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 yeah! i know, when im liek, happy or like. normal mooded i cant like write at all i tried but it came out corney and weird haah That's how I am most of the time. When I'm happy, I can write this angsty stuff for some reason. I'm not an angsty girl so that's weird, haha. But when I'm depressed or angry or something, poof. That type of poetry appears, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 Business Studies lecture for 2 and a half hours.Naturally i didn't pay much attention: / Cue the musiciansand pull the red curtain right back down 'Cause it's always raining on your halo Cut off the last line but don't forget to breathe Pull down your mask just to watch me leave (You know i'd stay if you say so) Your words would stop us believing so keep them in your head And stay with me as we watch the world fall apart To the sound of breaking hearts (i don't think there's much left to see) You said "forever" like i was a gift Guess it's time to give it back Remember what was written in that last love note "sentence to death; hanging by hope". that is awesome. like wow. o.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 that is awesome.like wow. o.0 Oh wow. I agree. O.O Such a great poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted July 10, 2007 Report Share Posted July 10, 2007 oh. jee that made my heart smile a little bit ;D haha thanks you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 this one really sucks but i know i said i'd post this one... "A Song For Jack and Sally" this song is for jack and sally, standing above the king's valley. why can't we be like that? what will it take to be like that? i wanna be like them, they're standing on their death beds they'll die together, with each other forever.. so let demons come and take me away i won't let them touch you for i vow today that i'd give my life just for you and i'll die only for you... i'm waiting in the forest just for you, thinkin how i'll plead to you... that i'd do anything, just to save your life i'll run, i'll hide, i'll cry, i'll fight just for you tonight... standing above the king's valley. let's be like jack and sally let's be like them what will it take to be like them? so let demons come and take me away i won't let them touch you for i vow today that i'd give my life just for you and i'll die only for you... let the skeletons come steal my breath let the ghost come and take the rest but i won't let them take you because i'd fight for you... i'd give my life just for you and i'll die only for you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 OH MY jana. i didn't know you were a wrote/compose!! you're excellent...i guess i'm just a bit slow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 ^yeahh, i write songs but not so much of the music parts.. hahaha.. my friends help me with the music part.. but i right tons of lyrics i've posted on here.. they're not the greatest but people seem to like them.. hehe.. thanks! but i don't think im excellent... hahaha.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 oooh. so are you in a band?? or you just do it for fun...ya know relieve stress and what not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 umm, i was in band.. until we kindah sortah broke up.. hhahaha.. we weren't seirous or anything... we'd just end up playing around or eating out when we were supposed to be practicing.. hahaha.. i might start another band though.. when school starts again. i'll be in band then and that way i can find a good drummer other then myself because i'm more of a guitar kind of girl.. hahaha.. i do use my writing to relieve stress and anger and just for fun atm.. until i get my band going then i'll be writing for real again.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 yay for jana & co. well not yay for that you broke up but for maybe getting into a new group! I would like to learn how to play guitar and drums wait and piano...i'm just kinda fail at instrument stuff. i've tried...i can't even get HOLDING a guitar right let alone play it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 thanks tee! and YAY for tee being such and awesome friend!! hehehe.. well, maybe since you can't play instruments maybe you can write lyrics? like me! hahaha.. it's quite fun and it helps u relieve stress and anger!!! you should try it tee! i bet you'd be great at it!!! and don't worry you have soo much time to learn how to play and instrument.. it takes time.. and it's fun too!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 oh i've taken a few shots at lyric/poem writing. i'm terrible:oops: afterwards i don't even want to read them. they're way too cliche and just plain bleh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 let the skeletons come steal my breath let the ghost come and take the rest but i won't let them take you because i'd fight for you... i'd give my life just for you and i'll die only for you... it doesn't suck!! i love it!! especially that part! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 oh i've taken a few shots at lyric/poem writing. i'm terrible:oops: afterwards i don't even want to read them. they're way too cliche and just plain bleh. awww tee! i bet you're a wonderful writter!!! most writters think their own work isn't great when it actually is... i think you just need the right "time" the write a great poem/song.. like whenever i'm mad or sad, that always boosts my creativity sparks!!! maybe you should try it the next time you need to vent.. works for me!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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