MeLoN Posted April 14, 2006 Report Share Posted April 14, 2006 Words These scars will never leave my heart But they have left my arms So you don’t have to worry Life will be alright Ill make sure I look pretty Dying by your side And when I go Ill tell them what they want to hear Everything’s my fault, every single tear Are you all ok now knowing Ill take your lies And you will never have to answer any of my cries It’ll be silent by the bridge I used to try&cross Every time I tried it'd turn into a game I always, always lost That sparkle in your eyes told me more than you ever did Your pain and all the secrets the story that'd never fit They say the sound hurts their ears It hurts like you hurt me dear When you stabbed me right through my back &said my heart wasn’t worth the knife When I dared you not to pretend You ran and said I wasn’t worth your time But I still carry the broken life you offered me Trying so hard to believe you never wanted me We seemed real back then &Id live because I can I can Here I am, all alone, in the middle of the night Its dark outside but bright inside I don’t need you anymore, all those words All those words are yours and sound so wrong All those words are meant to be a twisted song All these words,, they’re meant to be mine One by one you'll see them smile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 15, 2006 Report Share Posted April 15, 2006 Thank You (Mom and Dad) Half of my life is yours Half is of your Love Both of you stand behind me When the world gives a shove The world tries to push me back You help guide me forwards Never knew what lit the way Now I know it was your words Your being’s in my body Your blood is in my heart In everything that I am now You both have played a part You gave me so much of yourselves More than I ever knew I don’t know if you hear me But mom and dad, thank you What I’ve learned of both of you Through stories or first hand I’ll keep inside my soul And be a better man If I don’t smile, don’t be sad Hope you’ll be pleased to know The happiness I’ve found in life Is more than I can show Your being’s in my body Your blood is in my heart In everything that I am now You both have played a part You gave me so much of yourselves More than I ever knew I don’t know if you hear me But mom and dad, thank you I never knew you like I could have Never asked when I should have I know you now I know you now I know you’re with me now Your being’s in my body Your blood is in my heart In everything that I am now You both have played a part You gave me so much of yourselves More than I ever knew I don’t know if you hear me But mom and dad, thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 19, 2006 Report Share Posted April 19, 2006 Two pretty cheesy things I had to get off of my mind. 1) Dont you know Behind your wall theres someone else Someone I dont know Behind those eyes I see myself And the side Ive never shown Someones clipped my wings But Im still flying Said all those stupid things And Im not dying *Im falling down but Im alive Failing again with a smile Cause whats the point in living if I cant be alive Im still me when I cry But why is it so hard for you to see This life isnt such a hell, its pretty easy I can hug you and feel you walk away I can see you smiling and know youre not ok Behind the silly girl theres a person they dont know But you always laugh it off and say its time to go. Youre always on the edge of saying goodbye Walking off, walking out with a smile But nothing here is real It is never how you feel * Pretty easy dont you know.. 2) Life is like that You wrote me a letter Filled with kind words About good and the better In all of its joy You smiled and showed me a note It said love for MCC Written by someone I want to know Meant for a person called me *This secret is the cause of my smile And everything around me I sort of like the way we hide And never share the story Not because we want to but because we cant Life is just a lie like that You saw me when I didnt see myself Staring in the mirror searching for life I saw you crawling out of your shell Finally understanding the language inside your mind Im teaching you to teach me how to smile Youre showing me exactly how to be alive We know we're lost but we'll be found I dont see us going down * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Run With Scissors Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 Beauty becomes the Beast She says her lips are paper thin, So they inject some collagen Now she’s got the perfect pout Always pushing her lips out But to me they look so fake. I think she’s made a big mistake She used to have the cutest smile But now her lips just stretch for miles, Chorus She’s so pretty, But she doesn’t believe me She’s so pretty, Still she changes everything, She wants to change her skin And everything within But she shouldn’t change a thing. Oh please don’t change a thing… Now she looks at her flat chest And she wants some bigger breasts Inflated from a B Straight to a double D But to me they look so fake, I think she’s made a big mistake I used to love her slender figure But to me she’s just disfigured Chorus Now even your own mother, Can’t pick out her only daughter Who’s that girl in the mirror? Do you even recognize her? Now she realises she’s a fake She knows she’s made a big mistake She breaks down in blackened tears From all of her mascara smears Chorus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guitar x Dude 7 Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 I still havent been able to come up with a title for this one yet. i wrote it a month or two ago, im still not totally happy with it. i want to re-write the first verse and part of the second. but the rest is pretty ok (at least i think so ) *Opens on a short chord progression using strummed octaves* Verse- Sometimes, the words we think are louder when we speak sometimes there all but silent sometimes there nothing more When will you see? where i want to be is not where im at right now Chorus- Your world's rosier at the bottom of your glass I need help to get through this cause, lord im sinkin fast Bridges are burning Ties are being cut Im fearing and screaming in words unspoken, Verse- I cant take the lies, or the sacreligion dont try to talk i refuse to listen Its a vicious cycle thats how its seeming this vicious cycle wont leave you breathing, (no-no-no) ---------- chorus ---------- Bridge- You always said, always said, *always said* <-------whispered I swear i'll try I swear i'll get better I swear i'll try i swear i'll get better Imagine what, we could weather you be the liar you always were and ill be the thorn in your side (no-no-no) no-no-no *Acoustic break* ----------- Chorus ----------- Alt. Chorus- bottom of your glass help me get through this lord, im sinking fast sink-ing fast im burning im cutting dry cut-ting dry everything i thought i wanted thought i wan-ted ----------- chorus ----------- *plays about half of the original melody and ends abrubtly* please be honest,my writing style has changed alot since i wrote this song, ill get some new stuff posted as soon as i finish some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire At Will Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 good stuff people = ) i like everything ive seen up here honestly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 ^ Yes i agree They are all really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 This whore/barbie pissed me off. Thats what this is about..haha! A liars call The world turns black as I hold my breath And try to close my eyes Lips keep moving they say I cant So why did I even try? Its like a bird flying high up in the sky Singing "Im up here and youre down there cause you cant fly" "Everyone be as jealous as you can,,Im free" Well I dont like it when people look down on me So you can walk your little world Go around and around But dont think you can fool us We'll take your pretty face down And show those little stalkers who you really are A messed up kind of 3rd world war I apologize: our stories simply dont fit Next thing you know Ill take your make up kit And throw it right back in your face Cause your mask is pretty but your heart when down the drain I feel sorry for you dear, youre acting all day long You try and you try but you still do it wrong You like to believe we want to be you But gosh are you wrong we're proud and uncool You're not worth my 3rd world war Or anything they say you are But with todays sense youll always be What the liar call "better than me" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 ^ Thats great. I hate those kinda people your talking about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 ^I dont hate them. I just find them pathetic little monsters =]. But wait..Thats kinda the same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 lol. its good mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 Your end I lost the key to reality Stuck in dark reverse Watching someone called me Falling down, getting hurt I see you slipping away But I cant lend a helping hand this time Locked behind bars Im watching you die *And its so hard to see you run off To a place I dont know Wondering what youre thinking of Cause your eyes wont show They closed down like the rest of them Dying just to get to the end Would you follow me if I couldnt follow you? Wander off without me if id tell you to? Even if your mind's blocked would you try to understand? All the small things buckled up inside my head? If everyone else thinks Im crazy would you think the same? If I walk this road would you go the other way? Are you scared of me because I am? Would you fly with me just because I can? * Do you know where Ill be when youre gone? I dont & Im scared ill end up wrong Do you put all your trust in this girl When she walks off without you into the real world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 I like it, Mel. Nice use of questions. Where Are You? Lost in a moment Stuck on a feeling Clinging to thoughts That don’t set my mind reeling Gripping a hand But it’s only my own Surrounded by myself Completely alone Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? At ease for a minute In fear for an hour Flipping the switch But getting no power Hearing a voice But it’s all in my head The living more silent Than even the dead Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? I’ve waited so long but you haven’t appeared And so I wait on alone and in fear But even if tonight brings relentless sorrow I’ll still be out here waiting for you tomorrow Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SingMeASong Posted April 26, 2006 Report Share Posted April 26, 2006 I like it' date=' Mel. Nice use of questions. [b']Where Are You?[/b] Lost in a moment Stuck on a feeling Clinging to thoughts That don’t set my mind reeling Gripping a hand But it’s only my own Surrounded by myself Completely alone Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? At ease for a minute In fear for an hour Flipping the switch But getting no power Hearing a voice But it’s all in my head The living more silent Than even the dead Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? I’ve waited so long but you haven’t appeared And so I wait on alone and in fear But even if tonight brings relentless sorrow I’ll still be out here waiting for you tomorrow Where are you? I’m waiting It’s dark and it’s cold The fire inside grows dim as it grows old Where are you? I’m dying Right where you can see Why aren’t you here Where you said you would be? I really really love that! It's completely awesome! Great job. ______ Here's mine,I know it really sucks,i'm sorry! TITLE: Answers left unsaid. NOTE: Please do not steal it! * * * * * _________ TITLE:Words Left Unsaid Verse one. actions speak louder then words Ignorance leave deep scars Even when i build up a wall it gets shattered in a second Did my question mean anything to you? My question unanswered is breaking the skin CHORUS Did you ever conside how it felt to lie in your bed in silence at night memories of you end on a sour note Did you even consider how much it hurt? VERSE TWO iv’e been waiting so long for you to appear footsteps getting closer I’m starting to crumble like stepped on roses my hope fades as your door closes CHORUS Did you ever conside how it felt to lie in your bed in silence at night memories of you end on a sour note Did you even consider how much it hurt? I need something to hold on to,can it be you? you’ve got me on the edge of a knife I can’t pretend this is real life My hands are slipping off this cliffhanger someone tells me this story isn’t over the avoided subject is collecting dust on the verge of breaking wake me up please don’t don’t keep me hoping for tomorrow I cannot live like this suffering in my bed Waiting for the answer that was left unsaid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted April 27, 2006 Report Share Posted April 27, 2006 ^ I really like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Down_Set_Go Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 The Dark. The Noise. Trains, Helecopters, Cars. Music, Heartless Laughs, Bells. Black, Flash, Black. Silence. Wait. Listen. The Whisper. Listen. Hear. Dance, Sing, Laugh Blissfully. The Mind Wanders Dangerously. The Dark. The Noise. Clear Your Head. Listen For It. Hear It. The Whisper. Calm. Dance, Sing, Laugh Blissfully. All Is Well Again. ----------> i dont really know how to explain this but yea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 ^^^ I like it a lot. Love sensory details... though I can never seem to write a piece with them. I don't like the people I know to know what/who I write about. I know exactly what he wants and that's all that he will take Should I surrender my heart if it should only break? Do anything to please him Make countless mistakes Soothing my yearning heart to deal with future aches Giving him what he desires To see him by my side Revitalize my comatose heart to watch it throb and die Feelings grow crazy and stronger soul defeats mind No longer rational I don't know why I try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Secrets end up secret in a secret way of wondering about twisted words Were having everyday conversations Of words you cant hear and I cant speak About an endless situation But you know what I mean I stare and wonder if youre staring too Cause your eyes blend in with mine I caught that sparkle and figured it was you Messing with my mind *Our secrets ending up secret Were on a road to unknown lane I wonder if you see it The path you chose to take I wonder why my minds still spinning Over twisted words I lived last week You and I is what keeps me running You and I is what keeps me on my feet I said goodbye on a temporary basis Then ended up with an old-fashioned hello I never thought my dreams would finish Until you walked out alone But your silent words kept shouting I forgave all of your mistakes And I just wish youd stop smiling So I can stop running away * Secret messages of lonely words Is it time for me to figure something out? Im hearing all the stuff you said And still dont know what youre about I wonder why you kept things quiet When you knew I knew all along All the things you wanted to tell me Before we ended up so wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 ^^^ I like it a lot. Love sensory details... though I can never seem to write a piece with them. I don't like the people I know to know what/who I write about. I know exactly what he wants and that's all that he will take Should I surrender my heart if it should only break? Do anything to please him Make countless mistakes Soothing my yearning heart to deal with future aches Giving him what he desires To see him by my side Revitalize my comatose heart to watch it throb and die Feelings grow crazy and stronger soul defeats mind No longer rational I don't know why I try This is pretty brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SingMeASong Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Secrets end up secret in a secret way of wondering about twisted words Were having everyday conversations Of words you cant hear and I cant speak About an endless situation But you know what I mean I stare and wonder if youre staring too Cause your eyes blend in with mine I caught that sparkle and figured it was you Messing with my mind *Our secrets ending up secret Were on a road to unknown lane I wonder if you see it The path you chose to take I wonder why my minds still spinning Over twisted words I lived last week You and I is what keeps me running You and I is what keeps me on my feet I said goodbye on a temporary basis Then ended up with an old-fashioned hello I never thought my dreams would finish Until you walked out alone But your silent words kept shouting I forgave all of your mistakes And I just wish youd stop smiling So I can stop running away * Secret messages of lonely words Is it time for me to figure something out? Im hearing all the stuff you said And still dont know what youre about I wonder why you kept things quiet When you knew I knew all along All the things you wanted to tell me Before we ended up so wrong. That's uhh pretty amazing,beautifully written.I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire At Will Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Secrets end up secret in a secret way of wondering about twisted words Were having everyday conversations Of words you cant hear and I cant speak About an endless situation But you know what I mean I stare and wonder if youre staring too Cause your eyes blend in with mine I caught that sparkle and figured it was you Messing with my mind *Our secrets ending up secret Were on a road to unknown lane I wonder if you see it The path you chose to take I wonder why my minds still spinning Over twisted words I lived last week You and I is what keeps me running You and I is what keeps me on my feet I said goodbye on a temporary basis Then ended up with an old-fashioned hello I never thought my dreams would finish Until you walked out alone But your silent words kept shouting I forgave all of your mistakes And I just wish youd stop smiling So I can stop running away * Secret messages of lonely words Is it time for me to figure something out? Im hearing all the stuff you said And still dont know what youre about I wonder why you kept things quiet When you knew I knew all along All the things you wanted to tell me Before we ended up so wrong. going with the long song titles now eh? l like it =) you're very talented mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Free write. And go. What happens when your passion Makes you as miserable As the things you used it to hide from? Where's the motivation? Where's the drive? The wonderful pretension That made you feel so special Like everything you put out was gold? What is this doubt? What is this frustration? This terrible self-defeat That makes you feel inadequate Like all you can put out is excrement? What happens when what used to make you happy Not only fails to do so But adds to your discontent? What happens when your passion Makes you as miserable As the things you used it to hide from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Uhh thanks everyone! And I love that Claudia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Here I go, Im gone I never meant to kill you But there you are laying on the floor I never meant to hurt you But there you are blood covered All I meant was I love you From the bottom of my heart Things never turn out like they should I managed to tear love apart *Dont look at me Im a liar Ill mess up your mind Dont touch me Im on fire Ill burn you down cause I Am just a simple failure One who'll make you fall apart But when I say these words I dont mean to break your heart I care about life but life never cares It always hits me, hits me right back Here I am trying to make myself better I dont know why though it doesnt matter They say Im good the way I am They say it just because they can But I know better I hurt you So now Ill hurt myself too * Bang bang here I go Im gone Crash crash my body hits the floor Silence silence what is next? Nothing nothing this is the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Run With Scissors Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Miss Scarlet, with the knife, in the Kitchen On goes that cleavage bearing red dress, The one that hugs onto every curve On go your diamonds and your pearls Douse yourself in expensive French perfume. Eyelashes are your secret weapon Accessorized with ruby red lips Used to hypnotize every man Before you send them their final kiss You’re dressed to thrill, but also dressed to kill Hook line and sinker, you lured me in How are you planning to kill me? Is it a rope in the conservatory? (Tie it tightly around my throat I watch you laugh as you watch me choke) How are you planning to kill me? Is it a revolver inside the study? (Gun pressed firmly against my head Pull the trigger and I’ll drop down dead) They say you’d get away with murder All you’d have to do is wink and smile And after months of careful scheming You’ve found the perfect way to end me. On this night you’re going to prove them right I’m standing there, blissfully unaware How are you planning to kill me? Is it a rope in the conservatory? (Tie it tightly around my throat I hear you laugh as you watch me choke) How are you planning to kill me? Is it a revolver inside the study? (Gun pressed firmly against my head Pull the trigger and I’ll drop down dead) You slip into the kitchen, Oh so quietly and grab a knife from the drawer That you left there for this moment As you sneak up on me, Oh so quietly you raise the knife up in the air And plunge it deep into my back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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