RenegadeRoss Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 That is magic Emily! Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 That is magic Emily! Well done! eeep! thankyouthankyouthankyou. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 I opened up my heart to you, I risked the pain you put me through, I've learned my lesson now, I knew i would somehow, i've lost all the faith i had in you I'll never understand why you did what you did My heart will never heal from the lies that you hid You put me through such pain It's driving me insane, but i know im better off alone My heart is feeling so bare , I know that you dont care, And i am going out of my mind, With this love i used to find, But i know that i'll get over you I'll never understand why you did what you did My heart will never heal from the lies that you hid You put me through such pain It's driving me insane, but i know im better off alone Why cant you see That your no good for me, Every one of your white lies, and all of your goodbyes, i dont wanna see your face again. I'll never understand why you did what you did My heart will never heal from the lies that you hid You put me through such pain It's driving me insane, but i know im better off alone Cause i know, i'm better off without you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Linney, You're about a big part of the reason why I come on here...If that makes sense... Meaning I like you're stuff and I always look forward to it. No need to feel left out, Quarter of the pie chart nawww =) You are soo kind!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Why cant you see That your no good for me, Every one of your white lies, and all of your goodbyes, i dont wanna see your face again. i LOVE that bit. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 aw thanks! im quite proud of it myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Ross, that is amazing =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankiePoo Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Beautiful I know I'm not beautiful Not like the other girls that surround you Then why do you love me, not them? They are perfect beyond beleif I'm not They could be models I could be dirt They have a sense of fashion I don't The only thing in common we have is loving you And out of all the models, the superstars, and the perfects you chose me Bleh...not my best work, but OK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the1 Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 blergh standard rhyming couplets get old quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Ross, that is amazing =D Thankyou! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Wrote a song just now =D Hiding Within can you see her ignorance when she's watching the tv words and pictures she can't handle too much of a heavy darkness don't judge her for not seeing just understand the guilt she is carrying growing up in a non caring world I understand why she has closed the door On the outside you can not see her feelings But inside her you can see that she's screaming How come that they build it up only to tear it down Nothing here is right will you be able to understand her obsession with hiding within her heart can't hold all the pain of this incomplete world she's creating an illusion of a perfect world she's hiding there even though she cares On the outside you can not see her feelings But inside her you can see that she's screaming How come that they build it up only to tear it down Nothing here is right like a wire her guilt is stretching painting a picture for your eye to see she can't reach the surface but who can really On the outside you can not see her feelings But inside her you can see that she's screaming How come that they build it up only to tear it down Nothing here is right 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 oh my god, that is awesome that is like how i am the now , described perfectly. wow... awesome, actually awesome! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 ^Thank you soo much Ross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Here is a poem I'm writing off the top of my head right now Pursuit of Denial In my lonesome ideal I sit all alone No one to hold Do I see what's real Can you be the one I need Is you that I see every now and then Haunting me Nothing, if I did nothing, is there enough pain to cover Solitude, you keep me alone in the dark Empty hearts, all alone with nobody there Give me a reason Show no prejudice Is this what you hold deeply inside me I know I did wrong But what I did wasn't much of a big deal Why the fuck did you put me in this pain This suffering Fuck you You didn't know the effect of what it had on me Why the hell am I apologising? What you said was far worse than you can imagine You put me to shame Don't hold back, kill me already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Beautiful I know I'm not beautiful Not like the other girls that surround you Then why do you love me, not them? They are perfect beyond beleif I'm not They could be models I could be dirt They have a sense of fashion I don't The only thing in common we have is loving you And out of all the models, the superstars, and the perfects you chose me Bleh...not my best work, but OK I liked it, It shows something that could make you vulnerable some how...Strange, I like it for that reason. Edit: Anyway.. Sorry Can't we just leave today Cause theres nothing more to say Please just cement my soul We weren't ourselves anyway And tomorrow Their eyes will open Not that they ever cared But maybe they'll change some more Inside Somewhere on their own Inside They'll be all alone So this is another piece Another place and another page This is something new And once again it's all for you You won't hate me so much After my life is gone and done You can let yourself be sad for me Because you can let other people see That even you can show some love That even you can't always hate That even you Loved me That even you Could see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 I liked it, It shows something that could make you vulnerable some how...Strange, I like it for that reason. Edit: Anyway.. Sorry Can't we just leave today Cause theres nothing more to say Please just cement my soul We weren't ourselves anyway And tomorrow Their eyes will open Not that they ever cared But maybe they'll change some more Inside Somewhere on their own Inside They'll be all alone So this is another piece Another place and another page This is something new And once again it's all for you You won't hate me so much After my life is gone and done You can let yourself be sad for me Because you can let other people see That even you can show some love That even you can't always hate That even you Loved me That even you Could see Wow amaaazing! (as usual) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 Sorry Can't we just leave today Cause theres nothing more to say Please just cement my soul We weren't ourselves anyway And tomorrow Their eyes will open Not that they ever cared But maybe they'll change some more Inside Somewhere on their own Inside They'll be all alone So this is another piece Another place and another page This is something new And once again it's all for you You won't hate me so much After my life is gone and done You can let yourself be sad for me Because you can let other people see That even you can show some love That even you can't always hate That even you Loved me That even you Could see Damn man, you're just too good! I wish I had your talent, I'm just an amateur! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 You're not! I like your lyrics. So I can pick any of yours to do for a song? Or could you choose for me? Sinister Aura. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the1 Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 The only thing I've written that actually might mean something. Not finished though/ Here goes: 5 weeks late and I'm back to day 1 Let this be a lesson in using makeshift wings to reach the sun You're a simple spectator to a race you couldn't run I do what I have to do if you promise to applaud on cue. It's over-hyped, over-scripted and over-rated, But most importantly- it's over. At least it's something to do Fake smiles and dead end talk choked off with strings, those are a few of our favourite things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 so there you sit, you smile "i'll be the end of you" -the end of me ? i'll fucking end you, don't worry, i'd never know how to but i'll stand back straight and watch and learn i loved you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 oh p.s. stoked on that james. just stoked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itsgettingcloser Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Heres a new song we wrote yesterday at band practice and recorded it on a camera mic for reference purposes, its still in the works so the ending just kinda falls apart while we work on figuring out how to end it. http://tindeck.com/audio/my/omhb/songv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the1 Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 oh p.s. stoked on that james. just stoked. Yours is pretty tragic/bad ass may I add. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 You're not! I like your lyrics. So I can pick any of yours to do for a song? Or could you choose for me? Sinister Aura. lol at the Sinister Aura (but it's actually Aurion). But what? You wanna play some of my songs? -------------------- Song I wrote yesterday in biology after my friend told me to write more happy songs... So I tried: "Hey Paulina, Don't Forget, I'm Not Sad" When I sleep I try to dream of the day The day where is was me and you And I feel If there is nothing to hold me back And I swear When I hold you in my arms I still remember [chorus] Just that time where I held you close Only this moment, this time Whisper our sweet love For we’re alone, fade away And when we’re together It reminds me of heaven Hold me in your arms And feel the love I feel for you Let this be right And feel alright inside [chorus] Open up in my arms Hold onto me For only this time Held on too soon All alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Words It seems this is what I need to do Trading feelings for words Is it crazy, I wonder To think I need see What lives down under I don't know who to ask So I'll always just ask myself I'll never know the answer Not even my love and I know I'll never ask her Why should I let her see All the confusion and the mess Am I being selfish Or am I trying to be the best Just for her to see I wished and I said That if maybe I was dead "Would everything else be together" Thats the question Forever left in my head But no,You can't answer Because even you have no right You showed me your history of lies And it's my rightful reason you always fight When will you grow You and her both No one said they'd be stopping you Stopping your hate and your growth The only comfort I find Is trading feelings for words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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