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heres a song called disco:

 

Holy shit, I have to go to the disco

Fucking hell, gotta go to the disco

Disco yo

Disco yo

fuck yeah, Disco time!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fucking got fucked at the disco!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fell over and shit at the disco

 

Disco Disco

Fuck yeah

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heres a song called disco:

 

Holy shit, I have to go to the disco

Fucking hell, gotta go to the disco

Disco yo

Disco yo

fuck yeah, Disco time!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fucking got fucked at the disco!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fell over and shit at the disco

 

Disco Disco

Fuck yeah

 

your posts are legendary :rotfl:

 

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come under fire

from the forces in your head

and i, will live to see the day

when the voices in my mind

don't search and seek, and find

a better place

 

right now,

i'm too cold to be feeling

right now,

i'm too numb to be hearing

and now,

i'm too hurt to believe in

all they think they know

 

it's temporary

but i've signed up for extra time

and i, won't live to see the day

when the places i can hide

take reservations

while i find a brighter place

 

i've fallen too many times

to see the truth behind your eyes

i've told too many lies

to keep my head above water

so i'll let them crush me down again

 

right now,

i'm too cold to be feeling

right now,

i'm too numb to be hearing

and now,

i'm too hurt to believe in

all they think they know

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^ Stunning, absolutely beautiful!

 

 

heres a song called disco:

 

Holy shit, I have to go to the disco

Fucking hell, gotta go to the disco

Disco yo

Disco yo

fuck yeah, Disco time!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fucking got fucked at the disco!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Fell over and shit at the disco

 

Disco Disco

Fuck yeah

 

Another unforgettable classic!

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your opinion was,

thrown away with the rest of them

and your lies were,

believed like the best of them

pardon me i'll watch

as you make a mess of this all

 

but i hope you survive,

oh you'll survive

just to see you cry

 

i laughed along

and the last one was his own

the stories sold,

were better kissed than told

take aim, take cover

hit the road and i'll hit back

 

the way you walk

the way you walk away

the way you talk

with nothing to say

fight hard, fight hard

and i hope you survive

just to see you cry.

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your opinion was,

thrown away with the rest of them

and your lies were,

believed like the best of them

pardon me i'll watch

as you make a mess of this all

 

 

 

Sheesh.

 

 

I really hate you for doing that part, I wish I did it.

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I have way too many... so I will only post one now... more later... I guess:

 

I could say I was the first man to really go to the moon.

I could say I saved a whole town without a single goon.

I could say I took over an entire empire with a single spear.

I could say I’m many things, but let me make this clear.

I could say I was the one that stopped the Katrina victims from getting support.

I could say I was the one that brought Dread Scott to court.

I could say I was the one who dropped the first nuclear bomb.

I could say I was the one who messed up senior prom.

I could say I’m the one who drank the last beer.

I could say I’m many things, but let me make this clear.

 

If I said I was the one who killed JFK,

If I said I was the one who took your mother away,

If I said I was who made the dark rule over day,

If I said I was the one who put you up for prey,

If I said I was the one who will bring a gun to M.I.T,

Would you still respect me?

 

I could say I am many things, but I won’t lie.

I could say I am many things, but you won’t reply.

I could write down a poem to show you my love.

I could be the one who rose their hand JUST above yours.

I could be the one who made your mom fall asleep at the wheel.

 

 

It's not done yet... but I really like it.

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Flawed Scripture

 

You all deny the pain and the blood

of innocents spilled at the hands of your God

Witch hunts and holy crusades

Killing those that would not obey

Your crimes against man cannot be be ignored

Your whole fucking scripture is nothing but flawed

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

A glorified cult with your own twisted law

Living life on your knees, kneeling before

preachers of deception that thrive off of war

preachers of hate that demand more and more

but you're their slave 'till you get up off the floor

So rise from your knees and give them their war

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

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Flawed Scripture

 

You all deny the pain and the blood

of innocents spilled at the hands of your God

Witch hunts and holy crusades

Killing those that would not obey

Your crimes against man cannot be be ignored

Your whole fucking scripture is nothing but flawed

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

A glorified cult with your own twisted law

Living life on your knees, kneeling before

preachers of deception that thrive off of war

preachers of hate that demand more and more

but you're their slave 'till you get up off the floor

So rise from your knees and give them their war

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

:uhh::uhh:

i love it. Wow. So true.

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Flawed Scripture

 

You all deny the pain and the blood

of innocents spilled at the hands of your God

Witch hunts and holy crusades

Killing those that would not obey

Your crimes against man cannot be be ignored

Your whole fucking scripture is nothing but flawed

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

A glorified cult with your own twisted law

Living life on your knees, kneeling before

preachers of deception that thrive off of war

preachers of hate that demand more and more

but you're their slave 'till you get up off the floor

So rise from your knees and give them their war

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

Well what do you know, Sanguis Dominus does this as well.

 

 

Also, This is good :D!

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Now we're back to this.

Back to where we swore we'd never be again.

You screwed it up. All for what?

I wanna hit you just to see if you shed any tears,

to prove that you're still human.

You're not the person I remembered you to be.

 

 

It's not even finished. I'm gonna add more. It's pretty meh but... Whatevs. Haha.

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i just wrote this. its like a collection of 5 songs i wrote all mixed into one. =p

 

you took my hand you took my life

i gave it my all, oh i tried

its pathetic and its not endearing

to se me act like this.

 

yes i saw perfection...

yes i saw perfection and it made my heart race

yes i saw perfection it made my hands shake

 

after all you saved me

you saved me but you made me drown

you dont know it.

but you helped me get through it all

now im suffering silently on the ground

 

 

yes i saw perfection...

yes i saw perfection and it made my heart race

im not gunna fight anymore

its been long and i fell right to the floor

 

so watch me take my time as i walk away X3

watch me take my time

ohh

watch me take my time

 

 

 

 

okay not that great but it sounds way better wen i play guitar to it.

maybe later i'll post it.

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i just wrote this. its like a collection of 5 songs i wrote all mixed into one. =p

 

you took my hand you took my life

i gave it my all, oh i tried

its pathetic and its not endearing

to se me act like this.

 

yes i saw perfection...

yes i saw perfection and it made my heart race

yes i saw perfection it made my hands shake

 

after all you saved me

you saved me but you made me drown

you dont know it.

but you helped me get through it all

now im suffering ilently on the ground

 

 

yes i saw perfection...

yes i saw perfection and it made my heart race

im not gunna fight anymore

its been long and i fell right to the floor

 

so watch me take my time as i walk away X3

watch me take my time

ohh

watch me take my time

 

 

 

 

okay not that great but it sounds way better wen i play guitar to it.

maybe later i'll post it.

 

I like it.

A lot.

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Flawed Scripture

 

You all deny the pain and the blood

of innocents spilled at the hands of your God

Witch hunts and holy crusades

Killing those that would not obey

Your crimes against man cannot be be ignored

Your whole fucking scripture is nothing but flawed

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

A glorified cult with your own twisted law

Living life on your knees, kneeling before

preachers of deception that thrive off of war

preachers of hate that demand more and more

but you're their slave 'till you get up off the floor

So rise from your knees and give them their war

 

I forsee where this is heading

To a world of hate with you just spreading

Manipulative lies to enslave

to feed you the power that you crave

 

Wow, you completely described how I feel about the bible! Fantastic job! That is SO true. I hate religion SO much!

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Eh... made this a while ago... not that good...:

 

My heart has betrayed me.

It has led me astray.

It has made me believe in this thing called love.

It has made me give myself away.

It has trapped the thought of you in my mind.

It has let me believe.

But I won’t lose this time.

I know it will never be.

I will not let myself believe.

I am no one.

You are the light.

I will never let me believe

That we both can burn bright.

Just run. Run away from me.

I am only bringing you down.

Your life has promise.

You could become world renown.

I’ll just sit in my dark corner.

Watching you slip away.

But this is better for you.

It is better this way.

 

In my final dying breaths,

I will wish I did something.

But then I will realize

that I clipped my wing.

With the thought of you in my mind

I could do anything.

But knowing it will never be

broke down everything.

My whole life in pieces

hoping for some help.

Fuck that.

I’ll pick it up myself.

You were the wind beneath my wings.

But the wind that never was.

We were never there.

Nor will we ever be there.

 

So finish me.

Take the final piece of my heart.

You were my everything

But you fucking finish what you did start.

How could you of been my lifeline

If we never were?

I can’t think straight without you.

Everything is a blur.

When you lifted me up

It was all in my head

I’d rather stay down here,

Stay down here and rot instead.

As I will say

In my last breath

Better to have never gotten what you loved

Then to have lost it in the end.

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